Ice Pick vs DRAG~ON
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DRAG~ON has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 11:27 AM.
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Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 11:31 AM.
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diss cat gotta disease from eatin 2 many beans
think he can battle me,but like da CELTICS i got 2many green... got a 8-2 record go head n make dat 8-3 cuz woop ass so good n water u couldn't even SEA me man u a weiny like da oscar mayor hot dog car n gettin drinks from club is da only time u c a good BAR u weak n it ain't no other way 2 explain diss n u gone b in outer space after i kick URANUS n ain't nuttin much 2 say 2 nigga dat got it all but me...not u if u was KOBE u couldn't ball n like da laundry detergant dats ALL wiped out diss dirt spot cuz ya beats wouldn't b BUMPIN if it was infected wit CHICKEN POXS... |
yo vote 4 my battles
DRAG~ON vs phatinum http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138668 killah http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138650 str8_hood http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138722 thanx uppin 4 votes |
Yall gunna feel this 2 styles for ya ass
I leave u flatter the diet Sprite in the height of ur life, this kid couldn't fight if he was Lennox's wife/ U softer then a banana thats way past ripe, duz this kid have arthritis or is it he just cant type??/ Grab a knife and rip through u, leave blood on ur shirt and mistake it for tomatoe soup/ U as fruity as Toucan and as crunchy as Fruit Loops, I'm more dangerous then a room full of Iraqi troops/ Too slick for a mass measurement cuz "ton's" of laughs "pound" ur skull to a 5 : 1 "scale" ratio/ Ur like stale radio, stop with the comments, take a request and go to commercials u crazy hoe... s traight to the point My styles SICK, i cant help that im talkin infectious Guess im on some next shit, schemin on ya necklace.. Rapz? I bust constant like seiman ya bitch be catchin A cypher artist, battlin... yea, i can also rip dis section But you when you spit, i tend to hear much laughs Stay calm dawg, cuz lyrically ill rip u like rough drafts!! |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
im gonna give this ta the first verse had stronger n more original punches,did'nt like the style change 2 much but its ok..2nd verse had played punches i did'nt like that structure was ok but the verse fell off in some parts.. return the vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167 |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
Drag- Verse Was Ok, Punches Were There, Tho Played Concept, Structure Was Good, And Flow Was Good, N Had Some Wordplay Ice Pick- Punches Were Good And Not As Played, Structure Was Ok, And Flow Was Good, Also Had Some Metas, I Liked The Lennox Line.. Punches- Ice Flow- Tie Wordplay- Drag Metaphors- Ice Structure- Drag Originality- Ice Vocab- Ice Final Vote- Ice Pick Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138077 |
Voted For: DRAG~ON
Flow: DRAG~ON Structure: DRAG~ON Punches: TIE Metas: DRAG~ON Vocab: Ice Pick Wordplay: DRAG~ON Creativity: Ice Pick Enjoyment: DRAG~ON VOTE: DRAG~ON |
thanx 4 ya vote n vote
4 sum of my other battles up top uppin 4 votes |
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still uppin 4 votes
n dezz battles need 1 more vote 4 da win DRAG~ON VS phatinum http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138668 r.i.p http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141250 thanx 1 |
Voted For: Ice Pick
Structure - Drag on, only coz Ice Pick had a lot of stretched lines, and he didn't. Flow - Tie, I didn't see anything wrong with either of there flow, they both flowed well.. Wordplay - From the beginning Ice pick took it with internal rhymes and syllabes, Drag ons rhymes were kinda basic.. Punches - Ice pick had one in about every bar, as Drag ons was kinda weak, plus he lacked, i like the arthritis one, even tho i said it before, but that's why i like it, u think like me.. Personals - none really that stuck out as a hitting personal.. Opener - Ice pick because he came with better word play and a better punch.. Closer - Ice Pick barley, i wasn't feeling the closer but Drag ons wasn't good at all.. So overall ice pick, you get me vote.. please return the favor in my thread will you, thanx, 1.. heres the link http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141583 |
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uppin'..........the vote people, not asking for much
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yo still uppin 4 votes
n diss battle n others go out n vote please honestly 1 |
Voted For: Ice Pick
punches: ice structure: drag~on personals: drag~on multies: ice metas: ice vote: ice |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
diss cat gotta disease from eatin 2 many beans think he can battle me,but like da CELTICS i got 2many green... 6/10 got a 8-2 record go head n make dat 8-3 cuz woop ass so good n water u couldn't even SEA me 4/10 man u a weiny like da oscar mayor hot dog car n gettin drinks from club is da only time u c a good BAR 6/10 u weak n it ain't no other way 2 explain diss n u gone b in outer space after i kick URANUS 2/10 n ain't nuttin much 2 say 2 nigga dat got it all but me...not u if u was KOBE u couldn't ball 2/10 n like da laundry detergant dats ALL wiped out diss dirt spot cuz ya beats wouldn't b BUMPIN if it was infected wit CHICKEN POXS... 6/10 I leave u flatter the diet Sprite in the height of ur life, this kid couldn't fight if he was Lennox's wife/ U softer then a banana thats way past ripe, duz this kid have arthritis or is it he just cant type??/ 6/10 Grab a knife and rip through u, leave blood on ur shirt and mistake it for tomatoe soup/ U as fruity as Toucan and as crunchy as Fruit Loops, I'm more dangerous then a room full of Iraqi troops/ 7/10 Too slick for a mass measurement cuz "ton's" of laughs "pound" ur skull to a 5 : 1 "scale" ratio/ Ur like stale radio, stop with the comments, take a request and go to commercials u crazy hoe... 6/10 s traight to the point My styles SICK, i cant help that im talkin infectious Guess im on some next shit, schemin on ya necklace.. 5/10 Rapz? I bust constant like seiman ya bitch be catchin A cypher artist, battlin... yea, i can also rip dis section 6/10 But you when you spit, i tend to hear much laughs Stay calm dawg, cuz lyrically ill rip u like rough drafts!! 6/10 This battle was ok came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay and more complexity Ice u had the overall better verse but ya stucture iz fucked u need 2 work on that Drag you started off good but u jus fell off after the 1st bar Stay Consistent |
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