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Kordozar vs Sticky Bandit
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10 - 16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Beef No Dickriding Minimum posts to vote: 800 Check in by: 01-01-05 at 04:21 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 04:23 AM.
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You Aint Spit Yet, Alright...................
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Ya Onli Chances Of Bein On Top Is Goin First With Verse..
U Half Way Dead,I Give You Tha Cash So Ya Family Can Get Ya Herse.. And I'll Throw Ya Organs In Tha Water With Tha Rest Of Ya "Smurfs".. Tha Chicks Pics He Showed Was Fake,Cus He Dates On Tha Computer.. This Loser,Cant Rap So He Should Attend Ta "Jazz"Like Carlos Boozer... A Skittle,His Gangs Wass Rtc,Gsw,Alkqn Than Hoover... He Even Got His Self Confused,His Locations Wass Nc,Lb,And Now Vegas... Hes A "Pussy",That Hangs With "Pussies"Like Female 3Some Rapist.. Original "Fruit Loop",He Wass On Tha Cereal Box With "Tocann".. Tha Pc Is Life,Cus Even His Pic Shows That He Onli Has 2 Friends.. "Here He Come",He Wont Stand A Chance If I Lended Him A Extra Pair Of Legs.. Its No Hope,Hes Close Ta Bien "Toast" Like Bacon And Eggs.. Begs Fa Pc Chicks,Cuz U Got It Bad.. DaNewBreed562?Guess Thats A New Type Of Fags.. 21-0,Most His Wins Came 4rm Pepl With Under 600 Posts.. And He Dick Sucks Ta Get A Win,Doin Pm Fa Votes... ..Get Him Out Of Hurr.. ..Explanations.. His Nick Name Wass Smurf He Got A Girl On Tha Pc Been In Different Gangs..Rtc(Blue)Gsw(Purple)Alkqn(Yellow)Hoover(Blu e)All Skittle Colors Lived In Nc,Long Beach,And Las Vegas In His Pic He With 2 Guys(Friends)Ill Put His Pic Up Hur.. Aim Sn DaNewBreed562..Dats All |
Sticky Bandit has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 12:47 PM.
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Even His Net Life Shows He Got A Wife, Commitment On The Net?? I'll Put A Knife To Your Moms Rectum, And Slice Your Wifes Neck... You Got A Net Life, Coz Your On The PC 24/7 365 Days A Year..... I Can't Here Shit You Saying Like...... Handicaps With No Ears... Cheating Bitch IM'ing Me To Get Voted Against That Nigka Chaos Go Back To "Wrapping" Your "Subway Sandwitches" Fati Lay Off You Beating Me???Your Imagination Must Be Like Disney Pictures Coz Your Lyrical Scriptures Is Like Special Ed Kids, Painting Picture Your Writing Is Crooked, You Couldn't Write Straight If Rap Was Stencils You Pre-Write Lyrics From Artist And Re-Use Uhm Like Recycled Pencils Your Another Parallel, You Couldn't Elevate If You Rode In A Plain...... It's Simple To See Like Gladiators In Spain...I'm Killing Him In Pain.... Mathematical Equation But Yet You Couldn't Solve An Exponent You Couldn't Put A Bar Together If It Came With One Component Your Career's Looking Ugly, Like Ya Net Bitches Face..... Tiesha.. You Fucking Homo Bitch, Hired Michael Jackson To Bleach Ya.... Explanations He's Got A Net Girl Which He Say's Is His Wife He's On The Computer All Day Coz I Leave, Then Like I Be Back At Night And He Tells Me He Is Still On He IM'ed Me For Votes On That Battle With Him And Chaos... His Name Is Fati, And Sub Way Sandwitches Is A New Diet Plan, And He's Not Rapping, He Wrapping... He Pre Writes His Shit Then Posts It On IM For Me To See It In A Battle With Parallel And Oreo, Oreo Was Like No Wonder You Can't Elivate Your Parallel, And A Plain Elivates, But He Can't His Alias Name Is Exponent Which I Beat Before Components Is Like Parts His Girl Tiesha Is His Net Wife Or What Ever Michael Jackson Is A Homo And He Was Bleached |
U, U,U,U,UPPING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This was feedback posted for Sticky Bandit
ay i cant vote but jus dropin da feed on dis one...
sticky won this, his verse was tight all da way through, nice punches and flow, everything was hot... kordozar, your flow fell off towards the end and in certain parts of your verse...it was still nice, but sticky's was jus hotter... |
HaHa Funni Verses 4rm Tha Both Ya But Sticky Bandit Some Ya Explanations Iss Fraud,He Dont Be On Tha Pc All Day He Get On Around 11/12 You Never Beat Him You Beat Me His Alias Isnt Exponent Thass Mih Name He Never Pre Writ A Verse And Showed You Lmao Thas All That Are Fraud I Know Cus Thass Mih Brotha Good Battle Both Of You HaHa Shit Wass Funni As Hell.................................
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This was feedback posted for Sticky Bandit
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I Know Shit, I Keep Getting You Mixed Up With Him Fucker
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Upping This Shit Mang.................................
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Voted For: Kordozar
Even His Net Life Shows He Got A Wife, Commitment On The Net?? I'll Put A Knife To Your Moms Rectum, And Slice Your Wifes Neck... decent You Got A Net Life, Coz Your On The PC 24/7 365 Days A Year..... I Can't Here Shit You Saying Like...... Handicaps With No Ears... … Cheating Bitch IM'ing Me To Get Voted Against That Nigka Chaos Go Back To "Wrapping" Your "Subway Sandwitches" Fati Lay Off nice… You Beating Me???Your Imagination Must Be Like Disney Pictures Coz Your Lyrical Scriptures Is Like Special Ed Kids, Painting Picture … Your Writing Is Crooked, You Couldn't Write Straight If Rap Was Stencils You Pre-Write Lyrics From Artist And Re-Use Uhm Like Recycled Pencils decent… Your Another Parallel, You Couldn't Elevate If You Rode In A Plain...... It's Simple To See Like Gladiators In Spain...I'm Killing Him In Pain.... … Mathematical Equation But Yet You Couldn't Solve An Exponent You Couldn't Put A Bar Together If It Came With One Component decent Your Career's Looking Ugly, Like Ya Net Bitches Face..... Tiesha.. You Fucking Homo Bitch, Hired Michael Jackson To Bleach Ya.... … Ya Onli Chances Of Bein On Top Is Goin First With Verse.. U Half Way Dead,I Give You Tha Cash So Ya Family Can Get Ya Herse.. decent… And I'll Throw Ya Organs In Tha Water With Tha Rest Of Ya "Smurfs".. Tha Chicks Pics He Showed Was Fake,Cus He Dates On Tha Computer.. … This Loser,Cant Rap So He Should Attend Ta "Jazz"Like Carlos Boozer... A Skittle,His Gangs Wass Rtc,Gsw,Alkqn Than Hoover... decent… He Even Got His Self Confused,His Locations Wass Nc,Lb,And Now Vegas... Hes A "Pussy",That Hangs With "Pussies"Like Female 3Some Rapist.. … Original "Fruit Loop",He Wass On Tha Cereal Box With "Tocann".. Tha Pc Is Life,Cus Even His Pic Shows That He Onli Has 2 Friends.. … "Here He Come",He Wont Stand A Chance If I Lended Him A Extra Pair Of Legs.. Its No Hope,Hes Close Ta Bien "Toast" Like Bacon And Eggs.. decent… Begs Fa Pc Chicks,Cuz U Got It Bad.. DaNewBreed562?Guess Thats A New Type Of Fags.. make your flow longer… 21-0,Most His Wins Came 4rm Pepl With Under 600 Posts.. And He Dick Sucks Ta Get A Win,Doin Pm Fa Votes... decent… Overall…both of you need to elevate & work on your vocab n’ shit…nice persona’s tho…but Kordo took this one just by a hair tho… Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Sticky Bandit
damn son, stick took this one, no need for you to explain, i feel kon cam kinda weak but his verse was stiil hot, meta4= sticky got them all over wordplay=sticky structure=sticky, i hate prple though opener and closer=sticky, some hot shit man personals=tid, yall bith got the personals down best lines from both You Beating Me???Your Imagination Must Be Like Disney Pictures Coz Your Lyrical Scriptures Is Like Special Ed Kids, Painting Picture ^made me luagh lay off using other peoples names such as pussy parrelel, i almost aint vote for you there Removed by request |
Voted For: Sticky Bandit
sticky...... u had some nice personals in the verse.....your punches hit pretty hard....this is one of the better verse ive seen from you........you never fell off on one bar....no self glory....every bar at least hit decent at worst.......stayed consistent throughout....ok wordplay...not a whole lot though....multis werent all that great...but still ok......structure was off in some parts....but still decent....overall good verse.... kordozar........... you had some good personals too....not as many as sticky though.......structure was tied....multis tied....wordplay tied......i think the part that sticky beat you on was the punches...i felt that his just hit a lot harder.....and he stayed more consistent throughout his verse....where you would have a good bar...then just an ok bar...... return favor in sig Removed by request |
Thanks Mang...Upping On Some Votes Here...............
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sticky u suck anyway...
erased my vote when it was xplained... ...damn newb |
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Voted For: Sticky Bandit
Damn......... . . not much to say on this one..... . . Kordozar-your punches seem to be played out......neva net threat....its stupid.....second with sentences that long you need multies BAD on some of the lines i couldent tell what the rhymin word was.....fix that.......your structure wasnt that bad ill give that to you.....overall if you had multies you probly would have won this elevate on that......i really didnt see any good metas.......just a weak verse....come harder next time....specially with someone of this calibur....step up your game.... . . Sticky-Good verse it wouldent surprise me if you KO him....and i would like to see a rematch....any way.....if your gonna do multies. do them all through out the verse not only would it read better you will probly get more wins that way 2.....great metas. i can see that it is your strong suit...keep that up.....not really much els to say you pretty much steped on his head.......oh yeah and good structure.........so its easy to see my vote is for Sticky.. . . . (rematch-rematch-rematch!!!) |
Shut Up Coward,You Bite Lines Off Pepl But No Worries Uppin This Shit..............
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Voted For: Sticky Bandit
easy vote punches- Kordo, you had more of em. Work on em though. Sticky, all yours were personals, but the ones u had were good. personals- Sticky easy, yours were harder hittin, and you had more. Kordo, weak personals, weak material as well. multis- Sticky for havin em. metas- Sticky, good metas overall. MJ line is played though. Kordo, had a lot of em, but now good ones. word play- Kordo, u had more wordplay, some of it witty, some not. Sticky, only one example of word play "wrapping" structure- Sticky, nice structure, lines stayed somewhere near each other. Kordo, lines kept getting streched, work on ya structure humor- Sticky, you had me smilin. flow- Sticky, decent flow overall. Kept rollin, almost never fell off. Kordo, flow fell off a lot, hard to keep rollin. Sticky, good drop overall. Work on more wordplay, and more punches. Punches + Personals= Total Merkation Kordo, aight drop. Work on your personals, punches, and structure. It all helps. No Hate Just An Honest Voter. v/Sticky Bandit px |
Lmao At These Votes,But Im 1 Of Ya D/r Friends Fa Tha Last Vote Tha Onli Way He Would Win Iss By Tellin His Homo Friends.Ike,Oreo,And Tha Otha Cunt But Uppin This Shit And If We Eva Battle Again And I Blacklist These Dicks I Bet You Wont Get No Votes But O-Well Uppin This Shit.....................
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Mang Nigka The Fuck Don't Get Fly With Your Mouth...........
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Lmao Shit Didnt Even Make Sence,Uppin This Shit............
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Voted For: Kordozar
A'ight first of all...I.D...that shit was plain fuckin wack...I have no idea how you winnin this battle, cause that is no battle verse...you have NOOO punches, no personals, and the ones you did attempt about his wife did NOT hit hard at all...elevate...and get the fuckin Dickryda's outta here...Kordazar...came pretty good, decent flow decent punches, definetly enough to merk this bitch...nuff said... Returnt he favor...links in sig...feedback is even appreciated... |
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Voted For: Sticky Bandit
i think that ID took this battle but barely yall really need to work on tha flow of ur verse. it was really choppy and the punches werent all that. throw in some multies here n there if u can n it will sound better when ur verse is read holla at me Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Sticky Bandit
ok here we go Structure-I.D.(the font makes ur strructure better by an inch) Punches-Kordozar(i liked da Boozer line, especialy since i like ball) Flow-No 1(text has no flow) Multies-I.D(had alot more than K) Kordozar 1/ I.D. 2/ Ovveral-I.Di( i was feelin urs way more, nice to both, no hate) V/I.D. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Kordozar
Gotta give this one to Kordozar on this one , pretty dope battle Kor Ya Onli Chances Of Bein On Top Is Goin First With Verse.. U Half Way Dead,I Give You Tha Cash So Ya Family Can Get Ya Herse.. decent opener And I'll Throw Ya Organs In Tha Water With Tha Rest Of Ya "Smurfs".. Tha Chicks Pics He Showed Was Fake,Cus He Dates On Tha Computer.. This Loser,Cant Rap So He Should Attend Ta "Jazz"Like Carlos Boozer... pretty dope A Skittle,His Gangs Wass Rtc,Gsw,Alkqn Than Hoover... He Even Got His Self Confused,His Locations Wass Nc,Lb,And Now Vegas... Hes A "Pussy",That Hangs With "Pussies"Like Female 3Some Rapist.. decent Original "Fruit Loop",He Wass On Tha Cereal Box With "Tocann".. Tha Pc Is Life,Cus Even His Pic Shows That He Onli Has 2 Friends.. "Here He Come",He Wont Stand A Chance If I Lended Him A Extra Pair Of Legs.. Its No Hope,Hes Close Ta Bien "Toast" Like Bacon And Eggs.. Begs Fa Pc Chicks,Cuz U Got It Bad.. DaNewBreed562?Guess Thats A New Type Of Fags.. 21-0,Most His Wins Came 4rm Pepl With Under 600 Posts.. And He Dick Sucks Ta Get A Win,Doin Pm Fa Votes... lol, lazy so ill just break it down from here pretty dope verse seen you do alot better but nice shyt 7.5/10 I.D Even His Net Life Shows He Got A Wife, Commitment On The Net?? I'll Put A Knife To Your Moms Rectum, And Slice Your Wifes Neck... thought his wife was a computer? You Got A Net Life, Coz Your On The PC 24/7 365 Days A Year..... I Can't Here Shit You Saying Like...... Handicaps With No Ears... dope Cheating Bitch IM'ing Me To Get Voted Against That Nigka Chaos Go Back To "Wrapping" Your "Subway Sandwitches" Fati Lay Off not feelin it You Beating Me???Your Imagination Must Be Like Disney Pictures Coz Your Lyrical Scriptures Is Like Special Ed Kids, Painting Picture LMOA, NICE ! Your Writing Is Crooked, You Couldn't Write Straight If Rap Was Stencils You Pre-Write Lyrics From Artist And Re-Use Uhm Like Recycled Pencils decent Your Another Parallel, You Couldn't Elevate If You Rode In A Plain...... It's Simple To See Like Gladiators In Spain...I'm Killing Him In Pain.... weak Mathematical Equation But Yet You Couldn't Solve An Exponent You Couldn't Put A Bar Together If It Came With One Component Your Career's Looking Ugly, Like Ya Net Bitches Face..... Tiesha.. You Fucking Homo Bitch, Hired Michael Jackson To Bleach Ya.... decent closer but ima have to hand this one to kordoozar 7/10 VOTE=Kordozar |
This was feedback posted for Kordozar
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