State ya name-(Feat Big City, Young Kastro, Paul Cain, and Hitchcock
 

Hitchcock=Blue
Big City= Red
Young Castro=Green
Paul Cain= Orange


:shoot: :shoot: :shoot: Its time for the reckoning niggaz lets get it poppin
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State ya name Gangsta
Big City, son
Where ya from?
The Bury, nigga
You gon hold it down?
Why the hell not?
Aight then

+Big City+
You cant get on my level, not even someday jack
Cuz yall all under Big City like subway tracks
B.C. still holdin the chrome
Gotta pack a gat the spin back quicker than rotary phones
After this, then the skills is hopefully known
Im a balloon ass nigga, yall im supposed to be blown
Look, my ascension is near
You got 5 seconds to tell me why i shouldnt end ya career
POW :shoot: Times up, you get dumped in the trash
Watch my bars grow feet and start "jumpin ya ass"
Wait ima flip the script
These mc's on hydraulics, they jumpin from dick to dick
Its a shame but its true, keep ya friends in ya sight
Because whats starts wit a hug, might end wit the knife
I never halt to send a liar backwards
Get it right,.... Big City's back like Chiropractors....1....

State ya name Gangsta
Young Kastro the Answer
Where you from?
P-City Fool
You gon hold it down?
Ayesssir
Nuff said then nigga

+Young Kastro+
Young Kas'll crush ya domepiece, till ya bones creak
I got a chrome beast, that i use to blow heat
So when you see me dont speak
Cuz im aimin at ya face to leave more than a swoll cheek
more like a slow leak, heres a tip for the rest
I pack perforatin punches, that'll cripple the best
And you can touch my jewels if you lookin to die
You trynna reach my level than look in the sky
I drive through the spot, all the dimes lookin to ride
Kas hit chicks that make Halle berry look like a 5
Im the shit when im in the kitchen cookin a pie
You'll never find a nigga thats as crooked as I
Listen this Kastro
Be real, im like Niagra when it comes to my cashflow
I flip niggas out, when i flick the triggas out
You'll be chopped and screwed like them niggas from swisha house..FAGGOT

State ya name Gangsta
Paul Cain nigga
Where you from?
D-Town, live
You gon hold it down?
You already know
Spit at these niggas mayne

+Paul Cain+
Paul Cain be the champ of digits
Ya'll like cheerleaders over the summer, ya whole camp is bitches
Steel toeds boots, put a stamp in britches
Wish i had one big enough to clamp the snitches
I'll let the tech scream
and when ya brain start to leak, it'll give niggas "wet dream"
Ock, im flashin techs wit plenty of jagged threats
Im spit that flame yall niggas call me Dragons breath
You braggin less, cuz my mentatlity's murder
Niggas wanna get money for beef, guess they salaries burgers
Im move the keys up the creek, to the fiends up the street
On average Cain pull about 3 sluts a week
They say get a gimmick, start a lil dance
But thats why yall never grow like artificial plants
Niggaz say "Damn Cain its hard to stop you"
Cuz i get niggas cut more the Barbeshop 2....


How many times must i tell you niggas, we not wit the beef niggas
we spit and defeat niggas...

ITS THAT EAST COAST SHIT..
You want it, we live it
ITS that HARDCORE SHIT
You want it, we give it
SO-- BACK--- ON ---UP
We run this, you iznt...BIATCCCH

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204141

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this was a hott piece, true gangsta right hurr...lol....up on multis ya'll......up on vocab and will ya'll learn how to structurize man....starting to fuck up ma eyes lol.........j/p nice job all of you 7.5/10....rtf yo

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This shit was iight...nothing great....like taz said ur structure is fucked up.....umm but the flow was iight...i was looking for a bit more creativity....but what u did was mad cool....umm....6.5/10...keep it up peace

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Ya structured was fucked up but the idea of the collabo was nice i like the way the chorus's were done,even thou its like the original song,but everyboduy did preety good so i give it a 7.5/10

haha i do my structure like that on purpose, but thanks for the good feed

shit was hard fa real............nice multis, wordplay, and all that shit.......keep droppin, watchall a crew ?

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I likred this shit concept wuz hott keep it up/////////////////

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A yo this shit was hitting I love songs like this everyone did a good job I myself liked Big City verse the best but it was all hot 8.5/10!

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LOL!^^^ yer man werd. truly amazin. the best OM i've ever seen to be honest wit you, and thats gud (really, really gud! lol).

haha thats whats up, thanks for the feedback, get at me for collabs you know im orchestratin this shit

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205723


Please return the favour
Ok lemme see.
Hitchock = Where ur verse at? i dont get ur role in here u the dude that cums in shouting "yeah bitches!!" n shit??

Big City = yeah ight,
Cuz yall all under Big City like subway track
That was nice
but the chirophractor line is madd played , flow was cool overall a decent verse

Kastro =
Young Kas'll crush ya domepiece, till ya bones creak
I got a chrome beast, that i use to blow heat

Nice flow, stood out most in ur verse

Cain = Again a decent verse some played shit though

Niggaz say "Damn Cain its hard to stop you"
Cuz i get niggas cut more the Barbeshop 2....


Its too played

Overall yead cud be pulled off in an audio but in text it was eeh. just need to up creativity

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ok, each person had a nice verse, freestylin it and talkin shit

some nice metaphors used in there, and some nice wordplay and shit, it flowed well although the structure at times made it seem a little off........still good

i wud have given it a 7/10

but becuz the whole concept idea is not original then i give it 5/10

further elaboration
go download this track.......

Essentials ft. Dynasty & J2K - State Your Name

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LMFAO
he got that from audible crew from RB...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=171637
listen to "Aint heard that"
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ghlight=audible

what does that mean^^^^

nice word play flow was ok ill give it a 7 could be better

E-thugs....

:bored:

It was decent...but I would have to suggest doing this as an audio track instead...most thug open mics dont fly very well with most people.

Keep it up.

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Connect rhymes with direct lines got grammar books just
To hammer hooks in songs glamour shook domes of dust
This affair bright and blank like airtight tanks my flows blend
As nothing goes in or come out strong like rum no doubt end
Up drinking a cup and thinking corrupt dew rags flout in the wind
Got dismissed from my true job ready to twist new doorknobs
Lap situations with applications for work and burger King is involved
This’ll murder my bling and starve my pocket of cash like a mob
The hood histories has good theories like be ready to run when a gun
Is pulled may live to see another day that’s what mother say no fun