[~*Lady Fiya*~] vs Soul Sickness
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recyclin'
No B/S
No Hate Votes
All Unexplained will be removed......

Good luck Soul Sickness, check in by 30 and drop whenever you're ready.....

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 09-30-04 at 02:17 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

Soul Sickness has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 01:49 PM.

[~*Lady Fiya*~] has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 01:53 PM.

fiya all washed so u kno fo sho da game decided/
wackness emergency center is where ya name resided/
u cant stop the Soul but u can douse the fiya/
u may be hot as shyt but beatin u is my burnin desiya/
and this is my first time on the elevation/
who da wackest rapper is the only way u will get a delegation/
and u left lost for thoughts like ya fukin head is spacin/
like when da new millenium start u goin through a revelation/
call ya self dutchess maybe dats y u get smoked/
after i fill ya wit sticky shyt thats leaven u choked/
i hope for the best and i wish u some luck/
but the sickness has spread and yo ass is fuked/

dayum- i forgot about the battle but i don't no-show. so uhmmm quick key i got 5 min...

verse dropped in 2 days? soul's RV's walkin' decay!
record need height, ya losses guaranteed to elevate!(12-12)
this boy bring yesterday's news-paper route, u recycle?!
garbage in recital, u can't even live up ur deed n title!
his last words are found in his battle stats time line!!
vocab noneffective like sinner gettin' assonance rhymes
lyrics need a stair-master cuz ya record stand surfaced!
supportin' buddy system cuz ya tag-on losses- ya certain!
shoe this poll up ya ass like Frida do trolleys..
stop ya heart ya Vioxx, physical stay attached to dolleys?!

This was feedback posted for [~*Lady Fiya*~]
 

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO snap you owned him LOOOOOOLLLLLL

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

votes here:

fiya: had a lil more strength behind the rhymes, ya had some landed punches, and yea it seems like a quick key, cause it was only decent, but yea ya still won...that just shows ya need to battle better ppl if ya droppin decent quick keys and still KO'in ya opponent, ha. but ya have structure down, and ya openers aight, the closure did it for me, ya sealed it.

soul sickness: well ya had a decent verse, which held the tie with fiya throughout the whole battle, but ya ending made me decide to vote fiya. that was a childish line, i used to key like that when i first started, so that line reminds me of virgin keys. so thats not a good thing, rest of the verse was decent , but im sure youll elevate, no sweat.

drop an honest vote, "wicked one" in the sig.

uppin for some more voters lets go people....................

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

aight this shit was pretty tight people. But LF just did it again. The structure was good, cept fo the last line. She proved why she is the best femcee on da site. The vocab was dope fo both, but she just brought it harder. The punches were better for LF to, she just killin it. She used the record nice i like that shit (could be used as a presonal) good personals over all to. Tight Shit. LF u still got it.

uppin for more voters in this shyt.....................

yo we need some voters to get this movin now damnit........

uppin for more voters to check this out and get it over....uppin....

this is ridiculous vote people, we'll return the favor.....

yo uppin this is taken to long will return the fav if u vote...........

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

lady fiya:nice opener pretty effective and done decently......
rest was not that great but decent at best I can say..........
yep you quickly keyed and i understand that so that didn't
help you much in the winning category but okay...
overall: 6.5/10

soul sickness: opener was not that great it was pretty played and not a good way to start a verse in my opinion.............
and you also came with a pretty large amount of self-glorification and weak lines....
overall: 5/10

vote: lady fiya

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

kind of weak battle from Soul Sickness,your shit was played and basic.
Lady Fiya, that was good for a 5 minute drop. I liked your lin about his record and the other 2 nbars after that.Your verse after that got weaker but it was still dope.
Soul you need to work on your structure and try to use more personals in your verse.Dont be scared to make up witty wordplay and your punches need some work also.
Props to both.
V/Lady Fiya

This was feedback posted for [~*Lady Fiya*~]
 

good shit this is just to see the feed back

This was feedback posted for Soul Sickness
 

I gotta give it to you because you canme out the blocks spittin hard.Nice punches and flow. lady fiya nice verse. u had factual punches but soul sickness just had a better sounding verse

uppin for a voter to finsh this off finally foreal people stop sleepin.............

yea, this been open for two months now, ain't that sum natural bullshit..

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

well to be quite honest lady fiya won this verse with her opener and i would be ashamed of that. not saying that because she's a girl and beat you that its bad but if anyone beats you with their first bar alone then you know you need to elevate so there's no reason for me to tell you to do so. lady you had a decent flow but no real hard punches a couple average punches and good wordplay but soul came so wack in this battle that you won easily.. ive seen you do better than this soul im dissapointed in that verse..

decent battle

v/LF