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SPuLâ„¢ 07-26-04 02:41 PM

L.I./LoT (1-0-0) v.s Poetic Justice/Madd Dogg (0-1-0)
 
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10-20 lines

check by Wed

verse by Fri

Votes by Sun


PJ gets minus 10 lines for no showin' last week

Good luck to both

Crossword 07-26-04 04:51 PM

check

L.I. 07-26-04 04:53 PM

yo..

Mad Dog 07-27-04 05:05 AM

in.

PoEtIc JuStIcE 07-27-04 09:31 AM

im in........so i only get 10 lines max...rite?

Crossword 07-27-04 10:58 AM

yeah

Crossword 07-28-04 11:51 AM

First we have Mad..d Dog...g, call him jimmy from southpark ...
Worried more about you bitin or feedin then the way you bark.
Mental maze, i keep my mind active, theirs seem to graze
like arnold V satan, this is your end of days
I got you blacked out, like your circuits blew..
Arent you sad now, I lowered myself, and still can beat you?
People just vote for D2R, cause they think its Dicks2Ride
Crew claims to rhyme, in reality their destiny hasnt arrived

Now i was going to drop my verses yesterday
But...i just past PJ's sig 5 minutes ago today
Claim to be poetically sick, well it must be literal
Cause your poems havent been nominated, intelligence is too little
Here i got something that should have you're mind blown
Name one person you beat...That someone here knows


didnt find a reason to try... cmon LI, bring something to the plate.... hahaha

Crossword 07-28-04 11:55 AM

Hellz yeah... came weak, saw no reason to come with heat...

But the first line is because his name in the thread has two d's and two g's, i didnt even look at his actual name...

L.I. 07-28-04 06:22 PM

Ill spit shit and really itll look like these kids careers...
Cause the way they wreak of wackness they aint came near...
And how neither establish a spot on RB they have no shot on RV...
They both can feed off my verse and would come up starving...
Lot already demolished the kids so the cleaning up is my duty...
Hurtin they feelings by dissin these pussys.. PMS'in they get moody...
Kids running along the path of greatness.. keep gettin stuck in the ruts...
Poetics crew potential is just like his sig.. he aint makin the cuts...
Mad Dog dont need to be dissed.. all u gotta do is look at his verse...
Me and Lot spit wack shit and yall stick came out as the worst...

Do i need to try?

Mad Dog 07-29-04 05:04 AM

My verse
 
Jus lettin yall know that PJ wont show...he outta the site but heres my verse...

(Crossword)
U controlable ur names like ur flow solvable jus like u true bitch u emotional,
Burst ur bubble, aka LOT u aint no trouble chances of u in a river of tears...
...probable,

And as for liquor...u younger than me u gettin served but liquor it aint...
...u been told,
And ur IM name look beneath my robe!?!...why would we do that?...
...to see the penis u really behold?,

Crossed ur emotion and like ur avy u got sliced in half,
U should take another name change girl...
...coz this'll happen everytime we cross paths,

(L.I)
And as for this cat...altogether his flows Lyrically Inadequate,
The closest u'll get to rap...is locked up in-a-casket, (thats a rap)

Sweaty ass fag wit his ball bags sagged from him gettin his nuts sucked,
Pay attention...this is what happens when you Dick Ride too much,

And i don't mean to be personal dawg and to ur girlfriend jus gotta job to do,
Hang on u 14!...ahh lil boy playin truent shouldn't u be in school,

No label would give u a chance...if they flooded u wit monopoly cards,
Only time u gettin heard...is wit the christmas choir singing songs 2 retards,

And as for Cryme Cyndicate...im still amazed on how u got into it?,
L.I aint talented at all...u tried 4 master minds this is 1 desperate bitch,
(End Verse=20lines)

/\ i'd give ya the link but they closed down

MaNiPuLaTiOn 07-29-04 07:23 AM

yo.if i mads new tag partner,,can i drop in dis battle?
i`ll only go wit the 10 lines pj was allowed..
lemme know b4 the dealine
jus askin.

Crossword 07-29-04 11:03 AM

ehh. im thinking that you should PM SPuL or something and see...

MaNiPuLaTiOn 07-30-04 09:14 AM

ok.i cnt drop in dis battle mad............
but im in 4 tha nxt..

shame coz l.i n crossword didnt come as hard as they can
lucky escape.lol.

...Voke... 07-30-04 11:10 AM

L.I and Lot- average verse from yall expected more *shakes head*
you had some decent punches ok personals some wit not the best
Ive seen but pretty decent drop from both

Mad Dog- whats up with your partners..lol
You had a decent verse but the personals on lot
About him being a girl..lol hes a guy
That hurt your verse but the rest was pretty decent

v/L.I and Lot

Mad Dog 07-30-04 11:19 AM

LOT's a guy? oh shit sorry dawg it was jus the name n all...sorry bout that...damn thatys gonna hurt...oh well

gunit101. 07-30-04 11:26 AM

v/ Li Lot

Terrible battle though...

Bark/bite line from Lot was coo I guess. LI's was readable. Mad Dog... just elevate a bit... try to read good battles and the such.

Crossword 07-30-04 11:42 AM

made it horrible on purpose... didnt need it to be good. 2-0 us...

E Looch 07-30-04 01:43 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by gunit101.
v/ Li Lot

Terrible battle though...

Bark/bite line from Lot was coo I guess. LI's was readable. Mad Dog... just elevate a bit... try to read good battles and the such.



word^

mad dogg just work on wordin your lines better to make thme shorter an help hit harder but structure is fuckin pointless some of the shit u had was ight just could of done alot more with a 2 on 1 battle


lady incarnated aka l.i didnt try so really no need to break donwy a shit

same with liquorish on termites dont need to go in depth of the verses

vote li/ crossword puzzle

Paris Hilton666 07-30-04 04:57 PM

it was a bad battle I agree but honestly li and lot were and had a better verse

so my vote goes to li and lot

FlowIntelligent. 07-31-04 12:24 AM

LoT & L.I....You Two Had Decent Verses...LoT I Was Surprised At How Wack You Came...It Was A Bad Verse And Something I Wouldnt Expect To See From You...K.I Your Verse Wasnt Too Good Either But It Was Better Than Mad Dog's Alone I Think If PJ Would Have Shown And Dropped Something Hott This Would Have Been A Closer Battle...Mad Dog Work On Better Personals Harder Punches And A Better Rhyme Scheme...Your Structure Isnt Too Good Either I Think Putting It Inot Lines Instead Of All The Periods Would Be Hotter...You Had A Decent Verse But Not Enough To Beat L.I And LoT Better Luck Next Time

V/ L.I & LoT

~!1!~

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Crossword 07-31-04 10:21 AM

^ thats sad, cause you said if he came and dropped it would have been a CLOSER battle... hahaha.

-Zone Out- 08-01-04 03:51 AM

^I like your sig.

Crossword 08-01-04 09:43 PM

Yeah, i stole it from some kid who wasnt worthy of handling such a creation he made... :)

SPuLâ„¢ 08-02-04 12:17 AM

Closed L.I./LoT win 5-0


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