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¤ÐÅž¤ 04-27-05 04:05 PM

¤ÐÅž¤ vs Solo
 
Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
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i thought ide set it up since we've
both been to lazy too..........
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no dq win for any reason, a real battle a real win...that is all
good luck fam :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 1000

Check in by: 04-28-05 at 04:05 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

System 04-27-05 07:19 PM

Solo has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-27-05 07:19 PM.

King Solo 04-27-05 08:26 PM


Daz Ya Skill Is Like “Fresh New Sheets” The Way It Never “In-Creases”…
Kill Ya By Rippin Ya Head Off..And I’ll Leave The Rest Of Ya In Pieces…
Reppin The Council Like King Arthur..Daz The Round Table Text Leader…
How Does TC Get Respect When They Bein Repped By Clothing Cleaner…
Daz Loves Me Wishin To Be My Boxers..So He Could Be Touchin My Dick…
Look No Further Than His Sig..I Ripped Him And He’s Still Uppin My Shit…
Dude Goes Around Treatin Animals..Thinks It’ll Make Him A Better Vet…
Yo, I’ll Tell Ya What Defines A Real Vet………Sumthin You’ll Never Get…

System 04-27-05 11:24 PM

¤ÐÅž¤ has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-27-05 11:24 PM.

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-27-05 11:25 PM

Ya punches missed, wheres ya scary scripts ? cuz solo’s flow is barely sick
call ya god’s chick, cuz ill hit this almighty bitch like beatin a Jim Carrey flick,
You break quick,! As if you’re the virus in the matrix….you phase this ?
solo’s basic, plus he nose hes losing something like anticipating a face lift
hes a nono vender, cuz he couldn’t key hot if solo .... touched embers
& ya an over-rated member n its easy to damage ya car-rear like fender benders
who’s solo crossed ? ill leave his fake set ex-posed like obese chicks polo bras
ya text proves flaws, n reverse ya name in shock, like ya say ‘o’los (oh-loss)


hope you didnt use all washing powder
fake personals fam, i think that would be lame

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-27-05 11:27 PM

lmfao, you did too, i knew it, meh, good battle bro
lol, i still can't believe you built your verse around a tide box
.
lol

TeamOne 04-28-05 12:16 AM

This was feedback posted for ¤ÐÅž¤
 
good drop man..... keep reppin TC

King Solo 04-28-05 11:11 AM

yea gud battle

and one line has a reference to washing powder and it aint a fake personal because i showed you the picture of the washing powder myself.........................

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-28-05 11:43 AM

YA FAM, but this is kinda my point,
everything is out there..like look here..lol
http://www.solotouch.com/

King Solo 04-28-05 03:19 PM

^^^^:laugh2: .................................................. ...NOT FUNNY!!!!!

my name is Solo...................not Solo Touch hoebagz!!!!!!

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-28-05 04:18 PM

lol,...........who's solo touched...?....lmfao
.
well my names ¤ÐÅž¤..... no Daz...lol
.
get my point fam?.....lol

....Gone.... 04-28-05 06:19 PM

Voted For: Solo

Daz Ya Skill Is Like “Fresh New Sheets” The Way It Never “In-Creases”…
Kill Ya By Rippin Ya Head Off..And I’ll Leave The Rest Of Ya In Pieces…
-........Aiight nice wordplay with a decent punch.


Reppin The Council Like King Arthur..Daz The Round Table Text Leader…
How Does TC Get Respect When They Bein Repped By Clothing Cleaner…
-LMAO!......NICE DECENT PUNCH..........w/ personal

Daz Loves Me Wishin To Be My Boxers..So He Could Be Touchin My Dick…
Look No Further Than His Sig..I Ripped Him And He’s Still Uppin My Shit…
-Nice personal w/ a punch

Dude Goes Around Treatin Animals..Thinks It’ll Make Him A Better Vet…
Yo, I’ll Tell Ya What Defines A Real Vet………Sumthin You’ll Never Get…
-Aiiiight nice closer with a decent punch

Overall=Aiight man nice flow. YOu had good decent wordplays with some decent punches. Personals was there.



Ya punches missed, wheres ya scary scripts ? cuz solo’s flow is barely sick
call ya god’s chick, cuz ill hit this almighty bitch like beatin a Jim Carrey flick,
-Ha nice decent punch

You break quick,! As if you’re the virus in the matrix….you phase this ?
solo’s basic, plus he nose hes losing something like anticipating a face lift
-Nice punch.


hes a nono vender, cuz he couldn’t key hot if solo .... touched embers
& ya an over-rated member n its easy to damage ya car-rear like fender benders
-Decent punch


who’s solo crossed ? ill leave his fake set ex-posed like obese chicks polo bras
ya text proves flaws, n reverse ya name in shock, like ya say ‘o’los (oh-loss)
-Nice lil wordplay decent punch


Overall=Nice decent punches man. Didn't see any personals. But you had wordplays, but nice punches.


Overall=GOD DAMN! this is a good battle, king solo came good with them punches. DAZ came also came hard with them punches. FLow is tie from both sides. Personals, i guess is a tie from both sides. Shit hard to vote yo...........but i'mma have to go with king solo man came harder with them punches, with some decent wordplays. Daz your punches was good, i mean FIRE! meta'z was decent. But daz solo wordplays w/ decent punches, came harder than you man. No hate.

Master Minded 04-28-05 06:26 PM

This was feedback posted for ¤ÐÅž¤
 
............................. Daz kicked that fucking ass

King Solo 04-28-05 09:44 PM

U......p......p......i......n......t......h......i ......s......b......a......t......t......l......e

M-Eazy 04-29-05 10:13 AM

This was feedback posted for Solo
 
is this the crew battle?????????????????????????????? just checkin polls...........

M-Eazy 04-29-05 10:14 AM

Oh, nvm...good, its not. Well' I'm uppin ya'll battle. ~1~

Restricted 04-29-05 10:37 AM

Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

Aight..

.::Daz::.

Ya punches missed, wheres ya scary scripts ? cuz solo’s flow is barely sick
call ya god’s chick, cuz ill hit this almighty bitch like beatin a Jim Carrey flick,
Blah..This Wasn't That Good 4/10
You break quick,! As if you’re the virus in the matrix….you phase this ?
solo’s basic, plus he nose hes losing something like anticipating a face lift
Hmm...6/10
hes a nono vender, cuz he couldn’t key hot if solo .... touched embers
& ya an over-rated member n its easy to damage ya car-rear like fender benders
Decent Metaphors 8/10
who’s solo crossed ? ill leave his fake set ex-posed like obese chicks polo bras
ya text proves flaws, n reverse ya name in shock, like ya say ‘o’los (oh-loss)
Worst..3/10

Daz's Verse: 21/40

.::King Solo::.

Daz Ya Skill Is Like “Fresh New Sheets” The Way It Never “In-Creases”…
Kill Ya By Rippin Ya Head Off..And I’ll Leave The Rest Of Ya In Pieces…
First Line Was Sick, Last Line Sucked..4/10
Reppin The Council Like King Arthur..Daz The Round Table Text Leader…
How Does TC Get Respect When They Bein Repped By Clothing Cleaner…
Nothing Special 4/10
Daz Loves Me Wishin To Be My Boxers..So He Could Be Touchin My Dick…
Look No Further Than His Sig..I Ripped Him And He’s Still Uppin My Shit…
Blah...Boring 4/10
Dude Goes Around Treatin Animals..Thinks It’ll Make Him A Better Vet…
Yo, I’ll Tell Ya What Defines A Real Vet………Sumthin You’ll Never Get…
.......4/10

Kings Verse: 16/40

Overall: Daz's Consistency and Harder Punches Shown Through Here. King I Think Your Battling Too Much and Wearing Yourself Out or Sumthing.

Vote: Daz

~R~
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Adam 04-29-05 10:50 AM

This was feedback posted for ¤ÐÅž¤
 
Polls...

Nice drop fam, this is a good battle..

Adam 04-29-05 10:52 AM

Wow...MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ votes for Solo...interesting because Solo is on Jurys dick like mad...

King Solo 04-29-05 12:34 PM

^^^ ure a fuckin little bitch............everytime i battle one of ya precious crew members ya always in my battles talkin like i'm on everyones dick when they vote for me..........stay the fuck out of my shit!!!!!!

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-29-05 12:40 PM

chill bro, dont instigate it more......dont need our battle
to turn into a solo n red bull beef thread

GKillaz05 04-29-05 02:21 PM

Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

¤ÐÅž¤ - Good spit, you had a good flow, hot rhymes.. are your punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - who’s solo crossed ? ill leave his fake set ex-posed like obese chicks polo bras
ya text proves flaws, n reverse ya name in shock, like ya say ‘o’los (oh-loss)

Worst Line - hes a nono vender, cuz he couldn’t key hot if solo .... touched embers
& ya an over-rated member n its easy to damage ya car-rear like fender benders

Solo - iight spit, this is weak comin from you, had some iight punches and it flowed well.

Best Line - Daz Ya Skill Is Like “Fresh New Sheets” The Way It Never “In-Creases”…
Kill Ya By Rippin Ya Head Off..And I’ll Leave The Rest Of Ya In Pieces…

Worst Line - Reppin The Council Like King Arthur..Daz The Round Table Text Leader…
How Does TC Get Respect When They Bein Repped By Clothing Cleaner…

OVERALL - close battle, but I think Daz took this one. He flowed just as well and he had better wordplay and rhymes. Punches were hitten hard also. No hate solo, just call em how I see em.

Vote - Daz

morse code 04-29-05 09:57 PM

Voted For: Solo

this was a very close battle...daz this isnt any hate or anything towards your vote in my battle...

daz-good:nice werdplay, structure and closer...my fav line was the closing one...nice job in doing this verse....6/10
bad:your punches were close and hit just as hard as solos did, however you had few personals, and multies...the opener i wasnt feelin either

solo-good:had some multies but not many, like the punches they hit just as hard as daz's...nice opener and closer....also nice personals throughout...6.5/10
bad:vocab could be increased...it also seemed like your verse stayed on one topic, try to hit different areas, instead of having all your personals based on one thing

overall:
opener-s
closer-d
vocab-d
multies-s
punches/werdplay-tie
personals-s
flow-s
structure-d

v/solo

Sik Wit It 04-29-05 10:25 PM

Voted For: Solo

Daz Ya Skill Is Like “Fresh New Sheets” The Way It Never “In-Creases”…
Kill Ya By Rippin Ya Head Off..And I’ll Leave The Rest Of Ya In Pieces…
…good bar here & good opener
Reppin The Council Like King Arthur..Daz The Round Table Text Leader…
How Does TC Get Respect When They Bein Repped By Clothing Cleaner…
decent punch…
Daz Loves Me Wishin To Be My Boxers..So He Could Be Touchin My Dick…
Look No Further Than His Sig..I Ripped Him And He’s Still Uppin My Shit…
nice shit here
Dude Goes Around Treatin Animals..Thinks It’ll Make Him A Better Vet…
Yo, I’ll Tell Ya What Defines A Real Vet………Sumthin You’ll Never Get…
whoa…good closer here


Ya punches missed, wheres ya scary scripts ? cuz solo’s flow is barely sick
call ya god’s chick, cuz ill hit this almighty bitch like beatin a Jim Carrey flick,
…nah weak opener
You break quick,! As if you’re the virus in the matrix….you phase this ?
solo’s basic, plus he nose hes losing something like anticipating a face lift
decent punch here
hes a nono vender, cuz he couldn’t key hot if solo .... touched embers
& ya an over-rated member n its easy to damage ya car-rear like fender benders
nah…not feelin this punch here
who’s solo crossed ? ill leave his fake set ex-posed like obese chicks polo bras
ya text proves flaws, n reverse ya name in shock, like ya say ‘o’los (oh-loss)
wack punch…

overall…this was a one-sided vote here…
the FLOW ..u both had ther
the PUNCHES ..that goes to SoLo.. came way harder than DAz’s
the MULTIES ..goes to DAz

but anyway.. SoLo took this one here…just came harder in the punches
than worryin about multies or w/e…no hate though…just speakin the truth

...return the favor SoLo

King Solo 04-30-05 03:10 AM

...........................*humpin ya mama*............................

DQ 04-30-05 10:32 AM

Voted For: Solo

Solo

Daz Ya Skill Is Like “Fresh New Sheets” The Way It Never “In-Creases”…
Kill Ya By Rippin Ya Head Off..And I’ll Leave The Rest Of Ya In Pieces…
^rofl @ first line, second's okay

Reppin The Council Like King Arthur..Daz The Round Table Text Leader…
How Does TC Get Respect When They Bein Repped By Clothing Cleaner…
^haha, dope dope

Daz Loves Me Wishin To Be My Boxers..So He Could Be Touchin My Dick…
Look No Further Than His Sig..I Ripped Him And He’s Still Uppin My Shit…
^nice bar

Dude Goes Around Treatin Animals..Thinks It’ll Make Him A Better Vet…
Yo, I’ll Tell Ya What Defines A Real Vet………Sumthin You’ll Never Get…
^bold closer

Nice verse, good punches in there with some funny wordplay combined with dope and hardhitting personals. Had your flow on lock, structure was cool and found an excellent balance with your vocab.



¤ÐÅž¤

Ya punches missed, wheres ya scary scripts ? cuz solo’s flow is barely sick
call ya god’s chick, cuz ill hit this almighty bitch like beatin a Jim Carrey flick,
^funny opener, nice multi too

You break quick,! As if you’re the virus in the matrix….you phase this ?
solo’s basic, plus he nose hes losing something like anticipating a face lift
^hmmmm, i'm not feeling this but could be me...personal opinion i guess

hes a nono vender, cuz he couldn’t key hot if solo .... touched embers
& ya an over-rated member n its easy to damage ya car-rear like fender benders
^nice wordplay right here

who’s solo crossed ? ill leave his fake set ex-posed like obese chicks polo bras
ya text proves flaws, n reverse ya name in shock, like ya say ‘o’los (oh-loss)
^bold personal as closer

Nice verse as well, hot and bold personals, good punches with nice wordplay even though I didn't really like the second bar. You had better flow due to the multis, vocab was good as well as structure.

This is a fucking close battle but I'ma go with Solo because I feel his punches a bit more than Daz's but both had a dope verse without a doubt! Hot battle from the both of you, no hate whatsoever!

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-30-05 11:57 AM

you three are not the people that should be
voting on this battle...you's
either dont battle, or have no skill at all........
.
srry solo, but stop tellin them wack text cats to vote..

Germ 04-30-05 12:22 PM

Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

haha, this battle was cooo

solo, not bad man, thought your opening line was cool, but then the next line was just self-glor/played, didnt work good....i knew you would use the daz cleaner line, it was okay, kinda funny....but i think you fell off in your last two bars, closer was weak as hell, and i dont think daz wants to touch your dick, ya hear? haha, but not bad, you came out a little too basic, nothing really creative, nothing that speical, like i said, if you kept the consistency of your first two bars, you may have takin this, but nah, daz got it

daz man, hot wordplay man, mixed in with some creative punches, i was laughing at some, i think you won this based on complexity, creativity, and harder punches, you attempted more difficult text, and you made it work, it wasn't basic, it flowed nicely, good structure, multies in there, overall, it was a consistently solid verse, keep up yo

v/daz, for harder punches

King Solo 04-30-05 12:31 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ¤ÐÅž¤
you three are not the people that should be
voting on this battle...you's
either dont battle, or have no skill at all........
.
srry solo, but stop tellin them wack text cats to vote..



and the irony behind this little statement is that he wouldn't be sayin shit if they had voted for him..................... :nono: whinin about shit aint gonna get ya anywhere in life

and Kesse is only votin against me cuz i voted against him in like 2 of his battles...........he was even whinin about that shit in the longest thread in LL but i aint bothered..........i'll let that shit stand!!!!

^^..^^ 05-01-05 07:04 AM

this is disgusting solo me and you go wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy back sun but your being d.red here daz killed you and thats just being real dont know how you winning :huh:

DQ 05-01-05 08:05 AM

Get my vote removed for dickriding then if you think it's the case. Which it is not, I may not text battle but I do read and vote on a lot of them. I said it was a very close battle and it was hard to decide because both came hard with punches as well as personals. I voted for the verse I felt more and if you claim that's dickriding, get it removed then.

DQ

Acuity 05-01-05 08:31 AM

This was feedback posted for ¤ÐÅž¤
 
checkin polllls........................................... .

^^..^^ 05-01-05 09:14 AM

solo
Daz Ya Skill Is Like “Fresh New Sheets” The Way It Never “In-Creases”…
Kill Ya By Rippin Ya Head Off..And I’ll Leave The Rest Of Ya In Pieces…
ok first line shouldve been second by having it this way you have a good filler and no punch 4/10
Reppin The Council Like King Arthur..Daz The Round Table Text Leader…
How Does TC Get Respect When They Bein Repped By Clothing Cleaner…
this has been used before and also isnt a dope personal either its blah borderline wack 2/10
Daz Loves Me Wishin To Be My Boxers..So He Could Be Touchin My Dick…
Look No Further Than His Sig..I Ripped Him And He’s Still Uppin My Shit…
filler is weak but punch is dope as shit 7/10
Dude Goes Around Treatin Animals..Thinks It’ll Make Him A Better Vet…
Yo, I’ll Tell Ya What Defines A Real Vet………Sumthin You’ll Never Get…
there is no punch here none at all 2/10
15/40 not too good you lacked on punches aint really look for good personals like you shouldve this is a bad verse for you..............

daz
Ya punches missed, wheres ya scary scripts ? cuz solo’s flow is barely sick
call ya god’s chick, cuz ill hit this almighty bitch like beatin a Jim Carrey flick,
this is a dope wordplay real nice multi use as well this is a dope ass punch 9/10
You break quick,! As if you’re the virus in the matrix….you phase this ?
solo’s basic, plus he nose hes losing something like anticipating a face lift
another dope wordplay punch here real nice again good multi useage 8/10
hes a nono vender, cuz he couldn’t key hot if solo .... touched embers
& ya an over-rated member n its easy to damage ya car-rear like fender benders
this wasnt dope weak here filler played whole bar was weak as fuck 1/10
who’s solo crossed ? ill leave his fake set ex-posed like obese chicks polo bras
ya text proves flaws, n reverse ya name in shock, like ya say ‘o’los (oh-loss
nice name play worded kinda wrong here but came accross still good nice creativity on this real nice 6/10
24/40
good punches and concepts besides one wack bar nice multi use here good flow nice vocab real creative shit on your part score wouldve been much higher if not for that weak bar here but with superior punches you got this............

ok daz won this easy id own either one of you seriously cuz you both lack the most imprtant thing in a battle PERSONALS!!!! wtf thats the way to win battles do research you lazy fucks....................

King Solo 05-01-05 02:37 PM

............................*bumpity Bump*......................................

New Meth0d 05-01-05 04:40 PM

This was feedback posted for ¤ÐÅž¤
 
checkin polls.....even though its obvious daz won......cause he actually threw punches

Also Known. 05-01-05 05:12 PM

This was feedback posted for ¤ÐÅž¤
 
lol i wont vote cuz i cant and also if i could solo would think its a hate vote cuz he voted against me in the skriptz battle but DAZ got this hands down in my opinion good wordplay and metas

King Solo 05-01-05 05:43 PM

hhhhhmmmmmmmm.........1..........2..........3..... ......ya know i've lost count of how many council members been in here ridin Daz.....................and i find it funny how ppl are on my dick...........i'm cool wit mista and DQ from the jury but if they dickrode me then why is it this the only battle mista ever voted in that was mine.......DQ voted against me in my battle before this.........morse code i dont even know and he or she went and voted against me in another battle and skriptz i aint spoken to for fuckin months!!! so all of ya need to shut the hell up adn stop ridin Daz so much....ya dont see me complainin about the people who votin for Daz........what i am complainin about is the amount of ass clowns comin in here droppin feed on daz sayin he owned this battle..........cuz everyone who has voted said it was a close battle......Daz himself said it was close.......i agree with that so all you hoez ridin him just ride him in another battle cuz ya cloggin this shit up with posts!!!!

King Solo 05-01-05 11:38 PM

.............................*snore*.............. ..........

Bangalore 05-01-05 11:48 PM

Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

alright this was a pretty creative battle .

Daz took this one in my eyes mainly because he had a better vocab and better punches overall. his wordplay really was very nice. i thought that one of your lines was sorta pushed a lil hard but besides that i couldnt really see anything really wrong with it.(its hard to vote on battles like these because there arent that many things some people need to improve on )

solo. i liked your verse but it just seemed to basic. it wasnt as creative as daz's your opener was pretty weak and i really thought the whole thing seemed a lil rushed. but overall i think you could work on your punches and personals. the personals you did have were just blah nothing special. i've seen alot of good things from you but i just wasn't feeling yours. just use a wider variety in your vocab and think of some new harder hitting punches.

vote daz because he came harder with his verse. and it was way more creative than solo's verse

no hate

King Solo 05-03-05 11:04 AM

.................................*bump*........... ...................


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