krakajack vs. tactical
 

5 bars, usual rules.
no feedin so it makes no difference who goes first.
g'luck.

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My flow'll rip ya, this pedafile hits "pay dirt" with Goldilocks
I'll leave this Kraka in the dark worse than a Jack in the box
This kid spits ill? Maybe cause skills is what he "lax"
Faggot gets his flows from the ingredients on Krakajacks
I'll mess ya up cause like your dick, your'll never Beat Me
Tactical rippin this racist kracka befo he can even key
You callin yourself a Kracka? Thats my line stupid Fag
The day you beat me is the day when I lead the KKK
i jus ripped ya a new one, now you and ya dad can experiment again
Sorry kid but ya undefeated reign has come to a tragic end

this kid could load his clips with rhyms n still not be packed-to-kill
cuz infestin thumb tacks with aids is the only way hes tactic-ill
like retarted boxers stepin into the ring hes about to lose his-first-fight
cuz puttin womens handbags in the freezer is the only way hes-purse-ice (percise)
i stick like lice, i can turn u off from distances cuz ur skills-r-remote
ur gonna choke cuzu got lost in my matrix of words but u can never-relode
he stays under my spits cuz he IS my left nut but im the-nut-kraker
only reason he spits the distance is cuz hes constantly pullin a-one-hander
only way he sees green is wen he envyin me but he jus payed the last-toll
only reason i couldn't rip him a new one is cuz this kid IS an ass-hole

good battle. im goin to bed. good luck.

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can't poll but anyway.....tactical had the nice structure/flow...altho the lines were basic at times... the beat ya dick shit is well played.
Kracka had some tight lines.... the tactic-ill was real nice etc.... altho its 'precise' lol.
The last three lines all started with only which was wack but the finisher was good... Overall a better verse.

Vote - Krackjack

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thanks a lot. that makes it 1-0 me. how will that be put on the poll then????????????????????????????????????????????

uppin x2. i can't vote on any other battles cuz i don't have the post count so sorry. uppin however.

krakajack, i like, i like, ur good man, dat was sum good shit, but ya gotta mix in sum personals tho, u have ill punches but lack personals. Tactical wasn't bad but his verse wasn't able to compete with krakajack's. His punches were ill, and he just came out harder. Good battle tho.

Vote- krakajack

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yo, i'll def vote on ur shit, no prob. the only thing is i can't poll it cuz i don't have enough posts to be able to do so. thanks for the vote tho.

I Was Feeling krackajack WAYY MORE....

no explanation needed he was overal better everying flow,punches etc

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thank you very much. that makes it 3-0 me if aftermath's vote counts. im sorry, im new to this site i don't know how it works with people who vote but can't poll.

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this site seems pretty active so y doesn't anyone of the like 250 members who r always on vote???

people who vote but can't poll don't count just so you know...
breakdown..
opener- Krakajack ...feelin the wordplay on that...
wordplay... Other than that first line... Tactical...Skills r remote..played..
closer- Krakajack....seemed like Tactical lost it at the end..resorted to sex crap....
punches...Krackajack...not really feelin to many of the punches bye tactical..he had em like 2 were ok the rest....
flow- I felt Tactical on the flow a bit more too..you did dashes and shit to show your wordplay and that kinda fucked it up for me...
personals... Both had some good one i think KrackaJacks were just a bit more creative....his Tack one kinda shadowed your pay dirt nice wordplay though..
overall krackajack...one

finally, another vote. on other sites that would be a ko but it looks like it works differently here so i gotta wait to 5 or something.

yes ...yes.. you do...unless you would have said in the rules...that 3 is a ko then i think it would of been a ko...jsut to let ya know..one

thanks a lot, ill figure this out eventually lol. ya got a pretty different way of workin the battles around here, but i llike it. thanks for the help

if you want votes you up it just in case you didn't know ...or you go around and post the link in other battles after you give an opinion of the shit....you can only up it 5 times anymore and you will be DQ'ed

final uppin. come on guys, jus 2 more votes n i win............................................... ...........

uppin fo some votes. Good battle krakajack .................................................. .................................................. ........

krakajack Is DQ'ed For Uppin 10 Times.
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