Inception vs Ultimatum
 

Battle Rules:

6 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 11-21-04 at 08:11 PM

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Ultimatum has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-04 07:49 PM.

Inception has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-04 08:00 PM.

I'll Leave Thiz Wh0re Sore From Hordez Of Holez Lookin Similar To Porez
Im UnPredictable...He Could Do Inventory And Not No What I Have In Store
U Beaten.. And I Aint Even Scorch-Yet, Leave Ya Corpze In Four-Shredz
But Im Leavin Thiz Baby In Hiz Crib Like Housez Wit No Porch-Stepz
You Hear Tha Soundz-Of-Ghostz, My Clipz Wrap Around-N-Choke
Beazy Muzt Be Wearen Turtleneckz, Tha Way My Shellz Surround-Hiz-Throat
Dizlocate All Tha Bonez In Ur Body & Have You Really Feeling Out-Of-Place
Punchez Make Him See Starz Around Hiz Head Like A Night Out-In-Space
Ult. Aint Tha Answer To Problemz So Forget Test Questionz While I Select Blessinz
Detect Confessionz Cus Tha Closest Thing He Came To Touchin A Nine Iz Molestin A Freshman
Herez An Ultimatum Here Let Me State-Um Turn A Speculater Or Join Witnezz Protection
Have Ammo Accommodate Hiz Appearance An He'll Leave The Hospital Another Specimen!!!!!

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Voted For: Inception

Flow: Blah
Punches: Inception
Personals: Blah Neither
Wordplay: Eh Neither
Metas: Inception
Multis: Inception
Enjoyment: Blah Both I Guess

Vote: Inception

Explanation: His Punches Were More Direct And Hard Hitting and had a few good metas in there .. aight battle .. stay elevating .. stay up 1

Voted For: Inception

Voted for INception

ight good battle but i was feelin incep verse alot more. It was much more creative n had better wordplay then Ulti

In ya punches were ok but not as hard as they could have been
Strucutre was a lil shaky at times but i still was able to stay with your verse
flow was good n easy to keep with
multies i didnt really see any so ya need to elevate on that
personals didnt really see any either elevate on that

Ulti ya verse was good ya punches was good to but not to strong
ya seemed very basic in ya verse not much creativity
structure was good
flow was good as well
Personals Didnt see any
multies didnt see any

overall:
Flow- tie
Punches- In
Structure- Ulti
Personals- None
Multies- None

tied up but the tie breaker

creativity- In

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Voted For: Inception

Ultimatum:

>Incepetion Your Not >Just Beginning< You've Just Ended Like The Presidential Election
Kids >Gay< Like >Empire< When They See Each Other They Catch An Erection
^^ehh 4/10
Your Confidence Has Just Bin Damaged As Soon As You Accepted This Challenge
You Wouldn't Elevate If You Boarded A Jet, There For I Got This Advantage
^^played concept 3/10
Your Congestion System Is Having Hard Time Digesting,Need Some Phillips??
My Punches Did That Damage,You Pitiful Bitch Your Harmless As Tulips....
^^ehh 4/10
On The Mic,I'll Blow Your Whole Style Up As If I Was Dynamite Despite
The Fact That Your Whack As Thug Life....I'll Banish You Off This Site
^^no 2/10
Intensifying Is'nt It The Effect Of My Punch You Straight Pussy Like Panties In A Bunch
^^no 2/10

Overall: 15/50 (30%)


Inception:

I'll Leave Thiz Wh0re Sore From Hordez Of Holez Lookin Similar To Porez
Im UnPredictable...He Could Do Inventory And Not No What I Have In Store
^^decent metaphor 5/10
U Beaten.. And I Aint Even Scorch-Yet, Leave Ya Corpze In Four-Shredz
But Im Leavin Thiz Baby In Hiz Crib Like Housez Wit No Porch-Stepz
^^decent bar good meta 6/10
You Hear Tha Soundz-Of-Ghostz, My Clipz Wrap Around-N-Choke
Beazy Muzt Be Wearen Turtleneckz, Tha Way My Shellz Surround-Hiz-Throat
^^sounds bitten 1/10
Dizlocate All Tha Bonez In Ur Body & Have You Really Feeling Out-Of-Place
Punchez Make Him See Starz Around Hiz Head Like A Night Out-In-Space
^^dope bar 8/10
Ult. Aint Tha Answer To Problemz So Forget Test Questionz While I Select Blessinz
Detect Confessionz Cus Tha Closest Thing He Came To Touchin A Nine Iz Molestin A Freshman
^^good meta good punch 7/10
Herez An Ultimatum Here Let Me State-Um Turn A Speculater Or Join Witnezz Protection
Have Ammo Accommodate Hiz Appearance An He'll Leave The Hospital Another Specimen!!!!!
^^no 3/10

Overall: 30/60 (50%)


Vote: Inception


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Voted For: Ultimatum

ok Inception u cant be talking about guns first of all, second ur verse was hella strecthced which mad eit have bad flow and some of ur vocab was way off and far from rhyming. Ultimatum wins for better punches and im thinknig a more thought out verse...check the sig

Voted For: Inception

weak battle...inception got it for better punches and shit.Ya know...

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Voted For: Inception

good drop u get tha vote inception......nice vocab flow everything was jus descent....no hate on the otha dude jus postin my honest opinion~~~peace~~~