Telekinetic vs B.rantis
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This kids shook like a quake cause I know he can't stand this
B.rantis is new to RB.........but see you just prey like a mantis (praying matis) Your a 19 year old newb alive now but about to be dead This is new to me too, I don't normally battle Special ED You got no referrals, yea really nobody would unless they was insane Cause just the lines above shattered you like a window I bring the pain (window pain) Im rippin veins an arteries you haven't even began to scratch the surface You're just a freeloader on this sight uppin post counts your only purpose I just ended this guys amazing 5 post career with 10 lines that I wrote Shit I didn't even have to throw any punch lines cause this kids the joke |
Uppin for B. rantis to post. Come on don't disapoint me
Youve had 15 more min. right now than it took me to post |
Like John Travolta you should face it Telekinetic
cause your days are numbered here like cars with cassette decks unless you bummy like yourself, broke with an 86 chevy, like it says your a flyweight, my rhymes are heavy My punches speak for themselves, u have to explain yours tell ur bitch to shape her shit up, looks like a chia pet horse and i know u thinkin' " why B. Game bustin on me?" because your lost on this site like Freeway with his Mach 3 Your 3-3 im sorry to say its the unwritten law, im keepin a donut in my loss column, ur simply played out like pogs |
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I'm not sure if I'm allowed to do this, I read the rules but didn't see any mention of not being able to leave a vote even though I can't select a winner in the poll. LoL please just warn me, don't ban me. Thank you.
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Telekinetic, I'm not trying to hate, it's just that a lot of your concepts have been done to death, honest. Also, your punches took to long to get to the point, I'm not really sure how to explain this, but you need to word your lines differently to get the full effect of each pun. Feel me? B. Rantis took this battle with a better verse, wittier punches, and better lines. |
aight battle....on tha verge of weak..
Seemed close but Tele definately got this cuz of metas....wordplay... punches... and personals B.. came with those too.. just tele edged you out in all of them so v/Tele drop an honest vote please.....it's getting slept on I took tha time to vote on yours...thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106344 |
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harder punches was mostly one sided b came wit nuttin anybody do me a favour peep dis shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106180 |
I can't poll vote.
I think B.Rantitis won this battle. Quote:
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B.Rantitis, this was your best. You both came iight, and pretty even, but B. took this. Vote: B. Rantis |
SAM get the verses right before you post like that.
You all said I lost an you showed my shit an said it won. lol its aight tho |
what are u talking about tele, he said i won like 5 times in his post, i dont think he messed up
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yea i dunno who his vote was for, too confusing of a post
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OK i get it. I dont even think people get half the shit I put in my verse. Alot of people too simple minded.
Lets get some votes by people that can really vote lol |
I give this battle to tel cause his rhymes came in cleaner he exlpained a few rhymes
but thats just to give a better verse he wins in my eyes if rantis would have had more complexe rhymes and a better ender he would have takken it " This kids shook like a quake cause I know he can't stand this B.rantis is new to RB.........but see you just prey like a mantis (praying matis) Your a 19 year old newb alive now but about to be dead This is new to me too, I don't normally battle Special ED" that was ill keep up these rhymes and youl keep wining help me out i need votes on this battle sorry i cant vote yet but soon i will http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106471 |
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UPPIN FOR VOTES dont sleep on this
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Give us some feed back an ignore that one vote that was just a dick sucker tryin to piss people off
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^^sexually frustrated
I can't poll vote, as I said, but my vote was for B. Rantis. I see how that post could've been confusing... I said Rantis won, but I wanted to show you 2 your best lines as feedback or something, so I showed Telekinetic's best line and Rantis' best line. Rantis' verse was way better than yours, Telekinetic. Tele, it's not that people don't get your stuff... it's just that your stuff is wack. Sorry. |
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This kids shook like a quake cause I know he can't stand this
B.rantis is new to RB.........but see you just prey like a mantis (praying matis) ^^^ok...seen the prey/pray lines alot before, but this was a fresh flip Your a 19 year old newb alive now but about to be dead This is new to me too, I don't normally battle Special ED ^^^Nah, not feelin' it You got no referrals, yea really nobody would unless they was insane Cause just the lines above shattered you like a window I bring the pain (window pain) ^^^Ill concept, should have been worded better though Im rippin veins an arteries you haven't even began to scratch the surface You're just a freeloader on this sight uppin post counts your only purpose ^^^Nah, not feelin it I just ended this guys amazing 5 post career with 10 lines that I wrote Shit I didn't even have to throw any punch lines cause this kids the joke ^^^lmao! this one was ill... Like John Travolta you should face it Telekinetic cause your days are numbered here like cars with cassette decks eehhh...this was aight unless you bummy like yourself, broke with an 86 chevy, like it says your a flyweight, my rhymes are heavy nah, not feelin' it My punches speak for themselves, u have to explain yours tell ur bitch to shape her shit up, looks like a chia pet horse nah... and i know u thinkin' " why B. Game bustin on me?" because your lost on this site like Freeway with his Mach 3 blah Your 3-3 im sorry to say its the unwritten law, im keepin a donut in my loss column, ur simply played out like pogs nope... Just wasn't feelin b. rantises punches... Tela had the punched and multis, so he gets my vote... Sorry fellas but I cant poll vote... Please peep my battle: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106945 |
votes with tele for obvious reasons above
v- tele vote on this: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107063 |
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basically everything wise ways said here..
aight battle....on tha verge of weak.. Seemed close but Tele definately got this cuz of metas....wordplay... punches... and personals B.. came with those too.. just tele edged you out in all of them so v/Tele agreed^^ vote on this now: Dazasta Vs As5A5sIn5 |
im dum...i already voted..lmao anyway vote on that battle regardless
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Damn sombody vote on this shit it has like almost 200 views an 2 votes
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Ight Break down
Punches- both came hard, Both had good creativity n down falls to their punches, But I think Telekinetic's were delivered harder, Wordplay- B.R, Used some elementary words,nothing special...Tele's wordplay had more of a selection of words, bigger and better. flow-like I said becuase of the weak wordplay sometimes the flow was off in B.r.'s shit so I think tele had the better flow. structure- Both structures were weak and yall need to work on them, v/ Telekinetic |
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