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Adam 01-09-06 02:46 AM

12. FuxJustAWord vs. 22. Daubs
 
Check in by Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.

16 Lines.

No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.

Good Luck..

Come Dope.

Daubs 01-09-06 01:58 PM

check .

TeamOne 01-09-06 08:20 PM

checkinnnnnnnnn

Daubs 01-13-06 01:58 PM

ya girl was stringin you on, until she fuckin hung you
and fuck fightin me you faggot, you aint kung, fu
pull ya nostrils and leave em numb too,might not notice?
only cause your ugly as fuck, and even your face nose it
Told him in PLL, he aint good, il smoke his ish n blaze it
butthe cunt was STILL game after i told him wordplays shit
i know you aint liked, i hate you there just the facts
I dont even need to judge cause cos he justice wack.
fuck rap he's so wack. but WILL change the world in a way
cos lubricant sales will rocket when fux turns so gay
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oh shit, not posting lines and just dots, now my flows dead?
na..just means im takin it with less lines, like newbie cokeheads

TeamOne 01-14-06 01:24 AM

yea, i just got home, like 20 minutes ago

He aint hittin those trees, but Double-D has another infatuation
Cuz Daubs keeps holdin on to that Chronic........ masturbation
Cause Danny with drugs and girls, nope, he wants to be on point
He says She Hate Me... cuz he's even scared of Spike Lees joint
Im here to report this murder since u got me here testin the worse
Cuz Im focused wit 20/20... while dan rather CBS in his verse
Ill put this bitch in a herse, Just leave before i retire this o' g
cuz even ya sig is tellin ur punk ass the round that you wont see
My hits always land, leave this man on the floor with bruised pain
cuz ill hit this manschesta million times till they ask if "u, k?"
Daubs wants to bet he'll win, but im takin the round, u disgrace
But if u wanna put ur money where ur mouth is, ill pound in ur face
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i just matched u........ and UK heads, i know u wont get like 2 of my punches cuz its an american thing, so pm me if u have any questions

JTR 01-14-06 03:49 AM

Told him in PLL, he aint good, il smoke his ish n blaze it
but the cunt was STILL game after i told him wordplays shit
i know you aint liked, i hate you there just the facts
I dont even need to judge cos he justice wack.

vs.

He aint hittin those trees, but Double-D has another infatuation
Cuz Daubs keeps holdin on to that Chronic........ masturbation

I got this as being pretty close, you guys both came with some played wordplay, fux had more played wordplay but Daubs had more bad wordplay, like the kung fu, the nose/knows, CBS, U-K, and Pound wordplay was all played out, so anyways, I got Daubs taking this

But fuck you both, this battle shoulda been WAAAAAAAY better, :(

v/Daubs

Who ever makes it to the next round better not let me down again, :thumbup:

TeamOne 01-14-06 08:24 PM

*Dies* i searched both RV AND RB lookin up the "pound" wordplay and none of the battles had anythin close to wordplay in them, let alone a spin on it like mine... so please show me a link and i will shutup :)

hot 01-14-06 10:35 PM

i know you aint liked, i hate you there just the facts
I dont even need to judge cause cos he justice wack.
fuck rap he's so wack. but WILL change the world in a way
cos lubricant sales will rocket when fux turns so gay
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oh shit, not posting lines and just dots, now my flows dead?
na..just means im takin it with less lines, like newbie cokeheads

DAUBS WTF? U ARE 10X BETTER THAN THIS VERSE


Cause Danny with drugs and girls, nope, he wants to be on point
He says She Hate Me... cuz he's even scared of Spike Lees joint
Im here to report this murder since u got me here testin the worse
Cuz Im focused wit 20/20... while dan rather CBS in his verse
He aint hittin those trees, but Double-D has another infatuation
Cuz Daubs keeps holdin on to that Chronic........ masturbation

SAME FOR FUX, I BATTLED BOTH U GUYS AND SEEN BETTER
ALMOST A TIE BUT THATS WORTHLESS TO U BOTH SO
THIS BEING A HONEST VOTE I SAY FUX BY A HAIR
SORRY DAUBBY
V/ FUX

JTR 01-14-06 11:44 PM

metheus used a pound wordplay, I also seen it used a few more times from other people

Daubs 01-15-06 04:55 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Me VS Marvjay
He makes no cents..cause it comes to tramps, we point to this bredderan
But he would be rich in england the way im pounding his head in


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ight=pound+head

:)

But still good luck n shit.

TeamOne 01-15-06 09:32 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by fuktheworld
I'll administer but not all fairly and u can surely bet on that
For me to merk u iz the law cuz ya shit justice wack


http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ghlight=justice

now were even and shit....... :)

Daubs 01-15-06 09:33 AM

hahahaha

rasss, didnt think that was played lol.

Daubs 01-15-06 09:35 AM

omg, wtf....look at my post there too, i even said it aint fresh hahaha.

anyway uppin for votes.

.TeamOne. 01-15-06 12:03 PM

i know you aint liked, i hate you there just the facts
I dont even need to judge cause cos he justice wack.
(that nose line is hella played, i mean, even I did one b4)
vs.
Im here to report this murder since u got me here testin the worse
Cuz Im focused wit 20/20... while dan rather CBS in his verse
My hits always land, leave this man on the floor with bruised pain
cuz ill hit this manschesta million times till they ask if "u, k?"

i think this battle was kinda a let down. errbody was sayin daubs elevated but i've seen better from both competitors.... i liked the justice line... made me laugh and such.
i only saw that one good line in daubs's verse and then we get to fux's, a bit more quoteables. the cbs line and u k line were pretty good imo. i've never seen either wordplay before. basically this battle came down to one good punch vs. two good punches. you fools shouldnt have flubbed 4 lines like you did, it woulda prolly made this battle a little better.....
V/ Fux for having the punches

Daubs 01-15-06 12:08 PM

that UK line was the most played lmao, but had a flip to it so improved it a bit, uppin.......

Vaskez 01-15-06 12:58 PM

ya girl was stringin you on, until she fuckin hung you
and fuck fightin me you faggot, you aint kung, fu
^^lazy!
pull ya nostrils and leave em numb too,might not notice?
only cause your ugly as fuck, and even your face nose it
^^nose wordplay is well-played
Told him in PLL, he aint good, il smoke his ish n blaze it
butthe cunt was STILL game after i told him wordplays shit
^^naww
i know you aint liked, i hate you there just the facts
I dont even need to judge cause cos he justice wack.
^^ok but kind lazy too
fuck rap he's so wack. but WILL change the world in a way
cos lubricant sales will rocket when fux turns so gay
^^bah gay punches needa be dope, this wasn't
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oh shit, not posting lines and just dots, now my flows dead?
na..just means im takin it with less lines, like newbie cokeheads
^^simple kinda boring comparison

dunno what happened there Daubs mate, you've dropped MUCH better before, that verse was lazy as hell :(

vs.


He aint hittin those trees, but Double-D has another infatuation
Cuz Daubs keeps holdin on to that Chronic........ masturbation
^^nah corny
Cause Danny with drugs and girls, nope, he wants to be on point
He says She Hate Me... cuz he's even scared of Spike Lees joint
^^blah
Im here to report this murder since u got me here testin the worse
Cuz Im focused wit 20/20... while dan rather CBS in his verse
^^not too bad
Ill put this bitch in a herse, Just leave before i retire this o' g
cuz even ya sig is tellin ur punk ass the round that you wont see
^^well-spotted in his sig, but boring wording, newb style
My hits always land, leave this man on the floor with bruised pain
cuz ill hit this manschesta million times till they ask if "u, k?"
^^manschesta is forced, u,k concept is more played than football
Daubs wants to bet he'll win, but im takin the round, u disgrace
But if u wanna put ur money where ur mouth is, ill pound in ur face
^^heh, pretty coo


Fux takes it for the finisher, the rest was lazy as hell and some newb-style wording, :( come on guys, make next round dope

v/Fux

Daubs 01-15-06 01:09 PM

i dont understand how you gonna say all meh na average n shit, then on a pound you line say its coo.

oh well.

Vaskez 01-15-06 01:15 PM

well ya last bar wasn't really a punch, ya had some "gay" punches n the other I wasn't really feelin. The pound in line just happened to be something I haven't seen used like that before and was worded effectively, that's all

Daubs 01-15-06 01:16 PM

yeah its no provblem, i know i dropped weak...we both did.

Vaskez 01-15-06 01:23 PM

yeah I also been reading some dope verses this weak, that raises the standard, check out MM's verse here:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=262515

Adam 01-16-06 01:04 AM

Fux wins and advances.

Adam 01-16-06 01:04 AM

This battle is now closed.

Adam 01-16-06 01:05 AM

Moved to closed battles.


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