PhreeNapdizzle vs S.P
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No D/R Votes
No alias Votes
and etc.

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 08-12-05 at 12:43 AM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

S.P has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-05 12:14 AM.

PhreeNapdizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-05 12:32 AM.

Welcome to my battle stage, ya name is S.P?/
Im phree, im in rattled raged so quick! inter-est me/
You come to reverse my verse and hurts no doubt/
not that it works, but the fact that you straight jerk-in out/
if you really were the best, you should be resistant /
u like a bird in a nest, who needs assistance/
for instance.. i noticed u bawl out to get votes/
u probly travel the distance and crawl around to take notes!/

ayo nigga from chi-town where niggas like you would get shot and laided down*
i'll bury u in da ground cause dats we chicagoians get down cause will put u so deep u wont be found*
u dont punch or cut cause dat ma style but i will put .9 pound slug in ya ass and have u say ow*
now u wine'n like a lil bitch cuz ya ass got hit then ya pass out and ya and wakes and look around*
guess where ya ass at bitch........... ya in motha fuck'n clouds*
now dead and u on da milk carton miss'n and ya family ya is now bitch'n they cant find u chopped in ma kitcken*
now dat ya life has ended cause god aint give u a second chance cause life has ben suspended*

aight start ta vote

If my verse insnt understood.. ill explain here cuz i forgot to do that..

You come to reverse my verse and hurts no doubt/
not that it works, but the fact that you straight jerk-in out/
(hes gonna try to make his verse better than mine, and it hurts to see that its not working, hes just making an ass (or jerk) out of himself..)

if you really were the best, you should be resistant /
u like a bird in a nest, who needs assistance/
(the best people are resistant.. nothing can hurt them or beat them.. baby birds that live in their nests need constant attention and assistance from there mother (in this case, from n e 1)..)

for instance.. i noticed u bawl out to get votes/
u probly travel the distance and crawl around to take notes!/
(when i say bawl out to get votes, its more like when he says return the favor.. i voted for u.. do the same for me.. his sig is changed nowadays.. he probly crawls around (or snoops around) to other emcees to take notes on how to rap)


Uneeded explanations but they are there if u need them..

good verse.. good luck on the votes.. LEts see them comming Poeple!!

drop us some votes ya'll uppin
if u dont understand some shit dont fuckin vote

o yea by the way nice drop yoself
let da best man win and i did extend ma lines

Lets get this battle started.. get some votes in with reall feedback

Voted For: S.P

S.P stop using ya so much lol. Both of u guys need to punch first of all, but my vote went to S.P cuz he punched a lil, and tried to punch more. Battles need punches, remember that. Please vote on my battles in my sig..thanks

Thanx fo da vote
uppin ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin dis !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
S.p uppin

uppinn ya'll need da votes help me out
and also 3 ko

Voted For: S.P

Phree-OK...bad.All your bars were simplistic.No complexity whatsoever.FLow was meh...nothing special about it.get rid of the "/"...just makes it look newbish.And in the interest line and jerkinit out lines...why did you put hypens for?If it was wordplay..then ya...but it wasn't.And get some decent personals to ridicule your oppenent..don't just use generic punches.

S.P.-Man...flow was way better than Phree's...but you also lacked punches.You were also basic and lacked complexity.And why did you put the stars(*) when you didn't explain anything?..Anyways..you get my vote for actually seeming to diss and having a non-newb structure.

Vote-S.P
RTF

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!
mo votes dis shit is getting good

This was feedback posted for PhreeNapdizzle
 

Openings, closings: SP. wins for being harder. Phrees closing is wak, but i kinda like his second line to the opener.
Flow: Phree def wins. SP, your sentences are too long
Hits/Personals: Phree wins by a hair. SP, the part about the milk carton and getting chopped was awesome, but then again, you'd keep a chopped body in your kitchen?? LOL. and Phree had a great line with the bird in a nest needing assistance.

Its pretty even, but Phree would get my overall vote for this reason: SP, you killed your shit with flow. Flow is like a girl's face. Its the first thing you look at, and if it sucks, then there's no need to get interested, b/c a bad face ruins the whole girl. Bad flow ruins the whole verse. Sorry, i'm not much better.

Voted For: S.P

Welcome to my battle stage, ya name is S.P?/
Im phree, im in rattled raged so quick! inter-est me/
nah..

You come to reverse my verse and hurts no doubt/
not that it works, but the fact that you straight jerk-in out/
nah..

if you really were the best, you should be resistant /
u like a bird in a nest, who needs assistance/
ok...

for instance.. i noticed u bawl out to get votes/
u probly travel the distance and crawl around to take notes!/
nah...

i mean u just need to keep working on ya punches and all...


ayo nigga from chi-town where niggas like you would get shot and laided down*
i'll bury u in da ground cause dats we chicagoians get down cause will put u so deep u wont be found*
streched...

u dont punch or cut cause dat ma style but i will put .9 pound slug in ya ass and have u say ow*
now u wine'n like a lil bitch cuz ya ass got hit then ya pass out and ya and wakes and look around*
nah..

guess where ya ass at bitch........... ya in motha fuck'n clouds*
now dead and u on da milk carton miss'n and ya family ya is now bitch'n they cant find u chopped in ma kitcken*
nah..

now dat ya life has ended cause god aint give u a second chance cause life has ben suspended*
ok..

only reason i pick u is cuz u had 2 vars that was OK...
both need alot of work...

Uppin i K.Oed him
i thank everyone fo da votes

and PhreeNapdizzle
nice drop

aint dat a vote by the way..............
because he replyed to da thread
and voted but i will pm strobe about it

This was feedback posted for PhreeNapdizzle
 

yo phree kicked ass in this battle...flow was great along with vocab and originality...my vote=phreenapdizzle

how i close dis
i K.O'ed him so do i
get a win!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin fo 2 mo votes
strobe said i didnt put
3-K.O
so i'm still uppin
2 mo votes

Voted For: PhreeNapdizzle

wow both of yall are trash, but i vote phree cuz i liked his flow better, no quotables.
yall need to elevate the lyrics ALOT.

ez

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

uppin battle
give 2 more votes please
will return favor

uppin fo votes.................
give some please
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uppin fo votes.................
give some please
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uppin fo votes.................
give some please
1
need 2 mo votes

Voted For: S.P

checking polls...........................................ga t gat.....no simily

ooooooh shit get dat removed................................

uppin fo 2 mo votes..................
little help...........

uppin fo 2 mo votes help me close dis shit
uppin 2 mo votes

This was feedback posted for S.P
 

man. to be brutally honest, i didn't get what i expected from either of u. SP had more punches, i never really could catch the flow. some of phree's suff didn't make much since to me either. since your punches were about eual in strength, i'm a give this one to SP (since he had more)
SP: i liked your emotion (it felt like u were pissed when u wrote it), but u either need to flow better or change the way u type.
Phree: couple of your punches were weak (ex. 2nd one),
but i could catch your flow A LOT better than i could catch SP's. it was close. if Phree had better punches i would've went with him.

dat would be five votes
but dats feedbac so
uppin fo dat last Vote

uppin fo some!!!!!!!!!!!!
votes one mo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin uppin fo fo mo mo votes votes
give me one mo vote

Vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote
damn give me one mo vote

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give some damn votes damn
1 vote damn stupid MFer

.............................................uppin