AK-mixa versus lyrical killer
 

RULES
10-15 lines
after check in spit in 20 minutes.
no dick riding
no hate votes






!YA FEEL ME NIGGA!

I spit lines like a venomous snake that cuts in to yo skin/(Like a snake)
Bitch why is you even battlin me,you know imma win/NO shit)
Yo, ho , all I wanna know is why cant you freestyle/(yeah)
Infact when you freestyle you remind me of gommer pile/(fucker)
I'll kill yo whole family wit my fucked up lines/
I kill you like a mix of cars , wit deafs and blinds/(Your dead)
wit my rhymes I could take out your whole universe/
Why do you suck at freestyling is it a curse?/
Im tired of fuckin bitches like this thankin hes cool/
Imma kill dis bitch in dis battle and throw him in a pool/
I sick and tired of talkin bout this fuckin bitch/
Everything this fag says Ill take it all and switch/

yo fuckin turn home boi............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................Yo reply this shit in at least 30 minutes please............................................ .................................................. ..........peace

your a Lyrical homicide dats getting swatted like a FLY
I'm so sorry Lyrical dat I have to whip your ass like "Miracle"
lyrically u getting your 14 yr. old ass merked by obnoxius verbs
u a student dat loves to freestyle,but it ends up in garbage piles
I know now my tongue has bled from your death
seeing your lungs out ya chest and bloody flesh
like my mom said, " Practice makes perfect"
like ya mom said, "Lyrical Practice ain't worth it"
your rhymes get booted off RB more than my computer
if I could post an "L" in ya face they'd call you lyrical loser
you will always make a dope "L" (Loser) platinum RB record
see I jumped your ass more than once like we playing checkers
it's alright you got begginers luck and can't help you a stupid fuck
your mind blowing 14 yr. old fables and fake story tales
will you ever realize your whack lyrical genius won't fail

ayo........... lyrical killer good battle man, I haven't had a good battle like dis in a long ass time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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yeah well i tried but were ot gettin any votes homie
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yo.....i b tryin 2 vote but wen i do it b sayin "invalid session" or suttin...mah vote wuld b on ak-mixa doe......u got sum nice linezz

ak-mixa, id stop uppin if a was you man.......

ur gona get ur ass DQ'ed.........................
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Opening: LK
Punches: LK
Personals: LK
Flow: LK
Structure: AK
Closing: LK

Nigga learn to rhyme..............

BREAKDOWN
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AK-MIXA

hardly any fo ur shit rhymed man.... 'FLY' and 'Miracle', incase you didnt know.... do not rhyme

it wud of been a good verse if it had rhymed
not a bad structure, couple of nice punches in there....

LYRICAL KILLER

u dont need to explain each line at the end of it..... stop that now!
urz was pretty basic, but it all rhymed, and thats why you win!

vote - Lyrical Killer

NO HATE

END OF

a yo young head ,,,,,,,,,,, was that a vote fo me or for ak??.............................................. .................................................. .........................................

Opening: LK
Punches: LK
Personals: LK
Flow: LK
Structure: AK
Closing: LK

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yo dawg its pretty obvious that young voted for you^^^^

opener L
personals L
flow L
rhyme scene L
closer L

no hate jus an honest vote AK work on your rhymeing dawg

peace

I can't poll but
Opening: AK
Punches: AK
Personals: TIE
Flow: LK
Structure: LK
Closing: AK

i caught ak's rhyme scheme but it does need a bit of work
overall, he had more substance than lyrical_killer.

Jacktheripherbs vs. debaser

lk took this one cuz he was better in everthing here it is

Opening: LK
Punches: LK
Personals: LK
Flow: LK
Structure: AK
Closing: LK
Same as crooked commical

my rhyme sheme was rhyming in one line or two mostly one dumb ass bitches that said it didn't rhyme

I have to say FUCK YALL BITCHES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

your a Lyrical homicide
getting swatted like a FLY
I've been so sorry about you Lyrical
dat I have to whip your ass like "Miracle"
u a student dat loves to freestyle
but it ends up in garbage piles
I know now my tongue has bled from your death
seeing your lungs out ya chest and bloody flesh
your rhymes get booted off RB more than my computer
if I could post an "L" in ya face they'd call you lyrical loser

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha ak I fucked yo lil punk ass up why dont you just admit it and stfu you lil fuckin bitchZ!!!!!!!!!!!! DAMN ,,,,,Dont try explaining stuff cause it aint gonna help shit because I already have 3 votes going fo five!!!!!! So were UPPIN FO VOTES still!

Opening: LK
Punches: LK
Personals: LK
Flow: LK
Structure: AK
Closing: LK


both cats need mad elevation...but good battle.

Opening: LK
Punches: LK
Personals: LK
Flow: LK
Structure: AK
Closing: LK
Overall: LK

good battle............................................ ..................................................