Music Is Dying
 

Music Is Dying


Follow Me. .

Deep into the Music, where a Beat is Useless
And writers voice Alone is the Soul of Featured Blueprints.
the Speakers Intuitive Aspects, have Gasped their Last Breath
and from here on out, drum & base’ll be mentioned in Past Tense
the Absent Minded wont Follow, & will try to Define it as Hollow
but I strongly believe poetry will be the ‘Rhyme’ of Tomorrow.
Lines of ‘Borrowed’ beat samples, sound amped & create hype,
But that cant compare to how raw emotion Sounds on the Mic.
You cant put Down or Define how an artist Plots In His Head
Or can speak with Intensity, and make you feel What Is Said.
Now that’s Real lyricism, no instrumental For Help
Just an artist with something to say and then, Hoping He’s Felt.
Exposing his Writers Voice, and theirs Legions To Teach
Beneath the music lies its one true sign: Freedom Of Speech
Hiphop’s not of Interest To Me, so its Useless Trying
I see spoken word as the future.


Music Is Dying.


RB Legend

this peice was off the hook...great concept and you stayed on topic throughout the whole song...flow was there and you had sum nice vocab....

i'd give it a 9.5/10

Great piece Camarac. Nice conept and flowwas quality, couldword play and vocab keep it up. Nice to c more qualiy homegrown talent emerging from England.

hit my rhyme called time bomb

^itl explode

tight verse....id say 9/10

Nigga this was a 10/10 Sheiiiiiiiiiiiiit, RB legends Mahfuckahz!

Nice shit right here. I liked the flow and all. Keep elevaten play.

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

i like, very good verse u had a subject and stuck with it all thru the verse.

^ that IS the main point to open mics = /

nice peice man, good vocab and rhyme structure alot of ill lines, umm dont really know what you did wrong, well write somethen longer next time so the pleasure lasts longer lol, could you hit my oeice up called change of heart and mind, ited be great if u couled thanx
9.5/10

I read this one @ Hype I believe... a good read and something to think about. Much respect.

Ive only dropped one piece at Hype and this wasnt it = /

Dope Piece Man

Definately Legends, I'm Loving the Message Your Putting Across With the Imagery

Keep it Up

its good
mabey Rbs Legends
.Mabey
Nice imagery
Word Choice'
All that.

yup.

...

Cam...as usual nice,
The message was great, its definately how i feel about this shit...
it was just a great original topic and your skill for writing just
emphasized it even more......
Great stuff, props

Maybeee Legends...mmmm i think so

It was legends, fuck thinking, this piece has been archived everywhere i posted it at.

my net dick is huge.

holla

This was pretty good, joe. Good flow, and stucture. You put a nice spin on a subject thats gettin a little played really with all this music is dying, hip-hop is dying type talk, but you flipped it well so kudos to that..
Dope shit...

this was some ill writin man....the flow and good structure, just flew it off the tongue......ya vocab was on point... with a good concept......Rep'n England good man....Pc......

Cam is godly.

Yep.

sic - all i got to say

= /

Real Dope Man. Been Seein Alotta Music Is Dying Posts, But You Flipped This Shit Well And Made Me Push The Wack Dying Threads Inta The Back Of My Head. Flow Was On-Point The Whole Piece, So Yah, I Enjoyed Readin It. Definately Ill. Keep This Shit Up.

-Formula.

My Net Dick Is Bigger Than Thou's. . .

i enjoy golden showers rather tha baths


holla

Well I've seen you at several forums... Hype Rapsearch uh, theres more... AHH I think? well anyway, dont matter.

the camarac at RS isnt me, its some kid who went and stole my name. = / i only registered at Hype recently - dropped one open mic as Baron Mynd so if you've seen more of my stuff there - he's fake too ..

yo this is a real ill ass fuck piece very nice and poetic i love da way u started wit:

"Deep into the Music, where a Beat is Useless
And writers voice Alone is the Soul of Featured Blueprints."

and then u kept me reading to find out how deep ur meaning goes wit reading this line:

"Lines of ‘Borrowed’ beat samples, sound amped & create hype,
But that cant compare to how raw emotion Sounds on the Mic."

and then u went deeper wit da emotion and da thought of lyrics wit this line:

"Now that’s Real lyricism, no instrumental For Help
Just an artist with something to say and then, Hoping He’s Felt."

and on of da realist thought and idea is all written in one line and which happens to be my favorite line in this whoe piece:

"Beneath the music lies its one true sign: Freedom Of Speech"

and to end it all wit a nice line:

"Hiphop’s not of Interest To Me, so its Useless Trying
I see spoken word as the future."

overall this was a real good example of a tight poetic keystyle wit a real meaning..ill ass fuck work hope to read some more of ur stuff

Legendry. .

That is all, I've been too lazy too reply to this, but I have read it many times,

Pz.

that was a great verse...you held every bit off aspect in it and your flow was like usual lol, i really enjoyed this definitly one of the best open mic verses been writtin this month pz

nice piece as usual cam. but legends? maybe. i think you cam put up legends whenever you want then. lol
you already know the deal. dope shit.

True words were spoken here... Let's be honest there are only a few TRUE emcees that the mainstream is aware of.
-Good use of vocab to create a mental picture

I told you this was ..

Damn this was hot. Yea it should be in the RB Legends. Keep spittin cam

Return the favor
Corrupted Mind

this was a greta piece but i didn't like the message in it deep tho 8.5/10 if Jae Cyphs Blandoverated shock is in legends then this should be to

it was dope dogg but music aint dyin

this was MY opinion, in my opinion, music IS dying .. and i stated why in this piece, kids into hiphop now are after a beat to nod their heads too and a catchy hook to sing to - that isnt hiphop. To me, hiphop's what the artist has to say, his words, the emotion, the delivery, and how he can make you feel what is said - nothing can compare to that, and i see real hiphop heads who feel like me will start listening to more spoken word / poetry because thats the way forward, you'll see ..

^
lol u coo so i dont wanna beef, but thats only one side of hip hop your forgetting the four elements

DJing/producing is one of them (i know its not officialy producing but hey wtf im tryna maek a point) so basically emceeing is just a quarter of hip hop.

we need balance