Round 1: Vaskez & DaTrusHurts vs DoContinue & Fuxjustaword
Round 1 is underway in the highly anticipated Tag Team Tournament! You are one of the 16 teams on the quest to be crowned RV's Tag Team Champions. Goodluck! Read these Rules & may the best team win. |
check yourself amigos
Let's say 10 lines per person / 20 lines per team |
checkin.... im down, but ill check wit DC
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though there's no need... we check yet again
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Checking in, good luck
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Vaskez should be holdin his files together... say he sprayin shit?
but his gats only exist in text, this kid is shootin paper clips Check tha Rockviller's av... like that, i'll kick ya no wonder ur his partner, this M.D. keeps tha sickness outta tha picture* dont get F'ed up, just try to follow--- here, i'll keep it simple... DCNTC Beat VNDT like alpha bits cereal you wanna take a trip to elevate? well, i guess you could take it... but ur style's so ass, if u DID planet, u'd end up in uranus Vas a gangsta? if you wanna pretend you could try tho... but you could be the randy jackson of RV's american idol *for tha rockviller thing, im talkin about DTH and where he's from... everything else you should get |
DaTrusHurtz:
These wack clowns, s'easy to diss them, check out my wisdom I'ma push down Continue n proceed to next round... .................................................. .....like video game systems Y'all are the gayest two, n' you'll be lonely forever too Cos FuxJustaWord... to describe what you'll NEVER do Least ya got good looks n' crap, so I'll put my foot in ya crack You know you guys are pretty....fucking clueless at rap But yo don't complain hoes, even ya two ugly shmows N' Fux know, that if ya cry wolf, DoCont will run home Get the fuck away n' roam, ya nervous bitches are retarded Y'all got so many ants in ya pants, ya could get a colony started Vaskez: Word...plus: Ya must be deaf if ya ain't heard of us, we kick mad effects N' ya might be hard of hearing... ..............................but you're pussies in all other respects How the fuck's the win gonna be taken home by these clowns? Y'all ain't aquainted with wins... .....................and ya moms don't allow strangers in the house! N it must be merk day cos me n Trus are killin these herb gays It's fact, fondling Fux is the only way DC's good at 'Wordplay Come on bitches try me, y'all claim to be street n grimy True, Washington's of dirt off DC's filthy ass... ............................................is a routine that's nightly The fact is, we're mighty, this battle's well unbalanced And I have to say, in fact announce... ....................................is WAY more than your talent |
vote 1 on KS and hotsh battle: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2488550
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Fuck Fux, damn no showers can kiss my ass...especially since I saw him hanging around this forum. Messing shit up and wasting everyone else's time.
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v/ dth and vaskez for showing
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DoContinue's verse wasn't that good.. Fux didn't show..
Vote - Vaskez and DaTrusHurtz |
Any feedback dudes? Although I'm pretty sure which lines are wack and which are good, another opinion is always good. Thanks
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ok...obviously...I'll vote for Vaskez and Datrushurtz
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211085 ^vote on that |
wen was i hangin around??? maybe on like a tuesday or wednesday...... but not past that day
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Datrus Hurtz
These wack clowns, s'easy to diss them, check out my wisdom I'ma push down Continue n proceed to next round... .................................................. .....like video game systems (No) Y'all are the gayest two, n' you'll be lonely forever too Cos FuxJustaWord... to describe what you'll NEVER do (Lmao) Least ya got good looks n' crap, so I'll put my foot in ya crack You know you guys are pretty....fucking clueless at rap (Good) But yo don't complain hoes, even ya two ugly shmows N' Fux know, that if ya cry wolf, DoCont will run home (No) Get the fuck away n' roam, ya nervous bitches are retarded Y'all got so many ants in ya pants, ya could get a colony started (Meh) Vaskez: Word...plus: Ya must be deaf if ya ain't heard of us, we kick mad effects N' ya might be hard of hearing... ..............................but you're pussies in all other respects (haha, nice opener) How the fuck's the win gonna be taken home by these clowns? Y'all ain't aquainted with wins... .....................and ya moms don't allow strangers in the house! (Good, coulda been executed better) N it must be merk day cos me n Trus are killin these herb gays It's fact, fondling Fux is the only way DC's good at 'Wordplay (Ok) Come on bitches try me, y'all claim to be street n grimy True, Washington's of dirt off DC's filthy ass... ............................................is a routine that's nightly (Lol very nice) The fact is, we're mighty, this battle's well unbalanced And I have to say, in fact announce... ....................................is WAY more than your talent (Nah) There's your feedback. |
ok thanks Demon, but my closer was dope and you know it :D
and Fux LMAO I SAW your username active in this forum about an hour after I posted our verses. LOL @ lying about it. |
V/ - Vaskez & DaTrus
damn ho-showers are gay...........fuck at fux :cussing: |
OK HERES THE BREAKDOWN VASK ASKED FOR, ITS HONEST
SO TAKE IT AS AN OPINION These wack clowns, s'easy to diss them, check out my wisdom I'ma push down Continue n proceed to next round... .................................................. .....like video game systems GOOD BAR HERE Y'all are the gayest two, n' you'll be lonely forever too Cos FuxJustaWord... to describe what you'll NEVER do PLAYED FROM BACK IN THE DAY Least ya got good looks n' crap, so I'll put my foot in ya crack You know you guys are pretty....fucking clueless at rap SIMILAR TO YA RHYME SCHEME IN PLL THIS WEEK But yo don't complain hoes, even ya two ugly shmows N' Fux know, that if ya cry wolf, DoCont will run home UMMM NAH Get the fuck away n' roam, ya nervous bitches are retarded Y'all got so many ants in ya pants, ya could get a colony started WTF? Vaskez: Word...plus: Ya must be deaf if ya ain't heard of us, we kick mad effects N' ya might be hard of hearing... ..............................but you're pussies in all other respects DECENT BAR HERE How the fuck's the win gonna be taken home by these clowns? Y'all ain't aquainted with wins... .....................and ya moms don't allow strangers in the house! NO, WORDED BAD N it must be merk day cos me n Trus are killin these herb gays It's fact, fondling Fux is the only way DC's good at 'Wordplay DECENT Come on bitches try me, y'all claim to be street n grimy True, Washington's of dirt off DC's filthy ass... ............................................is a routine that's nightly WASHINGTONS BEEN USED RECENTLY, SOUNDS KINDA FORCED The fact is, we're mighty, this battle's well unbalanced And I have to say, in fact announce... ....................................is WAY more than your talent MEH. DECENT VASK I SEE YOUR WORDPLAY PERFECTLY, AND PROPS FOR PULLING IT OFF BUT SOMETIMES IT COMES OFF AS CORNY AND FORCED BUT THANX TO FUX IT DOESNT MATTER |
Thanks for the feed fellas, much appreciated
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yeah ok, thanks hotsh
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also voted on 9th and Mim vs. Killas
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mine was too wack to get a breakdown? :(
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I can say this w/o swaying since we already won:
DC - your opener was quite creative, but not really hard hitting, I like the planet/uranus line , and didn't think the rest was so good |
Vaskez & DTH win.
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Battle is closed.
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Moved to Closed Battles
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