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::..Post Up How Your Feeling About Your Day, Your Topic, If You Get Beef With Someone, If You Need Something Explained To You. This Is The Chatroom For The Verbal Imagery Tournament..:: Enjoy! :thumbup: ~R~ |
im feelin shit.........
im over £30,000 in debt......... n im declarin myself bankrupt...... so im fukin suicidal rite now..... thas sum real emotion rite there. |
My Topic Is Alittle Played...
The Whole Heaven, Hell Type Scenario Is Getting Old... But I've Gota A Tite Metaphorical Storyline For It... But Still, Im Getting Kinda Tired Of Those Types Of Topics... |
Blah fuckers add me back in i was like 5-1 or somethin only kid to beat me was Illtalic
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DV can take my spot cuz im dropping out...peace
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LoL Figures.....You're Scared Of Poppa Kap..
You Knew My Prediction Is Right.....You Talking A Lotta Shit..Why Don't You Just Stay and Back It Up? ~R~ |
B/c im too busy...and i didnt talk any shit...just replace me...
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Look No Hate LI...I Was Just Trying To Piss You Off So You Would Wanna Prove Me Wrong and Stay In The Tourney..
Well Its Too Late To Replace You Right Now So Apoth IS Gonna Get A Free-Ride To The Next Round. ~R~ |
Blah..ill drop...but win or lose...i want out...
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damn, i was hella lookin forward to battlin u
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Aight Well LI....Since Your Dropping Out...Either Way If You Lose or Win....Poppa Kap Moves On...
Thats What I'm Stuck With..Its Not Fair To Give Sumone Else Your Spot... ~R~ |
Wow The No-Shows Were Ridiculous. I Am Moding The Topical League Now...There Will Be A Lot of Changes In That League.. This Tourney Will Be Run The Same and Finished Fairly. Good Job To Those Who Showed....Nice Spits! ~R~ |
Where'd my battle go?..
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I Had To Delete It.....It Was The One Battle I Fucked Up When I Was Moving Battles To The Closed Battle Threads..
But You Still Got The Win For It.... Sorry For That Mistake. ~R~ |
WTF LI showed i thought he werent?
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Yea..You Just Got Too Big-Headed..He Dropped At 11:58 PM Yesterday.
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yo my battle with Flow2carzy i dont understand the topic
Topic:Intwined Time |
^^Takes A Little Smarts To Understand It...^^^^
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Daym, That Sucks I Got Outed In The First Fucking Round...
I Still Dont Understand How He Beat Me... By Verse Was More In Depth, Longer And Just Better... All I Saw That He Had Over On Me Was Structure... Whatever Though, Its Just Pretty Shitty... Lol Should Have A Wild Card Round... .One. |
ay do u mean entwined for my topic... cuz intwined isnt a word
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Yea W/e.....Intwined aka Entwined...Same Diffrence..
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topic Schizophrenia so hard but I managed to key it unbelievable I guess I'm undeniably smart eh? |
lol hahaha.......we hsould have wild card os hwne R-rated murders me plus I have no time
WHyd Akwordz be such a pussy and cry when he looses when I loose I congratulate my opponent......his structure was wack hows he od that in ntobook? |
Holy Fucking Christ...
You CAN NOT TYPE... Haha, I Misspell Words Sometimes Too, But Daym... Chase You Like A Step Above Illiteracy... .One. |
^LoL
Chase Just Drop Dope Pimpin...I Suck At Topicals :-D ~R~ |
Blah i been sick and the night i was supposed to post RV didnt work....I want back in ;)
Ill 3 way with someone |
I Can't Let You back In...I Would Have To Let Everyone Else Who No-Showed Back In..
Not Happening... You Were In The Forum...I Saw Your Name In The Forum...I'm Sorry but I Can't Do Nothing..Wait Till Next Round. ~R~ |
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Honestly, I would congratulate you if I thought you really won, But I didn't. your verse was fuckin horrible. come on man, you wrote a verse about winning the olympics, with Pride as a topic... that's something my 5 year old nephew would think of. You came up with the most baaaasssssssiiiiiiiiicccccccc concept imaginable. your shit took absolutely no creativity what-so-ever to write. nothing thought provoking. your shit was like reading a 4th grade short story. Besides that, look at your weak AA BB CC DD EE FF rhymescheme... in which you only rhymed the last syllable of the last word of your line... weak status. The only thing you had on me is structure... wow. good job. Look beyond that, and you aint got shit on me. Where's your substance? You're nowhere near my level on that verse, let alone anything I actually spend time on. You couldn't drop that shit anywhere exept a dickriding board & have people think it's half decent man, and that's being real with you. Pride the ultimate form of love, a great sense of belief displayed when out olypmpians proudly wore victories wreath or when a young male child is adored after his birth joyful cries of love surround his fragile existence, inherit the earth .:Pride to represent:. As I kneel my vision focuses on the most chrished prize, gold Before the gunshot time completely slows and nerves take hold As my moment nears my muscles twitches with anticipation One moment to start the run for glorification of my nation As the shot rang my ears, my muscles keyed for this exact event My vision narrowed to just the track, my opponents irrelevent My heart pounded, harder than ever, my breaths sharp and quick The end of the track nearing, and competition getting thick Only the track, my body, and air fuel me to continue my quest THe deed done, my lifes accomplishment, world records I have left The ceromony in which they play the most beautiful song where my heart resides I can only cry with joy as I accpet gold, the nations pride .:Pride to Defend:. As we move towards un-know enemy quarters, we silently wait Our lives in the hands of leaders, enemies, and unshure fate A simple mistake and were spotted a exchange of fire ensued bullets sprayed the sand, confusion created, unshure of what to do the next day unshure, probability of survival is close to zero but no matter what Ill never stop fighting as Americas Hero Pride's when you stay in the fight not wantin'a save your own life By how you were raised & what ya know is right, they can tell humble while you're humming show tunes, to show you, you're moving up, be proud- no one likes a show-boat, stay in your zone without remaining local, concentrate, and maybe some day we'll know you, Stay on track, not just talkin bout laying vocals, Change the whole world without changing yourself, Money makes your world go 'round, but not everywhere accepts cash, Resent-mant from what were then-friends'll make things hopeless for when you do the hard work, n got stuff to show for it, Shit's tough, and you're supposed to ignore it, stuffed upto your throat holdin in emotions, going through the motions, won-dring how close you are to ex-ploding, is it too much to hold in, or just what you got going for you, seems like no one 'round heres pulling for you, no girls or nothings falling for you or calling for you, so you packed up your pride & swallowed it whole, Decided to follow the mold, tried it until,your upscale lifestyle blinded you pride, ya feel it's unreal- up 'til your blood spilled, never was one to know how being jeal-ous feels, just stayed on the grind, feelin like rusty wheels, while i ride in the hurst,eyes were closed as i learned my survival was cursed, read my bible at first - took my time and it worked, for the first time my pride didn't hurt, still it got worse as i desired and flirted with the idea of getting sent to the fire n burning, Luring my burdens out, but they're getting hid further in, i was sure, seeing what they do to me, heaven wouldn't let me in when the doorbell rings Now i dont know what your personal hell brings, Mine's selling pride & opinons for 2 cents - spare change, to pay off this overwhelming debt to society cuz I wont change….. I don’t care what they say… Go ahead and lose me in the shuffle, I’m elusive and I want to be viewed useless, just to taunt you, fool you, then embark on my travels through the underworld… Maybe they'll have somethin'a be proud of while looking down from above judge for yourself. |
ok....I dont really care................your verse was shitty bro but I didtn wanan hurt ya feelins lol no im playin but hcill man..and forget it...plus my verse was rushed I know its hsitty by my standards
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LMAO its sad u knwo u would have lost....Haha u gotta take a no-show win.....Face it oveR-Rated,Your not the shit but a meer cheater.you can come back b/c of something u made up but i have a actualy reason.And you didnt see me on b/c it didnt work for me....kthnxbye |
^Herb...Your Sucha A Whore..Trust Me..You'll Have Your Re-match When UE Faces AI..
Just Make Sure To Drop This Time...And Yes I Saw Your Name Online...Don't Make Fucking Excuses...I Closed The Battle 25 Minutes After Deadline..Waiting For You To Drop. Your Wack...and Get A Life Pussy.. ~R~ |
I smell sizzling hot beef....
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Lmao u call me a pussy and u take a no show win? Wow someone is dumb.You are a disgrace just for tryin to call someone a pussy,and i wasnt online i got no proof but either do u.
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i can be ur superman...word...yo dq manip. shes late... worrrrd
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why did this suddenly get so slow...
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Inactive!
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it got so slow cuz my battle hasnt been closed...
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any way I can get in this shit...??
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nope Its a torunament
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