CarsonJet -v- Dope Name
 

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112432
CAN YALL VOTE FOR THIS SHIT YOULL BE HELPIN OUT AND ILL RETURN FAVOR JUST HIT ME UP

Dope Name

Easy...son...
U should've dropp'd wit some one u could carry..
Good news tho...
Dope,...U can visit Massachusetts now...and get married
My merkin's varry...yes, but u continue to lose even..
3 an 3...
Who's gonna break the news to ur L's that there now leading?
Really...
What your father called u as a kid, isn't what we mean
Dope? not really...Your just a confused R and B teen...
Competition's slow...consider urself a pick up herb...
Ironic tho...
They'll be doin that for U once they remover my words..
But hey..
Atleast ur in the right position,^Far away from me^...
Seriously....wait...
I merked you before...yo check your IP!

No need to rush this one,oh fine, I might as well take my time
Hell, he doubled my norm, but will that really double his rhyme
Have you tryin' to explain the loss when i bust the facts to ya
It must be hard battlin' now, your verses have to be on viagra
I'll take this one like a happy meal, but you, you have to steal
Do you think you win with flying colors when all you see is teal
Not a celtic man, so don't think about reppin a number 34 now
Say you win, you'll be lossed by ten, you sit and wonder how
Want me to give icin', I'll give you ricin, now you're sale pricin
Like satan, I'll stab you with a triton, and you leave frightened

:D this was fun...

Nice verse carson

Just as somethin' to say about the IP line

"You can drop a ball to the floor as many times as you want, but you never know if the next time you do it the ball will float to the cealing"

dayum...truthfully...this was a merking. Dope didn't even come bad at all...but Carson dropped hot today...one of his better verses infact.

"Easy...son...
U should've dropp'd wit some one u could carry..
Good news tho...
Dope,...U can visit Massachusetts now...and get married"

^Battle was basically over after that first bar was dropped lol.
Punchlines go to carson...same with flow...and pretty much everything goes to him. Good battle but carson came hella hard here. Enjoyed reading both verses.

v/ - Carson

uh.....carson, could you uh....kinda explain that line, it makes no sense to me, Getting married in massachusettes? yes because that was awesome :/ *I'm confused now*

I dont have to explain ne thing....
read the news son...

fair enough...

Got it

Yeah that was a really good punch

nice job...

Ummm...gays go to Mass. to get married i think..
that was a nice punch...Dope..didn't ne of yours except for tha
Teal one...both flow'd good in certain spots...
And tha ip line was a good personal too
both had okay wordplay...semi creative
but punches and personals won this
so

v/ Carson

flow-jet
structure-jet
punches-jet
personals-jet
creativity-tie

jet takes this battle easly...dope...you got merked this round

hit these up so i can battle again and i will return honest votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111543
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111925

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. read strobes voting rule, hoe - Feeble Minded

*idea*

why don't you guys vote on my other battle...

Just a suggestion...

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Gud stuff......
Think Carson won this...better punches....flow
and strucure from bothe was good.......

Hit up the topical battle in mmy sig

damn, jet came cold in this battle, even dope name came pretty decent but carson's verse was on fire....he had some really creative punches and worded them nice with some equally good personals...shit wordplay was good by both and flow but carson just put together a more well rounded verse..dope, make sure your punches hit harder, make em more direct and creative so they will be more effective...all in all nice battle, carson was just in the zone i guess...one.

return favor and vote on the battles in my sig

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rite this was 1of the most 1sided battles ihave ever seen.......
CarsonJetX2 took this with out a doubt he had better flow punches, ifelt his verse more aswell......
Dope Name u verse was that bad ihav seen worse......
Jus dnt battle big guns again............

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

oh my bad heres a link to my battle Please return the fava...................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112376

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I better not get Dq'd because this was closed before i started another battle

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Here's how I see it.

Flow=Carson, had a good flow to it and was a good read. Dope, some of your rhymes were forced which hurt your flow.

Punches=Carson, he had better punches all around, some which made me laugh. Dope you need some work on your punches they were kind of lacking.

Personals=Carson, I couldn't find any real personals in Dopes verse.

Vocab=Tie, neither of you had much vocab in these drops.

Over all=Carson, this was an over all good verse, you had good punches and personals and your flow was good, the only thing that could use some work is your vocab which you didn't really need to take this one, keep it up.
Dope, you could use some work on your punches and personals, your flow was okay but the forced rhymes hurt you, you could also use some work on your vocab, but that wasn't what hurt you in this battle, just keep trying and you should get there.

Vote=Carson

I forgot to ask for honest votes on my battles. Here are the links thanks.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112136
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108625

punches - i would say that carson had his punches stricly more directed than dope .. ..dope had like punches but the were choppy and not as on point
personals -well it was sort of tie in a sense of mind but carson had his more to the direct point,and were more witty if you dont mind me saying
werdplay -i would say this goes to dope,im not really fimiliar with the new style carson displays,its good but flow is sort of iffy in a sense of mind i guess
creativity]/b] -goes to carson .. ..dope was kinda not making sense of you dont mind me saying .. ..good job on both sides though
[b]multis - would say dope pulled this off just a lil more,carsons were there but were lacked in a sense
meta -this department goes to carson,dope had the right idea but no .. ..
overall conclusion -carson wins and takes demand wit his punches and personals,these are the two key elements which wins battles
vote/carsonjet