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Xenofly 06-10-05 10:23 PM

Xenofly vs DaCument
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Was a bit 2 l8 in finishin but i don it now.
Sorry bout the no show, I'm hopin this will cancel it out lol.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-13-05 at 10:23 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 06-10-05 10:23 PM

Xenofly has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 10:23 PM.

System 06-10-05 10:24 PM

DaCument has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 10:24 PM.

Xenofly 06-10-05 10:25 PM

Its all there www.soundclick.com/wreklesss Called DaCument battle or somefin like that

DaCument 06-10-05 10:28 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/dacument_music.htm

again, lets get this poppin, because he feels bamboozled out of a lose, but good luck contender....

oh its the one that say's xenofly

DaCument 06-10-05 10:44 PM

yo we uppin on this shit.......give the feed back

Xenofly 06-10-05 10:44 PM

www.soundclick.com/wreklesss its called dacument battle

Dervla 06-10-05 11:03 PM

This was feedback posted for DaCument
 
Checking the polls....................Good drop To both

Xenofly 06-12-05 04:16 PM

cmon lets get som votes UPPIN^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^

DaCument 06-13-05 10:13 AM

stop sleepin....we uppin fam

Mad Dog 06-13-05 11:17 AM

Voted For: Xenofly

Xenofly: Listening...beat is some old skool vibe...weerd English accent...quality is hmm...it's ok ya know...punches are hmm...ok could be improved...lol @ careless album taste...nice rhyming...hip hop flip flop lol...hmm could be better beat kinbda dragged you down it was too basic not much to really gain emotion on ya know...but it's not a bad piece...ok moving on...actually ima listen again...rhyming is aight...feelin the flow it's good too close to the mic hearin a lot of hissin ya need to be further from it...specially the H's...Jay-Z line again...kinda repetative...i learned not to keep on the same thing...it's aight but like i said beat held ya back IMO...NOW moving on...

DaCument:...1st the verse is longer...always an advantage using the time you have unless you KNOW you dropped a BOMB on ya opponent in minimal time...to the verse...lol @ the intro...singin Kanye style...vocals...flow is nice...1st 4 bars mostly self-glory...really hmm a few played bars...lol @ soccer i woulda said football whorin UK...and i am UK...this really isn't a diss track you got mostly self-g...then like 1 diss every 3rd bar...overall a good track...but not a good diss track...

V/xenofly...not expecting no RTF...or if so...then hit my song...Thoughts :thumbup:

DaCument 06-13-05 12:53 PM

uppin...thanks for the feedback

Xenofly 06-16-05 11:20 AM

uppin this^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

B_Loco 06-16-05 01:40 PM

This was feedback posted for DaCument
 
This battle was one-sided....DaC took this all da way

DaCument 06-16-05 01:46 PM

still uppin fam

Xenofly 06-16-05 02:29 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by C_R_E_A_M
This battle was one-sided....DaC took this all da way


gotta vote up there^^^ also xplain ur votes uvawise they dont mean shit

Sixth Sense 06-17-05 10:16 AM

Voted For: DaCument

Man tight battle both u did ur thing but i was feeling DC verse more it had better everythin from his lines to punhces and to tha flow u both did good dont get me wrong XF but DC just brung more pain to hi verse u kno but good jobb to both of yall and keep it up
v// Dacument

E.C 06-17-05 01:14 PM

Voted For: DaCument

ight fam nice verse you should take this fam....

xenofly i dint no u was from u.k what part u from man??

E.C 06-17-05 01:15 PM

i al;ways do that soprry guys u'll wanna get that shit removed

Xenofly 06-17-05 01:21 PM

arite safe 4 the feedbak peeps.
im from london m8 where u from?

Cesar August 06-17-05 03:57 PM

Voted For: DaCument

i wasn't feeling the way Xenofly came at him...not too many good punches...seems like he just tried rapping, but stay up.

Dacument came good. Enough Punches...wasn't bad.

oh yeah xeno u need better quality of sound


Vote = Dacument

MaRVJay 06-22-05 02:14 AM

This was feedback posted for DaCument
 
yo fam dat beat was hot ya flow was good...but ur punchlines are wack...not hate dis is real talk maybe u got some shit but on dat track u really didn't have nun...n i will be gettin at u 4 dat battle....and yo dat stop da kid like birth control pill line...fab said it on smack dvd

Xenofly 06-22-05 05:21 PM

^^^ aiight so wheres my feed lol?

uppin this lets get this ova with.

TeamOne 06-23-05 01:36 AM

Voted For: DaCument

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu wonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn no doubt

E.C 06-23-05 09:06 AM

am from manchester.... i wanna audio battle wit u when i got some tiem man

Xenofly 06-23-05 12:11 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by FuxJustAWord
Voted For: DaCument

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu wonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn no doubt


xplain ur vote.............................................. ........................................

DaCument 06-24-05 05:18 AM

come on fam....this might as well be a tko, for real, let this shit end please......i'm getting tired of seeing it say 4-1, its pitiful, really!!!

be easy

Daubs 06-26-05 03:45 PM

Voted For: DaCument

intro voice is original i guess....
listening... DaC...
ahh nice beat when it kicks in...decent flow, not feelin the voice in the background... AMERICAN EXPRESS line was dope!!..hahaha birth control pills dope.....

ok lyrics were fire decent flow for the most part....sick beat.. good quality.....dope track.
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Xenofly

listening

beat is meh....

no intro

word to the accent, uk head...

few good punches, L sign stood out....

start of second half had a sick flow...
lyrics were meh...

Ok da gets this due to dissing the opponent more his lyrics were better with better punches and x, your beat was just too boring and not easy to ride.

no hate
rtf in mah sig or this gets dq'ed!!

you have 3 days!


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