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Natural killa vs pop lotty
Battle Rules:
8-12 Lines No Crew Votes No Biting No Hate No d/r 3-0 Ko Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-14-05 at 08:59 PM Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in. |
Pop Lotty has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-05 09:07 PM.
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Are you stupid, you really don't want beef with the great
I ain't seen a Killa this crazy since Norman Bates I'll fuck you up with these lines, then fuck ya family hoe So when I date ya mom...it won't be a MTV show Dude on my dick, I mean, is it a habit? Mad cuz he called Lotty out... ...and Lotty called him a fucking faggot. Ain't want u in E-Style, that's ya best accomplishment to date MY greatest was getting you kicked out the next day You's a fucking joke bitch, don't know where you got name son But if you a Natural Killa, I'm wonder who the fuck u inheriting from |
Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-05 04:32 PM.
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this shit's a mismatch..i ain't even tryin and lotty's still strugglin to hit back & he said he's gonna recycle.... ........so I already know he's gonna spit whack.... It's best he quites rap..cos his style being best dressed is still blank And hell...EVEN HE knows..that against me..he's left wit no "RANKS" And if I was a bitch like him......i'd be doing anything to stay outta sight cos Lotty described his "clit"......just to be able to say that he's "tight" ur own crew are the ones that get you blowed from ya head to shoes reason you a "G" is cos Marv "J" already showed that he's ahead of you* in this thread,you lose..I'm the one that loves to screech 'n trouble you only reason Lotty "End-V" so much is cause he never reach the W (envy) I could sit here all day,harssin him and just break his verses apart for miles cos Lotty the head of whackness...just look.........................he started E-style *-Pop Lotty getting merked 5-0 by Marv J |
This was feedback posted for Pop Lotty
Easy.............................................. ..
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^^Uh-Uh..?
uppin............................... |
This was feedback posted for Pop Lotty
lol @ sayin you goin recycle then droppin just about all personals...on RB, I would say that you got this shit easy, but we ARE on RV, So people may find his corny jokes kinda funny
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^^I'd battle Pop Lotty's whack ass on Rb too......
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uppin.............................................
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everything was easy to flip off so...........................
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............................vote. Fuck battling on Rapverse.com.
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Voted For: Natural killa
HONEST VOTING... Pop Lotty- Ok structure.. still fucked up but your had good flow some of the stuff didn't make sense in my opioin... i didn't like that you kept using your name over and over again. Like you didn't have much personals with it against natural killa.... Nothing stood out too much. just a lot of threats to me Natural killa - I like your style of punches they were pretty personal and the flow was good almost everthing made sense I could sit here all day,harssin him and just break his verses apart for miles cos Lotty the head of whackness...just look.........................he started E-style lol i like how you ended that but ........so I already know he's gonna spit whack.... We've all heard that one before... maybe you could try something new. You had this battle won though good job. |
Voted For: Pop Lotty
Are you stupid, you really don't want beef with the great I ain't seen a Killa this crazy since Norman Bates NICE PLAY OF HIS NAME, SOLID PUNCH I'll fuck you up with these lines, then fuck ya family hoe So when I date ya mom...it won't be a MTV show NICE BASIC BUT EFFECTIVE Dude on my dick, I mean, is it a habit? Mad cuz he called Lotty out... ...and Lotty called him a fucking faggot. LMAO IM FEELIN THIS BAR, NICE FLIP Ain't want u in E-Style, that's ya best accomplishment to date MY greatest was getting you kicked out the next day NICE PERSONAL BUT OTHERWISE MEH You's a fucking joke bitch, don't know where you got name son But if you a Natural Killa, I'm wonder who the fuck u inheriting from DECENT SOLID CLOSER, NICE VERSE. __________________________________________________ this shit's a mismatch..i ain't even tryin and lotty's still strugglin to hit back & he said he's gonna recycle.... ........so I already know he's gonna spit whack.... NICE FLOW AND GOOD PUNCH, SOLID OPENER. It's best he quites rap..cos his style being best dressed is still blank And hell...EVEN HE knows..that against me..he's left wit no "RANKS" THIS WAS OK PERSONAL, NO HARD PUNCH THOUGH And if I was a bitch like him......i'd be doing anything to stay outta sight cos Lotty described his "clit"......just to be able to say that he's "tight" PLAYED. ur own crew are the ones that get you blowed from ya head to shoes reason you a "G" is cos Marv "J" already showed that he's ahead of you* SORTA FORCED BUT STILL A DECENT PERSONAL, THE CONCEPT SEEMED KINDA FORCED THOUGH in this thread,you lose..I'm the one that loves to screech 'n trouble you only reason Lotty "End-V" so much is cause he never reach the W (envy) SORTA FORCED BUT WAS A NICE CONCEPT AND A DECENT PUNCH, I LIKE THIS ONE. I could sit here all day,harssin him and just break his verses apart for miles cos Lotty the head of whackness...just look.........................he started E-style MEH, ITS A PERSONAL BUT SORTA FAKE CAUSE ESTYLE AINT EXACTLY SHIT. __________________________________________________ _____________________ I'll fuck you up with these lines, then fuck ya family hoe So when I date ya mom...it won't be a MTV show Dude on my dick, I mean, is it a habit? Mad cuz he called Lotty out... ...and Lotty called him a fucking faggot. 2 BARS OUTA 5. vs this shit's a mismatch..i ain't even tryin and lotty's still strugglin to hit back & he said he's gonna recycle.... ........so I already know he's gonna spit whack.... in this thread,you lose..I'm the one that loves to screech 'n trouble you only reason Lotty "End-V" so much is cause he never reach the W (envy) 2 BARS OUTA 6 __________________________________________________ __________________ nk, PUTTING A PLAYED PUNCH IN THERE WAS A BAD MOVE, YOUR OPENER WAS SOLID AND I WAS EXPECTIN MORE...YOU CAME WEAK BY YOUR STANDARDS v./ POP FOR BEING MORE CONSISTANT AND WITTIER. NO HATE, RTF IN SIG ASAP. |
Voted For: Natural killa
this shit's a mismatch..i ain't even tryin and lotty's still strugglin to hit back & he said he's gonna recycle.... ........so I already know he's gonna spit whack.... using punches from quotes are ok, but delivery and punch were weak.. It's best he quits rap..cos his style being best dressed is still blank And hell...EVEN HE knows..that against me..he's left wit no "RANKS" ok personal, cud be better.. And if I was a bitch like him......i'd be doing anything to stay outta sight cos Lotty described his "clit"......just to be able to say that he's "tight" played concept, weak flip.. ur own crew are the ones that get you blowed from ya head to shoes reason you a "G" is cos Marv "J" already showed that he's ahead of you* ok, seemed wack at first, but i took a second look and got it, so meh...it was ok.. in this thread,you lose..I'm the one that loves to screech 'n trouble you only reason Lotty "End-V" so much is cause he never reach the W (envy) played, u said in my battle that W/L lines are played, and now you use one.. I could sit here all day,harssin him and just break his verses apart for miles cos Lotty the head of whackness...just look.........................he started E-style lol. decent personal.. damn, this was another weak verse....seriously you are battling too much, take a break...punches were ok in places, some played concepts and you had weak wording and delivery on a couple of bars...nuthin overly creative here, couple of nice personals but really one of ure weaker verses. OVERALL 5/10 Are you stupid, you really don't want beef with the great I ain't seen a Killa this crazy since Norman Bates meh, this was herbish and weak.. I'll fuck you up with these lines, then fuck ya family hoe So when I date ya mom...it won't be a MTV show this concept is played to fuck.. Dude on my dick, I mean, is it a habit? Mad cuz he called Lotty out... ...and Lotty called him a fucking faggot. lol...decent punch, lol.. Ain't want u in E-Style, that's ya best accomplishment to date MY greatest was getting you kicked out the next day lol, decent personal here.. You's a fucking joke bitch, don't know where you got name son But if you a Natural Killa, I'm wonder who the fuck u inheriting from not feelin this, too weak.. wow, weak shit...you had like 2 decent bars and they were not the best i've seen...u can do WAAAYYY better than this, u had some played concepts, weak herbish like punches and this is as if you didnt try and just put the first weak shit that came to your head...no real creativity, the flow was probalby the best part of ure verse...OVERALL 4/10 weak battle....meh, V/ - Natural killa |
Voted For: Natural killa
pop lotty-your verse was pretty plain you had punches,personals and shit..but it was all to simple...you need to complex and shit..you have not outstanding multis or nething big..but meh, overall 5/10 nat.killa-your verse was pretty good...had...some good punches and personals...good the links there funny shit.....lol...... good flow and multis..overall 8/10 v/natural killa |
Damn yo, so Forced means Complex now. iight.
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^shut the fuck up
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Voted For: Pop Lotty
this shit's a mismatch..i ain't even tryin and lotty's still strugglin to hit back & he said he's gonna recycle.... ........so I already know he's gonna spit whack.... vs. Are you stupid, you really don't want beef with the great I ain't seen a Killa this crazy since Norman Bates Dude on my dick, I mean, is it a habit? Mad cuz he called Lotty out... ...and Lotty called him a fucking faggot. Ain't want u in E-Style, that's ya best accomplishment to date MY greatest was getting you kicked out the next day NK, your shit was either corny or played, I think if you take more time you would be better, but your just flipping played concepts and wording them worse then the original lines. Pop, meh, you came better, stilll, I could tell you really weren't trying, either way you pulled it off. Wtf @ if you lose, meh. v/pop |
^^^That is a crew vote...BUT...being as I'm in a good mood,and i trust Jack....I'll leave it :)
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Atleast you aint a bitch.
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This was feedback posted for Pop Lotty
I'll fuck you up with these lines, then fuck ya family hoe
So when I date ya mom...it won't be a MTV show Dude on my dick, I mean, is it a habit? Mad cuz he called Lotty out... ...and Lotty called him a fucking faggot. You's a fucking joke bitch, don't know where you got name son But if you a Natural Killa, I'm wonder who the fuck u inheriting from vs. It's best he quites rap..cos his style being best dressed is still blank And hell...EVEN HE knows..that against me..he's left wit no "RANKS I'm in Lotty's squad, so I can't vote.. but he took this battle quite easily. His verse was just way better. Word. |
This was feedback posted for Natural killa
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natural seemed to have more solid punches. but he cares alot more about this battle than pop lotty. |
Voted For: Natural killa
Natural killa - Good spit, you had a solid flow, some good personals and hard punches. Best Line - this shit's a mismatch..i ain't even tryin and lotty's still strugglin to hit back & he said he's gonna recycle.... ........so I already know he's gonna spit whack.... Worst Line - none Pop Lotty - Good flow, punches were ok, some iight punches as well. Best Line - Are you stupid, you really don't want beef with the great I ain't seen a Killa this crazy since Norman Bates Worst Line - Ain't want u in E-Style, that's ya best accomplishment to date MY greatest was getting you kicked out the next day OVERALL - Good battle, but NK took this wit the better punches and personals. I liked his wordplay better also. Lotty you came to weak in this battle. Should have tried harder. Vote - Natural Killa |
Voted For: Natural killa
Natural killa this shit's a mismatch..i ain't even tryin and lotty's still strugglin to hit back & he said he's gonna recycle.... ........so I already know he's gonna spit whack.... ^cool opener, good using what he said against him 6/10 It's best he quites rap..cos his style being best dressed is still blank And hell...EVEN HE knows..that against me..he's left wit no "RANKS" ^okay okay, I see the point...cool...6/10 And if I was a bitch like him......i'd be doing anything to stay outta sight cos Lotty described his "clit"......just to be able to say that he's "tight" ^lmao, shit made me laugh, good wordplay formed into hardhitting punch 9/10 ur own crew are the ones that get you blowed from ya head to shoes reason you a "G" is cos Marv "J" already showed that he's ahead of you* ^haha, good personal, formed it quite nice in fact 8/10[/b] in this thread,you lose..I'm the one that loves to screech 'n trouble you only reason Lotty "End-V" so much is cause he never reach the W (envy) ^aight bar, nothing too special but still decent shit though 6/10 I could sit here all day,harssin him and just break his verses apart for miles cos Lotty the head of whackness...just look.........................he started E-style [b]^lmao, nice closer, finished em off 7/10 Total: 42/60 = 70%, overall solid battle, good punches with personal touch to them. Good vocab as well, flow was on point...good shit... Pop Lotty Are you stupid, you really don't want beef with the great I ain't seen a Killa this crazy since Norman Bates ^good wordplay in last line, first is bleh 5/10 I'll fuck you up with these lines, then fuck ya family hoe So when I date ya mom...it won't be a MTV show ^good shit, liked it...7/10 Dude on my dick, I mean, is it a habit? Mad cuz he called Lotty out... ...and Lotty called him a fucking faggot. ^uhm not really feeling it actually 4/10 Ain't want u in E-Style, that's ya best accomplishment to date MY greatest was getting you kicked out the next day ^nice bar right here, chuckled at it...8/10 You's a fucking joke bitch, don't know where you got name son But if you a Natural Killa, I'm wonder who the fuck u inheriting from ^good closer as well, 8/10 Total: 32/50 = 64%, I feel you didn't try that much actually, it showed in your bars. Picked it up a little towards the end but it lacked consistency actually. What you did do right was quite solid in fact. Vote: Natural Killa |
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