Elooch Vs Killacamflow
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WoW im checking in but wow this is all E Looch i know u going to get me but hey ill try coming wit something
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sonnin cats wit my guns that clap an make lungs collapse
if u put tazors on railroads u couldnt have stunnin tracks toss"Big Rocs"at ya dome so u can be head strong then put ya legs in ya chest leavin u dead wrong i'll Make Ya Own Words Hurt U Like Havin A Toothache i know u Pussy So Im Treatin This Battle Like Date Rape u a manic depressant ya frail words just clasp to feel strife hold my aaorta an heart above to make ya grasp for real life aim at ya chest and put the beats away like retired dj's closin rs tryouts cause for u the shits becomin a cliche :nono: |
Fam,you really need to stop actin hard like you rob and snub cats//
You the only 16 year old i know that still watches rugrats// I blow more wind then a Air CondiTioner// I kill more germs then a MediCine Perscriptioner// Im the next best thing on this Rb Text Tourney// RS is checking on this battle to see if im Worthy// I'll put up numbers like im wearing a Jevon Kearse Jersey// Im gonna just kill ya rhymes and s8 Own ya// My verse is so harsh you gonna need a Heart Donar// he knows he gay, focused aim, but he bout to notice we dont flow the same// plus, his moms thoughts are 'gutter' when my dicks up her alley like bowling lanes // i come bustin & manualy cussin & casualy causin cucussion's & casualty's// you can rock a tie-die shirt and bell-bottoms but ya verse'll never-master-PEACE// I tried bringing some new shit to ya let see if this gonna win it for me.....Nice flow E Looch |
RS-Royal Sickness....
Jevon Kearse Jersey-9-0 meaning im winining 9-0 s8 :) |
elooch took dis 1 wit ease killa work on yo structure drop was ok but your flow kinda lacked punches neva connected.....
quick breakdown 4 looch bestline-sonnin cats wit my guns that clap an make lungs collapse if u put tazors on railroads u couldnt have stunnin tracks beat him wit dat line worsteline-none killa bestline-RS is checking on this battle to see if im Worthy// I'll put up numbers like im wearing a Jevon Kearse Jersey// ok i guess worsteline-stretched linez + 2many looch-9/10 killa-7/10 winner-e looch |
ight preciate somebody votin
seem like my battles always the last to close but ummm 1-0 |
killa got this one, his shit was hot, that was the hottest i ever seen u wrote keep it up. Also elooch your shit was tight too, but it didn't catch my eye like killa's verse did, so my vote is killa!!!
Favorite lines: he knows he gay, focused aim, but he bout to notice we dont flow the same// plus, his moms thoughts are 'gutter' when my dicks up her alley like bowling lanes // FUNNY AS HELL..LOL!!!!!!!!! |
1-1 let get this shit starting i want to see if i beat the big E LOOCH!!!!! lOl
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wtf who is that an since when was they in this tournament
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a person on this......she voted so.....i just sayed 1-1 idk this si my first time doing this
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lol ight but i dont think u can send people to vote on these just gotta wait for these people to vote
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Looch:
sonnin cats wit my guns that clap an make lungs collapse if u put tazors on railroads u couldnt have stunnin tracks ^^Strong start, could be used differently but it was good. aim at ya chest and put the beats away like retired dj's closin rs tryouts cause for u the shits becomin a cliche ^^Strong ending...made me laugh... Kid: RS is checking on this battle to see if im Worthy// I'll put up numbers like im wearing a Jevon Kearse Jersey// ^^Damn this was weak.......played....but has to be yo best...the rest was self glorification. V/: Looch Why? Cuz i say so....lol Nah he had betta overall verse with betta punches....elevate kid |
E LooCh : sonnin cats wit my guns that clap an make lungs collapse
if u put tazors on railroads u couldnt have stunnin tracks ^^Hottest Bar between both ya'll verses.. SykK ass opener^^ ^^ ThIs Bar Definately won it for you your whle verse had real nice wordplay...Keep doin you.. ^^ Killa : Your verse was alrihht needed to flow better and you attempted some word play but it wasnt there ..... keep practicin .... Vote -_- E LooCh |
can i say....***d/r**d/r**
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can crew vote?
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i do not care anymore shit he won as you can tell so oh well we will see....go ahead and vote for him
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sonnin cats wit my guns that clap an make lungs collapse
if u put tazors on railroads u couldnt have stunnin tracks NICE PUNCH toss"Big Rocs"at ya dome so u can be head strong then put ya legs in ya chest leavin u dead wrong HAHA,I LIKE THIS THE BEST OUTTA THIS BATTLE i'll Make Ya Own Words Hurt U Like Havin A Toothache i know u Pussy So Im Treatin This Battle Like Date Rape KINDA WEAK u a manic depressant ya frail words just clasp to feel strife hold my aaorta an heart above to make ya grasp for real life OK PUNCH aim at ya chest and put the beats away like retired dj's OK PUNCH closin rs tryouts cause for u the shits becomin a cliche DIDNT REALLY LIKE THE CLOSE Fam,you really need to stop actin hard like you rob and snub cats// You the only 16 year old i know that still watches rugrats// GAY I blow more wind then a Air CondiTioner// JESUS,THATS WACK I kill more germs then a MediCine Perscriptioner// WHO CARES ABOUT KILLIN GERMS? Im the next best thing on this Rb Text Tourney// RS is checking on this battle to see if im Worthy// NOTHIN THERE I'll put up numbers like im wearing a Jevon Kearse Jersey// ..... Im gonna just kill ya rhymes and s8 Own ya// My verse is so harsh you gonna need a Heart Donar// WEAK he knows he gay, focused aim, but he bout to notice we dont flow the same// plus, his moms thoughts are 'gutter' when my dicks up her alley like bowling lanes // WACK i come bustin & manualy cussin & casualy causin cucussion's & casualty's// you can rock a tie-die shirt and bell-bottoms but ya verse'll never-master-PEACE// PROLLY UR BEST LINE.....BUT I WASNT REALLY FEELIN IT KILLA,CUZ I REFUSE TO CALL U CAM FLOW,CUZ CAM DEFINITELY DONT FLOW LIKE THAT SON.............UR VERSE WAS WEAK....UR PUNCHES.....I DUNNO MAN....I BLOW MORE WIND THAN AIRCONDITIONERS? WTF.....I KILL MORE GERMS THAN MEDICINE PRESCRIPTIONERS???? KID,WTF ARE U THINKIN? HOW IS THAT A PUNCH....THATS GAY.......SORRY BUT THAT WAS JUST PLAIN ASS WACK..........ONLY NOOBS WOULD SPIT SOMETHING LIKE THAT CUZ THEY GOT NO IDEA HOW TO MAKE A GOOD PUNCH......N UR NAME,I U'RE A DISGRACE TO THE ARTIST......................VOTE LOOCH SHAMIRA, I DUNNO WTF U WERE THINKIN VOTIN FOR THIS KID.....I THINK U HAVE NO IDEA WHAT A GOOD VERSE LOOKS LIKE.......... |
vote elooch better vocab flow punches and structure he had a bette opener and closer cam elevate kid
e work on personals cam work on everything e did better |
ight thats like 100000000-1
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E Looch
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