revenge_archer vs McProfit
 

ok u know da rules

10 lines
no d/r
no hate
no crew

u spit first. luck to u

aight checkin in good luck to you too...............................................
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ok ive checked in now too, so wen ur ready but hurry my dads kicking me off soon.........................

I spit so hard, fast and messy
People think I'm wack but It's my lyrical ectasy/
He's from the land of torture/
Must be no clit just dick for every merking/
At the rate I'm goin this boys gonna be stuffed more than a christmas turkey
Get outta my face cuz I'll wreck yours with distaste with anything just to get you outta the black race/
You don't belong as a negroe/
Your best song goes along the lines of Enrique's song Hero/
You aim at something but all you hit is nothing cuz you shootin blanks/
Har-Fuckity har you suck dick I'm gonna make you walk the plank.

his profile said he was from the land of torture....... and some fuckin how I was reminded of a pirate. I dunno just watched Pirates of the Carribean it's a pretty good movie.

ok its time i sent this emcee back to tennessee
cos this is a non profit game, cos your rapping to the lowest degree.
but if you disagree then i can agree, you couldnt pay the admission fee to any under sea dream.

but heres something thats extremly free, my white female ass stupid.....go back to a. b. c

dammit i totally blonded dat and just realised i only put 4 lines *slaps head*

oh well thts wot ill put forward you will prob win cos u put all ten lines unless u will allow me to write the other 6.

(the other 6 lines)

if ive gotta rap then ive gotta smack.....ya momma for letting u come back after you had dat asthma attack.

geeks like u freaks like me we couldnt win cos geeks minus 3.

i wish i could just send u back, but im afraid you afraid with a 'no return stamp'

well this is the end of my rap, ill send u a quater crack...and i hope you dun come back

go on write the other 6 try and get it within 10 mins thoug aight?
Peace!............................................ ................................................

i wish i could just send u back, but im afraid you afraid with a 'no return stamp'

the second afraid was supposed to be 'arrived'

and im aware all together i wrote 9 lines oh well.

comeon peeps vote dun sleep!

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Flow = Profit
Structure = Profit
Wordplay = Profit
Punches = Profit

Overal = profit

REPAY THE FAVOUR PLEASE WITH AN HONEST VOTE


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100140

simple as this.....

profit takes everythin

dont need to type out all the opener, closer n all that shit....

vote - profit

hit this up honestly plz.......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...955#post1004955

thanks

laterz

yo you both need work on flow and shit this was not a good battle at all shit..

but i have to vote for profit cause atleast he had something in his verse to judge..

vote mc p

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yo dawgs dun sleep on dis its 2-0 to mc.

uppin!!!!!........................................ ......

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Profit took it all...This was a merking...Profit also dont forget to poll in me vs narcotics...Anyways like is said profit took this battle so RA elevate kid...

shit son I forgot to vote on your battle and I'm sorry could you plz poll vote yours though^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

flow-mc
structure-mc
punches-mc
personals-tie
overal-mc

not the greatest battle but it was ok!!!!

check it MC merked this kid which is sad considering his last line came from the fact he watched pirates of the caribean....anyway your structure and flow are still fucked as ever MC...and to the other kat....archer....spit all your lines at one god damn time..
my vote...profit...peace hit this up plz one....no hate..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100678

Thanx for the votes............................................. ... Yeah I have a pretty messed structure but I don't know how to fix it ..................

mc profit loses for upping the battle too much. . . . . . . . .

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