H.D. vs twenty9
 

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Check in by: 02-06-06 at 05:47 PM

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twenty9 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-06 06:19 PM.

h.d sayin i spit garbage, he must b high or not no the definition,
im gonna win, this is the truth, not a mutha fuckin premonition/

ya got ya fictional rappa called contam-ination
you’se a bitch, its known throughout the nation/

don’t battle me bitch, u’ll be leavein in a hearse,
u only won a battle, cuz flow couldn’t drop a verse/

H.D. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-06 10:37 PM.

come on h.d plz stop procrastinatin and drop a verse so i can get this battle over with

29 times the amount of character used in every on of ya rhymes is the odds of you winning
You’d do better surviving a dinner date with Hanibal Lector, tied down on a stretcher
Locked in the kitchen, you could up chuck ya deserts, than me? You’ll never spit sicker
Ya style causes laughter, I’ll shatter ya bladder through ya hip bone and leave ya ass pissed
Your punches wouldn’t have impact if had two brass fists, with meteors crammed in em
You could claim to be divine 29 times, I’ll watch 29 signs of God damning em

This was feedback posted for H.D.
 

i cant believe i ever would say this to a battle but this was my far the shitty battle i have ever and i mean ever seen in my life fuck h.d. none or maybe one line of urs rymes and the suck really bad worst i have seen of urs
29 well u had wat u usually have garbage bullshit lol
and we r used to that and stop wit the one second rymes ross
that means the ryme is over before you even heard it
fuck i am not surprizd the battle was the shits worst battle ever

fuck you jordan you little bitch admit it every battle you participate every voter says your verse is whack so you cant tell me shit about my verse until you can get ppl 2 stop doin that so fuck u and ur bitch ass feed-back

Voted For: twenty9

i have to give this to twenty.....yo h.d. you have to be lying about your awards or that's the wackes sites ever since your shit definately doesn't deserve any awards at all. twenty, you came real weak. but at least your shit rhymed and had a punch in there...both need to elevate

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Voted For: H.D.

Vote - HD

better shit twenty9, you improvin' a bit, your shit is better, your last bar was not bad, but...you got some more work to do...HD got ya.

Flow- different catz, different stylez, each one had their own...no noticeable structure problems from either cat...didn't prefer one flow over the other...At first I thought HD stretched his bars, but his flow works, it's just fast.

Punches- HD threw some creative punches...this site tends to favor the whole "rip your skull out and fuck your mom" type punches, but HD did it in an ill way. Twenty9, you had some better heat, but still a far cry from devasting. Your last bar is a personal/punch...think about what you did in that bar, cuz it's on the right track. So HD takes Punches.

Personals- HD's drop is loaded with personals...almost overkill, but pretty good. Twenty9, think about what personals you could form off of HD, your last bar, again, is on the right track. HD took Personals.

Multis- not a stellar display from twenty9, but he had some rhymes that were multis, and some that were close, but HD took Multis with some good inner multis, and multis.

Wordplay- None.

HD took this one...a better showing from twenty9, but he still needs to work to elevate. RTF in my battle with Tech Skillz if yall haven't yet.

what h.d. didnt tell u

Awards:

1 - 3 Class H.O.F. @ UF - he was the only one in his class
1st class H.O.F. @ THH - he was only rapper on that part of site
Best crew @ THH - he was in a crew that had all good rappers except him
Best crew @ Okayplayer - he was in a crew that had all good rappers except him
Best crew Battle @ Okayplayer 2 times he wasnt even in the battle he just sayed hi in it
Best crew battle @ UF 3 times he was in a crew that battled their selfs (they almost lost)
Best crew battle @ THH he never rapped in the battle just sayed hello
Top 10 Punchlines of the week @ THH only five rappers on site
Top 20 emcees @ UF only 20 rappers on site (he almost never made list)

there is the truth i did some hard work and found the truth everone should know

JC real, you just a bitch, HD's concepts far surpass your weak-minded-top-40-bullshit-imitation-8-mile-watchin' faggit style.

It ain't his fault you ain't lyrically inclined enough to HD's rhyme scheme or punches. Fuck your Bridgewater bullshit, all the Bridgewater peepz hate you, I seen the pictures.

Weird, I usually see eye to eye with Tech...everyone got they opinions, I guess.

Sorry for the freepost, nice battle.

fuck u and anyways back too battle boys vote on tha battle

due go re-read my verse shit rhymes althrough-out... all of my verses rhyme all through out I really don't understand how you didn't see that... Rhyming with just the last word in everyline is soo played out... now go re-read my verse and say it out loud... and notice the difference.

JC just go set up a battle... this time I'll explain my verse and point out every single fucking rhyme for the morons here... and Lmao@ your lil bullshit explanations for my awards... You guys are elementary... so I'll just have to school you now...

Voted For: H.D.

i give this up to HD....

heres how it went

creativity: HD
Punchlines: HD
WORDPLAY: HD
flow: HD

one sided man..........HD didnt even need to try man.........


RTF on my battle against kool col b


just go search amd type mu name and vote fairly homes.

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Voted For: H.D.

Flow:29
Structure:29
Word Play:h.d
Metaphors:h,d
Punches:h.d
Personals:h.d
Creativity:h.d
Enjoyment:h.d
Vote:h.d

Explanation:h.d had it, his punches was harder and he got personals in it, 29 im not hatin on you but seriously you need to get creative and come with hard personals..simply step yo game up, and once you do i'll re battle ya

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This was feedback posted for twenty9
 

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh cheackin the polls

I've already voted on that

This was feedback posted for H.D.
 

This was laughable.

Take them awards out of your sig, its embarrasing.

*chuckles* I haven't seen anything remotely impressive from you yet... I have 5 battles up right now... but as soon as one's cleared you can get it too...

*smh*

Str8 text battle or topical...

h.d. your verse was pure trash, u just plain suck ass, i have no clue on how you are beating me, seriously you are a huge liar, there is no way in hell you could have won any competition on this planet unless you were in some sort of voting ring. you have no right to say i spit trash until you improve, so just stop batteling and lying and just work on improving.

^ kid you're garbage... and I'd be glad to give you a rematch when this is over to prove it to you all over again... *smh @ me being garbage* ya rhymes are elementary like most of the kids that vote in this forum... that's probably why you feel right at home here... If there's anyone that needs to update it's you...

Uppin' 4 more votes

text, pinkslips if your really confident :)

i didnt say i was good, i just said ur verses are garbage, because they are, why do you think the only battle you won is cuz the guy didnt drop a verse? so dont you ever tell me to improve

This was feedback posted for H.D.
 

polls............................................w erd

we spoke in pm... just holla back at me

Voted For: twenty9

give to 29 since his actually had a descent ppunch in it while hd's was lacking a whole lot of thing...dude how do you have so many awards with verses like those? this was once sided....nice battle tho.....

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thanx, uppin for more votes............................................. .............................................

This was feedback posted for H.D.
 

hd won this bitch im sorry 29's verse was fucking amature

Voted For: twenty9

Vote twenty9

This werent a strong battle but someone has to win. No wordplay, multis werent that great. Overall twenty9 JUST came out with a better verse with flow which won it for him.

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Voted For: twenty9

h.d sayin i spit garbage, he must b high or not no the definition,
im gonna win, this is the truth, not a mutha fuckin premonition/
aight
ya got ya fictional rappa called contam-ination
you’se a bitch, its known throughout the nation/
ok
don’t battle me bitch, u’ll be leavein in a hearse,
u only won a battle, cuz flow couldn’t drop a verse/
decent personal, aight ending

focus more, stop with the basic flow, get more creative i cant tell you no more



29 times the amount of character used in every on of ya rhymes is the odds of you winning
You’d do better surviving a dinner date with Hanibal Lector, tied down on a stretcher
set up dont rhyme with the follow up, but aight punch

Locked in the kitchen, you could up chuck ya deserts, than me? You’ll never spit sicker
Ya style causes laughter, I’ll shatter ya bladder through ya hip bone and leave ya ass pissed
dont rhyme, could of been a good punch 2 danm..
Your punches wouldn’t have impact if had two brass fists, with meteors crammed in em
You could claim to be divine 29 times, I’ll watch 29 signs of God damning em
wasnt feeling the ending...

you had a chance to really win this battle EZ, but now that i read your verse you wasnt focus as i thought you was, bars wasnt rhyming, you toss in a quick punch with a messed up set up, FOCUS MORE, RHYME YOUR PUNCHES WITH THE SET UP LINES, and you will be better

thanx, uppin for more votes............................................. .................................

This is why I started dropping explanations with every rhyme word in em... acuse yall really do just look at the last couple of words per line... Ther is no rule in hip~hop that you have to rhyme there... rhyming is the name of the name... not where you rhyme... and brass fists and ass pissed rhymes... say it out loud...

*smh*

You're a multi styled emcee you should know this better than most

wanna hear sumthin funny h.d.? if all the votes that were dq'd counted, i'd be winning 4-3

MY VOTE GOT REMOVED???? WTF.

Oh and H.D you n your 5 battles?? that are apparently up, you only won 1!

ppl look at his record.

^ said from a guy with 13 L's ............ hell up

atleast motherfucker i dont float around on the forums sayin iv got so many FAKE ASS awards