..kontroverzey.. vs Mike Hawk
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Mike Hawk has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 08:21 PM.
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..kontroverzey.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 08:45 PM.
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This fag needs to be schooled, or removed from life
Look at his sig, name, crews...he can't spell shit right Bitch think he standin tall, we all know he frontin The fag disses text, but 100 of his battles came from it Nobody likes yo ass, and you know that, that's a fact You got Cam prayin for wackass knotroverzey not to come back If anybody ever gave u respect, the fag just abused it So now Bush want gun control to stop Four Clips from makin wack music Nobody cares wutchu think...faggot ur jus too gay and why u sayin ur back..bitch was gone for wut..2 days? |
This Kids Gonna COme At Me with shit regarding the AIm chat. I bet you. fuckin Unoriginal herb
Dayum Mikes Sick, I think He just might equal up to -Ice Ice Baby!-. This kid Has majour Problems With "mikes" like chka chka slim shady. Kid Tried Multiple Times to be on the RV spotlight, ..........................................But the light Always Faded. I guess That's God Way of Saying " YOU WACK ", ..........................................Your Way!! over-rated. Vet Status? NOPE, This Kid "falls For Herbs" like them jack & the beanstalk tales. This Kid enjoys testing Patience similar to Doctor Check-ups, ............They say Your doing good after the Plastic Surgery. I knew You was pussy, When The Dildo Store was robbed, ...................................and you were wanted for burglery. Merk You back to the past time, deduct your win record, like :gfy:. Punchlines Will Decrease your heart rate like old men on push bikes. You couldn't increase the temperature On your metaphore's, .................. if you installed Oven-Timer On your keyboard. The Shit this kid has To offer Lowers your health, .........................................Like backs of Variety Stores. |
This Kids Gonna COme At Me with shit regarding the AIm chat. I bet you. fuckin Unoriginal herb
Dayum Mikes Sick, I think He just might equal up to -Ice Ice Baby!-.This kid Has majour Problems With "mikes" like chka chka slim shady. Kid Tried Multiple Times to be on the RV spotlight, ..........................................But the light Always Faded. I guess That's God Way of Saying " YOU WACK ", ..........................................Your Way!! over-rated. Vet Status? NOPE, This Kid "falls For Herbs" like them jack & the beanstalk tales. This Kid enjoys testing Patience similar to Doctor Check-ups, ............They say Your doing good after the Plastic Surgery. I knew You was pussy, When The Dildo Store was robbed, ...................................and you were wanted for burglery. Merk You back to the past time, deduct your win record, like . Punchlines Will Decrease your heart rate like old men on push bikes. You couldn't increase the temperature On your metaphore's, .................. if you installed Oven-Timer On your keyboard. The Shit this kid has To offer Lowers your health, .........................................Like backs of Variety Stores. |
Your fucking kidding me.
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No im not
sorry, didnt mean to merk you......... |
I really don't wanna up this just to get some silly...stupid...hate votes.
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word. What You sayin bout hate. if they hatin. it's to me.
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Well...we've established something...we are both 2 of the most hated ppl on RV.
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Will someone vote..........................................
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WTF@nobody voting........u vote on all my other sheeeett.
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omg omg omg omg omg omg omgomgomg ogmogmogmog.........vote.
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Cracker Jack Ass Niggas..........vottttttttttttttttttttttttte.
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Voted For: Mike Hawk
Kontroversey: Dayum Mikes Sick, I think He just might equal up to -Ice Ice Baby!-. This kid Has majour Problems With "mikes" like chka chka slim shady. ^^umm no kinda wack 4/10 Kid Tried Multiple Times to be on the RV spotlight, ..........................................But the light Always Faded. I guess That's God Way of Saying " YOU WACK ", ..........................................Your Way!! over-rated. ^^haha good shit 7/10 Vet Status? NOPE, This Kid "falls For Herbs" like them jack & the beanstalk tales. This Kid enjoys testing Patience similar to Doctor Check-ups, ............They say Your doing good after the Plastic Surgery. I knew You was pussy, When The Dildo Store was robbed, ...................................and you were wanted for burglery. ^^lmao good shit but stretched as fuck minus 2 points 6/10 Merk You back to the past time, deduct your win record, like . Punchlines Will Decrease your heart rate like old men on push bikes. ^^ wasnt feeling this 4/10 You couldn't increase the temperature On your metaphore's, .................. if you installed Oven-Timer On your keyboard. The Shit this kid has To offer Lowers your health, .........................................Like backs of Variety Stores. ^^stop stretching shit it makes you lose 4/10 overall : 25/50 (50%) Mike hawk: This fag needs to be schooled, or removed from life Look at his sig, name, crews...he can't spell shit right ^^lmao dope opener weak set up 7/10 Bitch think he standin tall, we all know he frontin The fag disses text, but 100 of his battles came from it ^^ decent personal good punch 6/10 Nobody likes yo ass, and you know that, that's a fact You got Cam prayin for wackass knotroverzey not to come back ^^ lol 6/10 If anybody ever gave u respect, the fag just abused it So now Bush want gun control to stop Four Clips from makin wack music ^^dopest bar in the battle 9/10 Nobody cares wutchu think...faggot ur jus too gay and why u sayin ur back..bitch was gone for wut..2 days? ^^ good closer and dope personal 7/10 overall : 35/50 (70%) vote mike hawk http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1773569 Drop an honest vote on this battle please |
I'll get to votin sometime......................................
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This was feedback posted for Mike Hawk
Mike won..
But i guess im not supposed to vote on this battle.. Mike easily won though.. Better concepts, harder punches. better personals.. Killah's wasnt very good at all.. |
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Voted For: Mike Hawk
Mike Hawk took this.. I could actually read his verse without getting bored. Your structure was alright but u had some streched lines. I say you got this cuz it made me laugh and i didn't get bored. Other cats was just boring... Kinda played punches. You could have had some of them hitting way harder and your structure was kinda wierd.. Vote-Mike Hawk RTF- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=163144 |
Voted For: Mike Hawk
Mike Hawk: Alright I Like How The Verse Just Flowed Out...Nice Work..Vocabulary Was Decent And Neat Saw Some Good Words In There...Personals Of Hand Nice...A Little Word In There Over All Vocabulary And Punches Was Nice I Just Didnt Feel The Structure..Although It Was Better Then You Opponents.....8.5/10 Killa: Okay It Sort Of FLowed Out Good To But Your Structure Wasnt Working On This One Also You Had Lot Of Basic Vocabulary In THis Verse..I Know You Can Do Better Then That Hommie...Punches Was Neat Creative...Used A Little WordPlay...Nice Shit OverAll Your Structure And Vocabulary Held You Back On This One Cozz......8/10 Vote=Mike Hawk Return The Favor http://community.rapverse.com/showt...eferrerid=38190 ^Zeke[4] Vs Streedryda[1]^ |
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Voted For: Mike Hawk
damn ....... Mike Hawk: ok im telling it stright up... your not that good..... in fact....your really.. overrated....but damn man... you fucking had a very tite ass verse.. man!! LOL im first off This fag needs to be schooled, or removed from life Look at his sig, name, crews...he can't spell shit right that was a ok opening Bitch think he standin tall, we all know he frontin The fag disses text, but 100 of his battles came from it weak Nobody likes yo ass, and you know that, that's a fact You got Cam prayin for wackass knotroverzey not to come back hahahah nice one If anybody ever gave u respect, the fag just abused it So now Bush want gun control to stop Four Clips from makin wack music nice punch and was strong Nobody cares wutchu think...faggot ur jus too gay and why u sayin ur back..bitch was gone for wut..2 days? this wawas good... got it in the LMAO factor Kid Tried Multiple Times to be on the RV spotlight, ..........................................But the light Always Faded. I guess That's God Way of Saying " YOU WACK ", ..........................................Your Way!! over-rated. WTF... that flow was goodbut naw... this was wtf Vet Status? NOPE, This Kid "falls For Herbs" like them jack & the beanstalk tales. This Kid enjoys testing Patience similar to Doctor Check-ups, ............They say Your doing good after the Plastic Surgery. I knew You was pussy, When The Dildo Store was robbed, ...................................and you were wanted for burglery. Merk You back to the past time, deduct your win record, like . Punchlines Will Decrease your heart rate like old men on push bikes. You couldn't increase the temperature On your metaphore's, .................. if you installed Oven-Timer On your keyboard. The Shit this kid has To offer Lowers your health, .........................................Like backs of Variety Stores. blah i can even get through ya verse... to mixed up.. but yea ya did got some good punches.... blah.... MH/v |
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Voted For: Mike Hawk
Bitch think he standin tall, we all know he frontin The fag disses text, but 100 of his battles came from it nope not really hard..but True.. Nobody cares wutchu think...faggot ur jus too gay and why u sayin ur back..bitch was gone for wut..2 day again ..not hard..but true..i expect more from u but i heard sometimes u slack off.. Kontra..... This Kid enjoys testing Patience similar to Doctor Check-ups, ............They say Your doing good after the Plastic Surgery. I knew You was pussy, When The Dildo Store was robbed, ...................................and you were wanted for burglery. i see what u tried to do with this but it aint work sounds like a forced concept......... You couldn't increase the temperature On your metaphore's, .................. if you installed Oven-Timer On your keyboard. The Shit this kid has To offer Lowers your health, .........................................Like backs of Variety Stores this shoulda been a hot closer...but something went wrong and it ended up being lame..whole verse is unorganized..forced...not really feelin it.. v/hawk......not his best but his personals were stronger than kontras punches |
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