All Newbs Read!
 

okay...i just got done readin some shit in frontlines cuz i was bored,
and i haven't been in frontlines for months. The shit i see in there
is ridiculous so i'm gonna give u all some pointers. I know we have
Wackness Emergency center, but that isn't kept up to date. So its
up to yall whether to listen or not.


First Off:

Structure

with structure theres various styles to choose from in the field of
being elite and advanced writing. So i will show u the up-to-date
versions and the version thats still effective. I will also show u
what not to use.


structure should not be used:

blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah/
blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah/

not end a line with a /

blah blah multi blah multi blah multi blah
blah~multi~multi~blah~blah blah blah multi~extended blah

there is a such thing of too much multies in text. u can use
those in audio but using them in text is not only considered gay
but loses power for the punch. also, do not extend the lines


structure that is considerable to use

read some of the battles from battlers such as Evolve, Baron,
Trapt Wit, G.Hod, etc...

this will show u different styles of structure to use effectively.

for example:

blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah setup
blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah punch
(next word in this line here should rhyme off of the last word
used in the punch)

thats a common structure thats still effective

another example:

blah blah blah...blah blah blah..blah blah blah
blah blah blah blah blah blah...
...blah blah blah

[b] okay..this is just an example that shouldn't be used my newbs
right off back..this style is when u elevate so u don't mess it up.
notice the .... but u don't want to use too many of those fillers.
also notice the change up...though u see three lines...its actually
the setup and the punch. the ... in the second line end with ... and
in the third line begin with ... making it one line. just don't focus
on this too much.


okay...thats it for right now. This is on structure. maybe another
time i will post something on punches and setups and wordplay,
which u all have to learn big time. just use this to help u out and
helping u elevate. hope it helped.


Goodluck



13th

Post in Tutorials maybe..?

lol naw itll be more seen here an ya i think noobz gettin newer on all boards

Im not on a really newbie level..but, I already knew this..but it's always good to take advice..thanks for your time...I guess..

Structure also depends on how you 'rap'

You can stretch like penskills
or go midget lines like sureal

just find whats comphortable for you

Exactly...just to conform to a style because other people use it is bullshit.

Nicely Organized...little validity. This should be removed. I'd call it a good starting point...but it's only a good starting point for those who it will apply to.

We need more 'structure' posts for text

this is definitely a great post

.......

SHUT THE FUCK UP! Don't like it.. Don't read it..

You act like you're Gods gift to hip hop 13th.

^^or hes just helping people elevate...
consider helpin peeps for god sake

Hmmm that explain this thread really good :thumbup:

Ill give textcee the best tip... go cop a $5 dollar mic

^^hes helpin newb's like you and you throw it bak in his face....
fuk em 13th.....dnt help agen......

and for your info, he dus hav a mic and he is audio so ur in trouble

^ i know 13th does... i was talking to the newB textcees... dont jump to conclusions kid

lol, thanks for the tutorial. this shit will help me a bunch yo

kid??....hmmm

i bet u were talkin to the newb textcees.....

lmfao dont feel i need to respond n e more but seems u have promblem wit the context of what i write the "kid" was to u

lol.......fair enuff kid........
woteva but i was jus sayin appreciate 13th for helpin newb's like yourself

WTF?!...gods gift to hip hop?...sorry...i don't even see
myself as that cockwrestler...this was seriously to help
newbs..

appreciate the support Fiorz..


uno

swear thats the funniest post ive ever read

yea.. this is to help newbs that need practice on structure.. thank u 13th.. but unfortunately i already knew this.. but thanks anyways man..

okay...seriously Alkatrakz...my dick hurts...




























so stop riding it...gay ass cyber stalker

How many times have you seen a "newb" click "NEWBS PLEASE READ".. Very rarely.. This doesn't even belong in E.I.

u just don't inspire me

^Go feed your kids or something.. =P

what kids?....i think u need to get ur personals strait buddy..u gotta
keep up wit the times...


and go wish u can be in the states...

damn, hows everyone gonna jump down his throat for trying to help some peeps out. They need it, go read some frontlines battles and you would probably start one of these threads too. You fucking people. Good job 13th, keep it up.

I was actually born a US citizen? Get YOUR personals straight buddy.

No kid? :rolleyes:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...84&page=1&pp=40

hmm...look harder now around RB...and u'll see how that was a
joke...tsk tsk tsk...i let kids like u use fake ass personals on me..

but oh well...


do me a favor though...seeing how ur following me around and harassing
me...


how about...














U keep ur Queer Eye for This Strait Guy diverted somewhere else?





thanks

^That just proves you're a waste of life.. You might as well be Tonya Montana with a dick. Where else have I been harassing you? Oh that's right! No where.. Puh-lease, you're pathetic trying to son me.

um..why would i have to son u?...when u already sonned urself?


saying how many newbs come and peep this?...well...ur in this
thread arent u?....and then wanna hate on me cuz i wanted to
help u out...lol....get a grip

I think March comes before April. . Hence me being here longer than you.

I Think Water Tastes Like Water.

which is sad...cuz u still suck....damn...elevate newb

I do things outside of a rap board.. I post here mainly out of interest for hip hop in general.. Sorry I'm not a elite NETCEE like you.. I write things for fun, not to be the best..

The sad thing is.. you think you're better than me..

whoa..thanks for that knowledge..that really helped..tha stucture part of it
Thank you..you guys look like you know what you are talking about

^Hi 13th.

I don't get it..I am not "13th"

now peep the IP address homo...Inspire....get off the johnson..
and i am better than u

Oblique, is Wise ways..

Out of curisoity...how have you managed to cop 3000+ posts in under a year.