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Da Problem Child 06-21-08 09:44 PM

Da Problem Child vs meltdown
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-24-08 at 09:44 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 06-21-08 09:49 PM

Da Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-08 09:49 PM.

Da Problem Child 06-22-08 07:24 PM

when it comes to this battle you are way out numbered
you are from england, so you will get the treament of the crockadile hunter
you should talk to the legends of rapverse, hopefully they'll teach
or go back to what you're use too and tie your arms to your feet
why do people battle you? i really dont know why
because this battle is the result of a dog against fly
ur gay and every one can vouch as my witness
because it is made clear when you say "mate" after every
sentence
ill speak your language: you devouring me, NIGRO PLEASE
this is rapverse USA,....not the EURO LEAGUE

System 06-23-08 02:34 PM

Meltdown has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-23-08 02:34 PM.

Brydon 06-23-08 03:25 PM

Dude be 5-3 up in his battles-shits got me thinking,
i smell a few alias's typing this lames votes in.
Hang up ya coat,put ur mic in the bin,
u wont need it but im sure ur pikey mum is ready to cash in.
Ima meltdown on you quick like ash on a sig,
il help the problem die quick,coz this kid needs no cancer he already sick.
I smoke heavy-no time to carry cancer,
illness is jus another job coz ima p/t human programmer.
Im on a rush, but the 10 lines be the ending,
its only 4 bars i need i guess is the message that im sending.

Done in 5mins,on someones comp as mine is being fixed. Peace

Godz Child 06-24-08 01:00 AM

This was feedback posted for Da Problem Child
 
this is no different then the other battle you ate him but im not gonna vote because he is nothing

YungStaccz 06-26-08 09:46 AM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

I give this to DPC because he really excuted the england thing. Meldown (no offence) but you need to practice before you battle someone like DPC again.4/10 multies but you still won this


V/DPC

Brydon 07-10-08 02:30 PM

uuuuuuuuuuppppppppp and cccccllllllllllooooooooosssssseeeeee

Young Fear 07-10-08 05:08 PM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

Problem got it.

or go back to what you're use too and tie your arms to your feet

funny

speak your language: you devouring me, NIGRO PLEASE
this is rapverse USA,....not the EURO LEAGUE

Good ending.

I liked your opening meltdown but that was it.


Keep doing yall thing

Fly-E 07-10-08 07:44 PM

Voted For: Meltdown

I like this one and i say good wordplay im not gunna say u could've took ur time seein that ur comp is down so good job for a 5 min verse!

Dickard. 07-12-08 12:36 PM

Voted For: Meltdown

i think u win..just my opinion..not worthsaying why

Brydon 07-14-08 07:10 AM

cheers 4 votes dudes, uppin to close peace........

Brydon 07-16-08 07:22 AM

come on girls uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppiiinnnn

Brydon 07-17-08 06:35 PM

Yo holla at this sum..............................

Brydon 07-23-08 07:44 PM

come on vote plz cheers...........................

BoRN SwaGG 07-24-08 06:02 PM

Voted For: Meltdown

Melt down got my vote cous his punches were little bit better and nice personal's..not the best battle but it will do

Nitrogen 08-01-08 01:15 PM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

to be honest, this was one of the worst battles ive heard in a min. no disrespect but id feel like i wasnt being honest with you if i said either of ya verses was hot. you can get this vote DQ'd if u want because all i really have to say is i felt the only punchline that was midly sick between either verses was da problem childs closer, i felt just about every other aspect of both verses was wack so DPC gets the vote

v/Da problem child

Brydon 08-03-08 12:20 PM

up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!

Brydon 08-08-08 06:07 PM

.................................................u uuuuppppppppp..................................... ..

LPMNDCTE 08-08-08 08:05 PM

Voted For: Meltdown

I believe that Da Problem Child had a better verse because of the creativity in his verse. However, but people need to elevate a lot more. Meltdown's verse was a little more basic and need more development.


Vote - Da Problem Child

Brydon 08-13-08 09:16 AM

one more vote peeps

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M&rk 08-22-08 04:13 PM

This was feedback posted for Da Problem Child
 
wow, both of u guys dropped terrible shit. tru story

scanz 08-24-08 05:01 PM

Voted For: Meltdown

ight, this goes to meltdown cus frankly... he had better punches...but over all both of you should have done your homework and gotten some personals in there and created better more complex punches... that dog and fly line was garbage... everybody knows that a dog will never catch a fly. size isnt everything buddy... remember that.


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