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KempoMRK 10-01-06 10:15 AM

LBL Championship Match: 1. DaTrusHurtz (10-0) vs 2. N.Tavarez (5-0)
 


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DaTrusHurtz 10-01-06 01:23 PM

checkin' in... 20?

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235542
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235548.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235541
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=3089570

N.Tavarez 10-01-06 08:02 PM

i got another champ match on Rm lets make it 16 lines.............

N.Tavarez 10-05-06 09:32 AM

if cool with you i need an extension til tomorrow morning
some personal shit came up

DaTrusHurtz 10-05-06 01:41 PM

Yea, that's cool... we'll say the new due date is 2:00 PM EST on Friday

N.Tavarez 10-06-06 09:53 AM

aigght lets go

You climbed to the top, but I dont give a damn what you've achieved
Get sent back down da mountain like U got 10 commandments for da league
got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes
.................David Lama would be ashamed of you
Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither
In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show
1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go

tavarez102882: just came back from a baby shower in NYC.......mad ass up there son im still tryna get over it
DaTrusHurtz: haha, that's awesome, but wait who ya callin' son?
tavarez102882: lol thats NY lingo, im still in Bronx Mode
DaTrusHurtz: word, i hear ya, i just always confront people when they call me son and i'm like uh... am i older than you?


Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow
Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did
But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids
This kid is fake cant equate, see him viciously ate
Could pimp a state...how U fuck with Dakota bitches and snakes
So its no need to wonder if your lacking a hoe...
U dont drop ya Datelines, U da pedophile they catch on the show
CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something
They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time
Should try winning on OTHER sites...make a few friends w/ some chumps
Cuz you aint the One, Da.....And Halloween aint til the end of the month
so beat it

N.Tavarez 10-06-06 02:30 PM

anyyyy day now trus .

DaTrusHurtz 10-06-06 03:02 PM

Now Nelson...
I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you
U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me
Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted...
... the kind thats really easy
I been facin' the best weekly, n' at best ur a bitch
I've seen the area of dope... n' ur perimeter is less than a inch
BITCH YOU DON'T HURT, N' UR A JUST SAD FAG WITH A VERSE
Oh sorry, that came out the wrong way... kinda like ur birth
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team
Ur ugly, but I'm ownin' shit, so word to ya momma
I have Braggin Writes...
... you just have a fat bitch that looks like a Lama
Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer
"Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year!

DaTrusHurtz: what do you think about quality of heads in the 1-2? Should there be a higher bar about who is let in or just let average heads in and let them elevate in the league
tavarez102882: i think in the beggining you should let them in and eliminate the weaker ones as the season progresses
tavarez102882: give them the chance to improve and if they dont, get em out


That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?
Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that
Hate vote this, d/r that, but ya know what the worst is
These days I don't know why people even vote...
... for ANY of ur verses
The league is weaker, but fag ur not commanding when roaming
You represent the state of text... while standin' up in Wyoming
I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see
You were still the champ...
... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie

Sorry for takin' awhile, I had other shit to do this morning. Uppin' for votes.. and I don't want Serb voting.

R.Christensen 10-06-06 03:34 PM

Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither
CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something
They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time


vs

I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team


v/Tav

I really wasnt feeling much that Trus dropped

Roger Glocks 10-06-06 04:24 PM

n.tav


Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you

In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show
1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go


Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow

CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something


vs

da trus

Now Nelson...
I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you

BITCH YOU DON'T HURT, N' UR A JUST SAD FAG WITH A VERSE
Oh sorry, that came out the wrong way... kinda like ur birth
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team

Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer
"Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year!

Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that

The league is weaker, but fag ur not commanding when roaming
You represent the state of text... while standin' up in Wyoming


pretty close battle...i liked n tavarez in the beginning then after the convo n those lines i wasn't really feeling at all...da trus hurtz came pretty nice had a couple lines that missed...but alot of connections more then tavarez...cool battle

vote-datrushurtz

Te Ora 10-06-06 04:30 PM

Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither
i used a com wordplay last week lol. but u used it differently so i quoted
Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did
But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids
CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something

vs.


I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you
U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me
Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted...
... the kind thats really easy
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team
That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?
I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see
You were still the champ...
... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie

v/ DTH - edges this. n.taverez came more personal, but i feel a lot of his personals were bland where as DTH added more wit. cool battle though dudes.. keep at it.

N.Tavarez 10-06-06 06:03 PM

2-1 trus .

Untold 10-06-06 10:26 PM

got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes
.................David Lama would be ashamed of you
Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither
Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow
They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time
^tav i really liked this concept, but i didn't like the way u worded.

vs.

I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team
That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?
Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that
^i'm not quoting this cause i liked it, i just wanted to say that it had potential, but the punch was bland. plus i've seen shit similar to this. should'a worded it better for more effectiveness

EDIT: btw, that parlay line was pretty dope DTH. u should'a had more creative shit like that.

pretty straiight battle, no hate to either, but nuttin too impressive this week. tav's verse seemed as if it was rushed and some of the wordin on some of his punches were off. i mean, he had some pretty cool shit, but nuttin that had me thinkin "DAMN!" also, that oneduh line was meh. like, i dunno.. that shit didn't appeal to me at all. i honestly don't know what the point of it was tav. as for DTH, u had a good run as champ, but i honestly think this was a weaker verse on ur part. alot of ur shit was just statement'ish/ worded off/ seemed rushed as well. this could honestly go either way, but i feel that tav had the stronger quotables in his verse. so i gotta give it to him.

v/ N. Tavarez

Beyond.. 10-07-06 12:22 AM

N.Tavarez

You climbed to the top, but I dont give a damn what you've achieved
Get sent back down da mountain like U got 10 commandments for da league

Good opener, fresh.

got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes
.................David Lama would be ashamed of you

Don't understand it.

Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you

lol, cool.

I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither

Cool.

In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show
1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go

Decent personal.

Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow

Cool personal.

Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did
But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids

Good, I think...

This kid is fake cant equate, see him viciously ate
Could pimp a state...how U fuck with Dakota bitches and snakes

Cool.

So its no need to wonder if your lacking a hoe...
U dont drop ya Datelines, U da pedophile they catch on the show

lol, nice.

CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something

ok.

They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time

ok...

Should try winning on OTHER sites...make a few friends w/ some chumps
Cuz you aint the One, Da.....And Halloween aint til the end of the month

I just used a Oneduh line in my no show verse, lol.

Overall: Pretty consistent verse with lots of personal attacks. Towards the end you started losing steam though, which could have hurt you. We'll soon find out.


DaTrusHurtz

Now Nelson...
I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you

Good personal punch.

U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me
Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted...
... the kind thats really easy

Good nameplay.

I been facin' the best weekly, n' at best ur a bitch
I've seen the area of dope... n' ur perimeter is less than a inch

Nice.

BITCH YOU DON'T HURT, N' UR A JUST SAD FAG WITH A VERSE
Oh sorry, that came out the wrong way... kinda like ur birth

Cool. Seems like it could have been worded better.

Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team

Good wordplay.

Ur ugly, but I'm ownin' shit, so word to ya momma
I have Braggin Writes...
... you just have a fat bitch that looks like a Lama

lol, cool.

Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer
"Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year!

Good personal punch.

That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?

Cool personal.

Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that

Good wordplay.

Hate vote this, d/r that, but ya know what the worst is
These days I don't know why people even vote...
... for ANY of ur verses

ok.

The league is weaker, but fag ur not commanding when roaming
You represent the state of text... while standin' up in Wyoming

Cool.

I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see
You were still the champ...
... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie

Decent closer.

Overall: A tiny bit more consistent and didn't fall off in the end as much. Personals punch combinations were better and had more stand out wordplays.


Vote: DaTrusHurtz - Close battle. Felt he edged consistency slightly and delivered a few more punches along with his personals. Snatched wordplay up as well. Good battle.

fuck yuu 10-07-06 11:19 AM

Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither
Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did
But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids
CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something
got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes
.................David Lama would be ashamed of you
Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow
They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time


vs

I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you
U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me
Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted...
... the kind thats really easy
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team
That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?
I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see
You were still the champ...
... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie
Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that


This was a close battle... i liked alot from both of you and thought you guys did good. But seeings how i have the quotables at 7-6 tav im going to have to go with him. No hate against eithero f you this was very good.. and quite close

V/Tav

David Lama 10-07-06 03:50 PM

tav - wasnt feeling feeling the com line cause com could beat alot of dudes. and the oneduh line I got but just came off weird with the wording, the rest I didnt feel much from you tav cept for these, which are ya best lines in this.

I felt.

You climbed to the top, but I dont give a damn what you've achieved
Get sent back down da mountain like U got 10 commandments for da league
got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes
.................David Lama would be ashamed of you
Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show
1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go

datrus - nice opener but after that it was a slow start. but you had some good shit in between

Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team
Ur ugly, but I'm ownin' shit, so word to ya momma
I have Braggin Writes...
... you just have a fat bitch that looks like a Lama
Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer
"Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year!
I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you

overall - same amount of lines I liked, but overall I felt tav a bit more, close battle. i felt that tavs weaker lines were better. could go either way

vote - N Taverez

N.Tavarez 10-07-06 06:45 PM

3-2 me
good battle trus
just to clarify that COM line is ONLY there cuz they had beef a while back due to a trus interview NOT for the COM nameplay so it adds on to my no respect line

DaTrusHurtz 10-07-06 09:27 PM

Yeah, I got that, but it still didn't make any sense cuz i've beaten Com before, lol.

It's 4-3 not 3-2, but same thing, uppin for more votes

John Hensley. 10-07-06 11:45 PM

You climbed to the top, but I dont give a damn what you've achieved
Get sent back down da mountain like U got 10 commandments for da league
cool
got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes
.................David Lama would be ashamed of you
eh, not bad
Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
it was personal, a bit too bland to be dope tho
I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither
nah
In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show
1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go
pretty good

tavarez102882: just came back from a baby shower in NYC.......mad ass up there son im still tryna get over it
DaTrusHurtz: haha, that's awesome, but wait who ya callin' son?
tavarez102882: lol thats NY lingo, im still in Bronx Mode
DaTrusHurtz: word, i hear ya, i just always confront people when they call me son and i'm like uh... am i older than you?

Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow
i thought this was a solid personal and nice use of the convo, but could have been a much harder hitter
Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did
But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids
nah
This kid is fake cant equate, see him viciously ate
Could pimp a state...how U fuck with Dakota bitches and snakes
nah
So its no need to wonder if your lacking a hoe...
U dont drop ya Datelines, U da pedophile they catch on the show
not bad not good
CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something
i really liked this flow alot, the way it was worded made this sound pretty good
They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time
nah
Should try winning on OTHER sites...make a few friends w/ some chumps
Cuz you aint the One, Da.....And Halloween aint til the end of the month
eh, alright

alright tav, i usually like your shit cuz it's mad witty and can be really fresh, but i dont know dude, this wasnt you this time. it wasnt bad, but you had alot of personal type lines that were just too bland and not really worded that well to make up for it, except for the shell of the LBL line which had a real dope flow. i liked your opening lines, but you kinda went downhill from there. no disrespect of course, i think ur one of the doper heads on here, but this isn't the shit i usually read from you.


Now Nelson...
I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you
pretty good
U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me
Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted...
... the kind thats really easy
lol, thsi was aight
I been facin' the best weekly, n' at best ur a bitch
I've seen the area of dope... n' ur perimeter is less than a inch
ok
BITCH YOU DON'T HURT, N' UR A JUST SAD FAG WITH A VERSE
Oh sorry, that came out the wrong way... kinda like ur birth
ehh
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team
havent seen a flip on his name, not real dope but pretty good
Ur ugly, but I'm ownin' shit, so word to ya momma
I have Braggin Writes...
... you just have a fat bitch that looks like a Lama
lol
Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer
"Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year!
shoulda used this personal another way, ok though

DaTrusHurtz: what do you think about quality of heads in the 1-2? Should there be a higher bar about who is let in or just let average heads in and let them elevate in the league
tavarez102882: i think in the beggining you should let them in and eliminate the weaker ones as the season progresses
tavarez102882: give them the chance to improve and if they dont, get em out

That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?
pretty good use of that, i liked this punch more than tavs quote one
Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that
kinda bad wording, ok line
Hate vote this, d/r that, but ya know what the worst is
These days I don't know why people even vote...
... for ANY of ur verses
nah, wayyy too simple
The league is weaker, but fag ur not commanding when roaming
You represent the state of text... while standin' up in Wyoming
nah
I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see
You were still the champ...
... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie
alright

man your guys' verses are really alike, both used quotes, both got some state lines and both got some bland personals lol. DTH i thought you dropped real nice last week, this week you dropped down a couple levels, it wasn't bad of course, i liked parts of the verse, but parts i didnt like.


overall pretty good battle, i'm not really sure who to vote for. ok i just re-read the battle as a whole, and i honestly felt Tav just i dont know bro, some of those signing in at the right time lines and the dakota lines just werent good man. DTH, i liked a few of your opening lines, u started off pretty solid, i liked your quote line more than tav's, i thought the ''dont know why any people vote'' line was wack tho homie. wyoning too. closer was ok, worded solid so that helped. damn man, i dont know, i think i got DTH here, i was thinkin Tav was gonna take the title when i saw this matchup but he didnt drop his usual shit.

Ryan Hughes 10-08-06 12:52 AM

You climbed to the top, but I dont give a damn what you've achieved
Get sent back down da mountain like U got 10 commandments for da league
^^Decent opener
got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes
.................David Lama would be ashamed of you
^^Eh.. not feelin this
Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
^^good personal i like this one
I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither
^^naw
In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show
1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go
^^good
Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow
^^^nice i was feelin this
Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did
But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids
^^weak
This kid is fake cant equate, see him viciously ate
Could pimp a state...how U fuck with Dakota bitches and snakes
^^naw..not really hard hitting
So its no need to wonder if your lacking a hoe...
U dont drop ya Datelines, U da pedophile they catch on the show
^^noo
CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something
^^^Good
They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time
^^no
Should try winning on OTHER sites...make a few friends w/ some chumps
Cuz you aint the One, Da.....And Halloween aint til the end of the month
^^no at this closer weak


Now Nelson...
I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you
^^good opener
U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me
Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted...
... the kind thats really easy
^^haha...i liked this one
I been facin' the best weekly, n' at best ur a bitch
I've seen the area of dope... n' ur perimeter is less than a inch
^^decent
BITCH YOU DON'T HURT, N' UR A JUST SAD FAG WITH A VERSE
Oh sorry, that came out the wrong way... kinda like ur birth
^^lol good
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team
^^Good i like this one
Ur ugly, but I'm ownin' shit, so word to ya momma
I have Braggin Writes...
... you just have a fat bitch that looks like a Lama
^^nice
Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer
"Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year!
^^Naw i wasnt feelin this one
That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?
^^Lol...this was a good use of the quote you had..i was feelin this
Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that
^^Decent
Hate vote this, d/r that, but ya know what the worst is
These days I don't know why people even vote...
... for ANY of ur verses
^^weak
The league is weaker, but fag ur not commanding when roaming
You represent the state of text... while standin' up in Wyoming
^^okay
I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see
You were still the champ...
... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie
^^decent closer...

V/datrus...this was a good battle...pretty damn close...both came wit some good verse's...tav i like the father line shit was good and the champin the league..but ya verse feel off to me it was inconsistent wit fresh lines..trus came wit a tad bit better verse...i was feelin the ta line the kick out the league too...you get my vote..good battle to both of ya'll

KempoMRK 10-08-06 08:24 AM

DaTrusHurtz wins 5-4.

DaTrusHurtz wins (11-0)
N.Tavarez loses (5-1)


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