Mr. Big_D vs BlackDeathDB
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/rin
No hate votes



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-02-05 at 06:34 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

BlackDeathDB has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 06:04 PM.

Mr. Big_D has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 06:14 PM.

Yo, this is God verse Jesus, theres no room for play
Cuz im the predator, and all you can do is prey (pray)
this is my pay day, money's comin up in my arms
while ur last hay day......... was workin on farms
wat im causin is harm, u better be alarmed son, its the D
u could be in higher ed. and still not know where "I.B." (i be)
but before i leave, ill stick u wit I.V.s, ima rape this fag
unlike Jay, ur rhymes are played..... ur faded, Black

Mr Big D, a rookie while i got a vet degree.
see, the only thing big is his envy for me.
Saying it right here, i'm the new premier
Starting a career while this boi disappears
I already garunteed a rookie of the year
while Big D just rams lil boys in the rear
I'm blowing this guy up like nagasaki
while hes just blowing guys who play hockey
Might get cocky cause he blew some jockeys
getting rocky, cause he yellin COCK ME COCK ME

upppppin for votes up in here !!!!

Voted For: BlackDeathDB

ima have to go with blackdeath on dis one he had nice attempts at multis...he had harder hitting punches....Mr. u punches was like lil...elementary...both of you need to elevate and be more complex with your votes....
v/blackdeath
return da favor in dis battle below...explained votes only
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uppppiiiiinnnn on this!!!!!

Voted For: BlackDeathDB

I thought both verses were close...but I reckon Black had better and harder hitting punches and vocab too, both of you have good flow...but I think Black death also had the better structure and flow.

So overall I voted for: BlackDeathDB for harder hitting punches, better vocab and flow overall

return dat vote nigga....da link is up above on my vote post

i need to get a lot more posts to vote for battles, i'll be on it though, thanks

hahahahah..... lmao at him askin for the favor returned........ yea..... those are pretty bad votes...... DB only had dick and gay lines for the whole thing....... really played..... but w/e, uppin, (and his last line makes absloutely no sense..... its just multis)

always gonna cry? i didn't say anything about your bullshit lines, some that don't make sense, and some that are just shitty

dick and gay lines? the only dick i talk about is you

Voted For: Mr. Big_D

Mr bid D.....
Yo, this is God verse Jesus, theres no room for play
Cuz im the predator, and all you can do is prey (pray)
pretty good opener here....hit good

this is my pay day, money's comin up in my arms
while ur last hay day......... was workin on farms
not too good....self glory in the first line....2nd line didnt hit all that well

wat im causin is harm, u better be alarmed son, its the D
u could be in higher ed. and still not know where "I.B." (i be)
ehhh it hit....just not too good.....ok bar here

but before i leave, ill stick u wit I.V.s, ima rape this fag
unlike Jay, ur rhymes are played..... ur faded, Black
decent closer....good play on his name....


Blackdeath..........
Mr Big D, a rookie while i got a vet degree.
see, the only thing big is his envy for me.
hit ok....too simple though....ok opener

Saying it right here, i'm the new premier
Starting a career while this boi disappears
not good....just not good

I already garunteed a rookie of the year
while Big D just rams lil boys in the rear
gay jokes are played out....self glory is not good

I'm blowing this guy up like nagasaki
while hes just blowing guys who play hockey
wtf? no

Might get cocky cause he blew some jockeys
getting rocky, cause he yellin COCK ME COCK ME
not a good closer.....


vote goes to big d for harder hitting punches and better complexity........even though there wasnt that much....multis goes to big d, meta go to big d, punches go to big d, pretty much everything goes to big d

this DB kid sed he didnt even expect a VOTE..... so keep this votin for me comin

when i say that? this guy wants to win so much he makign shit up, thats horrible.....

vote on this shit niggas
.

Where the votes at UPPPInnn, this battle is masterful

^^^^ stealin my lines and post count......... i swear

shut yo stealin lines ass up, my post is 19, yours is .....19....

Voted For: BlackDeathDB

both was nice got flow and rhymes busting outta ya ass few bits or wordplay and vocab both had punches and persnals this was a nice battle close and hard to vote but i gotta give some1 my vote so im going to go with BD came a little harder on the punches used more vocab flowed like a muther fucker i liked his verse he gets my vote

man this is some major bs........ lmao..... DB is gonna take this, its gonna be too funny...... i wanna have someone explain to me wat his last line means?!?!? it doesnt make anysense.... just a bunch of random words that rhymed with "cocky"

please calm down, mr big d, its alright... always next time......

Voted For: Mr. Big_D

opener-big d
punches-big d
wordplay-defintily big d
multies-tie
vocab-tie
closer-bid d

BlackDeath-went on too long about sucking cock...flow was off...try to put more time into your verse...fav. line-closer, cuz it made me laugh the hardest (dont know if thats good or bad)
mr.big_d-goo wordplay...flow was okay, but off in spots...couldve used more multies in the verse...fav. line-2nd line cuz of wordpaly...good closer

both-both people had good closer but shoodve had a better vocab...big mainly won because of his wordplay and punches...i see definite potential in big d, would like to see you have a long battle...death, you need to elevate first homie, THEN start taking on peeps....keep it up ya'll

v/Mr. Big_D

Voted For: Mr. Big_D

Yo, this is God verse Jesus, theres no room for play
Cuz im the predator, and all you can do is prey (pray)
decent opener
this is my pay day, money's comin up in my arms
while ur last hay day......... was workin on farms
this punch was okay, weak tho
wat im causin is harm, u better be alarmed son, its the D
u could be in higher ed. and still not know where "I.B." (i be)
okay, pretty decent
but before i leave, ill stick u wit I.V.s, ima rape this fag
unlike Jay, ur rhymes are played..... ur faded, Black
weak punch, didn’t land

Mr Big D, a rookie while i got a vet degree.
see, the only thing big is his envy for me.
weak punch
Saying it right here, i'm the new premier
Starting a career while this boi disappears
what? Self-glory 1st line
I already garunteed a rookie of the year
while Big D just rams lil boys in the rear
punch wasn’t really a punch
I'm blowing this guy up like nagasaki
while hes just blowing guys who play hockey
wack punch here

Overall big_d took this one, punches were harder
Had a better structure, flow was good and the vocab
Was okay

uppppppppppppppppiiinnnnnnnnnnn, come on , i know i killed this man

yea right...... thats sum bullshit............... i murdered this man

kill this hoe!

Voted For: BlackDeathDB

both of you are extremely terrible and should shoot yourselves ..

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

give me this last vote so i can finish this battle, UPPPIN

This was feedback posted for Mr. Big_D
 

juss end this kids career.....

This was feedback posted for BlackDeathDB
 

this is RVs future???????????????????????????????????????????