teckniquess vs *lyrical madnes*
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-28-04 at 11:36 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

teckniquess has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-04 11:37 PM.

*lyrical madnes* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 04:18 AM.

yo step up to da stage i break u nose with 1 punch u didnt c it comin i am to fast i wil get my 1st win on u at last ill hit u hard down to tha floor soon it will be past//
beats u to da ground u got things on u head u got nocked out n thats without a dout i will kill u with a few slices ------- u dead drop to tha ground dont try n frown at last//

ill put u tho pain pain ull wanna die ill shot u just to put u tho ur missary from u los uve lossed ill hurt u until u toss u got no chance i got skill that u anit got tha right//
ill make diein ur game fuck ur wacko rhymes dont hit me 1 bit they just rebound ur weak so they hit u harder than some shit heads ryhmes ill push u from a sertain hight//

my ryhmes lyk game ur lyk j-z thats uir name coz j-z is wack ur so gonna get beat man u ugly cunt even my dog look better than u yer that wat i said ya im talkin to u//
man i bet u only got half a heart the other half broke when u got turned down so many times ha ha i cant rly blame them u ugly fuck get a life get outta here u gonna lose u no hu//

Opener......
you got da lyrical wordplay of twirked gays,wit hurt legs
still runnin/thinkin u can cope wit a nigga from da brigade

Killer
your rank at a standstill,whick explains y ur lyrics stand stiff
ur voters r the ones plannin 2 dickride u at da site of madness

Multi *Finisher*
Im never actin earnest
leave you in a blacken furnace
for packin da wackest verses,so when ur rhyme disperses
only place u gon get signed 2 is da taxidermist

OMG pleazzzzzzzeeeeee hurry and vote on dis battle...............

uppin yet again.......come on ill return da favor....

Voted For: *lyrical madnes*

ill vote for lyrical madnes
he voted for me and will again in bradley_thomas vs lil g bro
vote of r me man i need.
and me he wooped th other guys ass as i thought he would
man i hope he wins buy a mile

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Voted For: teckniquess

HOT SHIT!
Ya verse had everything, nice flow, good structure, mutliples, metaphors, vocab, didnt miss a damn thing. Hot smooth transistions between lines, hot closer and tight opener. All around good.

dickride like i dunno what....dat first vote need 2 be dqed......

Voted For: teckniquess

lyrical madness:

1.too many threats in there
use some wordply and not that 8mile shit
since this is text and you can think aout
much more is expected of you iight?
and structure and flow was bad...
elevate man

teckinques:struture wasn't good
but you had actual wordplay and personals in there
tho had some self glory it still beat Lyrical's

vote/teck
peace

This was feedback posted for *lyrical madnes*
 

can't vote cuz u in my crew but i wunna see da poll

uppin to KO dis nigga....drop a link and ill return da favor...

uppin uppin uppin...come on wit da votes yall........

yo im uppin for more votes..tryin 2 get dis closed out....i know lyrical madnes want dis closed out too...come on yall~~i will return da favor if u drop a link.

Voted For: teckniquess

damn i think this battle is won.
tec had better structure, cuz lyrical madness rhyme was off like hell. tec had good punches, good meta at the end, and a overall better verse.If lyrical improved his structure, hed get more votes

u a free agent...u need to come to da 50th brigade..check my sig and look at our roster....ALSO im UPPIN THIS BATLLE FOR 2 MORE VOTES..........

uppin uppin uppin uppin...im tryin to get dis fuckin battle closed out....stop sleepin on da votes..ill return da favor just drop a link...

uppin uppin uppin this battle..drop a link if u want me to return and honest vote..holla back

somebody..just any 2 people....end this for me...and drop a link so i can return da favor..and if ur not in a battle when u get in one pm me da link just sum 1 vote...

This was feedback posted for *lyrical madnes*
 

personnally both of yah verses were weak lyrical madness man u had bad flow hard to follow teckniquess not bad but punches werent great all in all it was an aight battle i guess

Voted For: teckniquess

ha ha teckniquess killed this battle. lyrical madness had no chance at all. no punches no nothing. his whole verse was crowded. teckniquess killed him in about 3 barz.

Voted For: teckniquess

Vote goes to Teckniquess!!

Opener: you got da lyrical wordplay of twirked gays,wit hurt legs still runnin/thinkin u can cope wit a nigga from da brigade
well, preety good intro, slightly hard to understand but very good idea and pretty well executed!

yo step up to da stage i break u nose with 1 punch u didnt c it comin i am to fast i wil get my 1st win on u at last ill hit u hard down to tha floor soon it will be past//
beats u to da ground u got things on u head u got nocked out n thats without a dout i will kill u with a few slices ------- u dead drop to tha ground dont try n frown at last//
Very poor opener here, for a start the sentences are far to long and it has no real meaning to it!

Opener goes to teckniquess!!

Flow: teckniquess had very good flow, it was very consistant with sillables and rymes and was well strucured.

Lyrical Madness WTF ARE YOU ON!!! there was 86 words in your first to bars!!!!! you are ment to keep to 12-15 sillables per sentence, your rymes and flow was just wack and becuase of all the extra words, the points of your punches were lost, i have seen some of you other battles and you have good flow and good punches in them, get back to writing like that otherwise you will keep losing!

Flow to teckniquess

Punches to teckniquess, lyrical madness didnt have any stong punches!

no hate to lyrical madness, sorry man this was just a pathertic battle on your half, well done teckniquess, please return the favour by voting on one of the battles below!