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Datruth29 vs The Black Plague
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Good luck man... Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-30-04 at 07:48 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 05:51 PM.
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Datruth29 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 05:52 PM.
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Structure switch up...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=134665 ^^^^^ Datruths Pic ^^^^ Those 20+ wins you got is nice, but your rhymes wont get you respected... You only beat me because i came half assed... ....And you were just less wack than i expected You can see i'm immortal, 8 straight wins, yet u still try to kill this... But man you dont have the right to talk shit... ....when you look like the obese version of will smith Me and you know the only reason u won our last battle was cuz of his d/r fag votes.. But when his little d/r boys aint around... .....He's like W. Brady from chapelle show, this little "bitch" just "chokes" Imma put this kid up in "Smoke", send signals to him and his whole crew... That even when you suck the mods dicks... ....They still aint gonna change the polls for you* Kid was too much of a pussy, so he thought he'd join the army to make him tough... "Be all you can be" is what they say.... ....But they told him he just wasn't enough Already got over 1000 posts? Kid your verse show that you still a rookie... Just look at his lines and bars... ....More stretched than his own moms pussy |
the * i had was because he has been complaining to the mods about his battles, and the polls are getting changed around, he was 22-4, now he's like 26-2... see what im sayin?
And my struc might be off but i was tryin somethin new... |
I've Heard it Before, So I'mma leave this Jerk On the Floor
Caught em Bitchin in Bitch Slapped Coz I Merked Him Before http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137974 I put that 1 on his record, You're just a Sorry Bitch In rap, you're more like your mom, coz you Hardley Spit I'll make this kid stop rappin, make em Sing Songs, Ya'll I'll "Back Hand" him across the table, like a Ping Pong Ball I'm way more Furocious, yo crew is like weed, I'm the Dopest Giving "Commadments", if you're The Black Plague, I'm Moses In the first battle, I koed you with more Manuvers Threw Punches to Swelled u, no wonder you're a "Sore" Loser I accepted the battle yesterday, u prolly went home to write Or maybe he got some rhymes from a Canibus Web Site Either way, you'll get ran like Red Lights, Ok Wise Guy It's like he went shopping for watches, Bitch tryna "Buy Time" But with this Bright Shine, I Blind Eyes, So Take That U got a bermuda triangle flow, yo talent left and never Came Back... Bitch |
And no, I don't complain to administraters.. Only if people d/r, and when real people vote, then usually if i'm better, i get the vote.. but the link I gave explains some personals, I Ko i gave him... and the hardley spit punch, meant that his mom swallows (hardley spits), and he hardley spits flows.. a play on wrods, ya know..
uppin this bitch.... |
Man you know you only beat me because it was one of my 1st battles, i was just a noob then... You tried to take advantage of a noob, wat a bitch
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whatever... let the people vote on this one.. i really don't care who wins, as long as the votes are honest.. now stop bitchin about how i merked you the last time..
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Voted For: Datruth29
Da Truth- Punches Were Good And Personals Decent, Flow Was On Point And Were Play Was Ok.. The Black Plague- Punches Were Ok Here And There, Had A Personal In There, Wasnt Feelin Your Structure... And Flow Was Decent Punches- Da Truth Personals- Tie Flow- The Black Plague Wordplay- Da Truth Metaphor- The Black Plague Originality- The Black Plague Multis - Da Truth Structure- Da Truth Final Vote--- Da Truth Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/newreply.php |
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Voted For: Datruth29
this battle was close but ima have to give this to sonic the punches were alot better n more original The black plague's flow was good too but his flow got kinda weak at the end return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137874 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136408 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136612 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Datruth29
Flow - Sonic, plagues was stretched way out Punches - Plague, he barely got it he just had funnier shit Personals - Tie, it was about even Multies - Sonic by a mile Vocab - None, pretty basic words from both ends Originality - Sonic, bermuda triangle thing got it...this was close Win - Sonic, won more categories and I just couldnt get into plagues verse with all the extra syllables in there. |
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You little bitch nigga, you took yo pic off just cuz i dissed it...
And he does look like a fat will smith, belive it.. |
Voted For: Datruth29
I HAD TO VOTE FOR SONIC COS HE HAD A BETTER PUNCHES AND HIS PERSONALS WERE NICE... YOUR STRUCTURE IS GOOD SO IS YOUR FLOW AND YOUR WORDS AND VOCAB AINT THAT BAD... tHE BLACK PLAGUE YOUR VERSE WAS OK BUT NOT THE BEST IVE SEEN... YOUR STRUCTURE AND FLOW WAS WAY OFF VOTE GOES TO SONIC Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: The Black Plague
ima have to give this one to black plague becuz on the thread fo the pic it says that datruth edited it........so that means the personal musta really gotten to him......... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Hey, it's strategy, he tried to low blow, I don't have his pic, and he tried to Plus ain't nothin at all wrong with how I look, I'm cute, i get hoes, but for all I know, you could of looked for my pic, you didn't see it, so you got mad coz you're gay.. i get it.. d/r talk about me.. but yo vote is being Dqed, that wasn't an explaination at all.. |
Voted For: Datruth29
SONIC gets this one. He had some creative lines in his. Buy Time, Moses, Sore Loser, all tite. This made the punches hit harder. Black had some good shit in his too. But I was just feelin Sonics flow more. Just fix ya structure a bit by making your lines a lil shorter. Good shit tho. Sonic gets tha vote with punches and a good structure. Vote-SONIC |
Voted For: Datruth29
the black plaque cuz he didnt suck and he had flow punches and structure Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Datruth29
well . . . umm do i have to say much. . sonic one its obvious. . metaphors well used, multis, a good personal, other personal punches cus they came from him being a sore loser, overall he got killed by every line, , nice one. . .keep it up. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: The Black Plague
HIs verse was just better Sonic your opener sucked and punches we're played Black you had a decent verse with some nice punches and personal i would break it down but im too lazy sonic wtf is this? I put that 1 on his record, You're just a Sorry Bitch In rap, you're more like your mom, coz you Hardley Spit lines like this dont hit hard at all v/ |
Voted For: The Black Plague
blacks verse was more original and had better punches...the other guy came wit them elementary rhymes outta dr.seus....but black gets my vote for stronger punches and originality Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Fuck both of ya'll, he must of begged for ya'll to vote, after he begged for this to be reopened..
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Voted For: Datruth29
all i can saw is WOW! dope drop by SONIC, you always seem to amaze me, wicked opener and wicked closer, great flow, great structure, great punches and multis, great vocab, you kicked ass black - well dude you had a good verse too, opener and closer weren't that good, mom jokes old and played, you had good flow and structure yourself but sonic had better everything v/SONIC |
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