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mc aines 12-21-03 04:17 PM

Mc Aines vs .:FreemaN:.
 
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Ayo man u no da rules

10-15 lines
no crew votes
no d/r

u spit first


i will spit wen i c u av

Freeman 12-21-03 04:31 PM

aight, only jus seen this.....

ima check in now man and start to key it up.......

good luck

inabit

mc aines 12-21-03 04:33 PM

ayo man dares no time limit on ya shit so u dont av post it straight away just post it wen its ready

Freeman 12-21-03 04:40 PM

im done...................................

check it................................................ ...................

Freeman 12-21-03 04:40 PM

rite, u make me spit first, so u can bite all my rhymes --
u shud get banned from this site, for your lyrical crimes --

this guy shud be ashamed, with a name like 'mc aines' --
ima hit u in the stomach so hard ur gona have virtual pains --

'mc aines', the one hu always complains, the dude hu is covered in cum stains --
he neva gets beta, neva gains, his ass shud be killed jus like Saddam Hussein's --

im not gona stop spittin this shit, its comin at u like a tidal wave --
even when uve drowned in my spit, i'll still be spittin on ur grave --

now spit ur basic rhymes and ur herb standard verse, dont hesitate --
then a can get my 5 votes and u can follow ur sig, 'Dont Hate Just Elevate' --

Freeman 12-21-03 04:41 PM

9 minute keystyle there.............................

lets see ur shit then boy.........................................

good luck.............................................. ...

mc aines 12-21-03 04:46 PM

aight man i will start keyin ma stuff now...........

check dis shit agen l8a .................................................. ......

Freeman 12-21-03 04:47 PM

u best not take long man............

a did mine in 9 minutes off the top so dnt be much longer than that!!!

good luck........................................

inabit

Freeman 12-21-03 05:04 PM

20 mins now man......

hurry it up...........................if ya can.............................

inabit............................................ ....

mc aines 12-21-03 05:53 PM

Your rite i shud get banned 4 my lyrical crimes./
My lyrics are the crime they kill everyt time/

You posted ur verse,u say its a 9 minute keystyle/
You need 2 go home, slow down learn how 2 freestyle/

You hail from 'birmingham' Thats close to my town/
Dat shits a disgrace and needs 2 be burned down(birmingham)/

Im known all over my town for my lyrical brain/
im tearin you apart there and leavin no remains/

checked you profile Your born 25th december, on christmas day/
xmas is gettin near its a shame no1s rememberin your birthday/

My lyrics are like fire, there hot and always killing./
im a spit it all out and give u a vicious grilling/

previous battles you dis ur oponent and say ur new 2 the rap game/
Your new yourself ur lyrics are lame, any way im gonna clean up b4 MY lyrics catch a flame(bcome hot and start killin/

uppin this shit

Freeman 12-21-03 06:08 PM

ok, nice verse........

bite my verse...... please do, a dnt mind ¬_¬

newayz.....

honest votes on this plz..............

thanks

uppin #1

Crooked-Comical 12-21-03 06:10 PM

Alright


Opener = Tie
Flow = Tie
Structure = tie

WOW .. lol ...

Punches = aines

" checked you profile Your born 25th december, on christmas day/
xmas is gettin near its a shame no1s rememberin your birthday/ "

Good Job Ya Did Ya Homework nice

Enetertainment = Aines

Closer = Free

now spit ur basic rhymes and ur herb standard verse, dont hesitate --
then a can get my 5 votes and u can follow ur sig, 'Dont Hate Just Elevate' --

Sik


Vote = Aines

SIKKKKKKKKKKK BATTLE

Peace

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t-west 12-21-03 06:41 PM

meh, i disagree with u crooked. I think aine's lost dis battle, i'll break it down.
Opener- Freeman (aines just stole his concept and replaced rhyme with tyme gotta do better than that)
Closer- Freeman (no need 2 explain)
Structure- I was gonna say tie until I saw Aine's closer dat just messed up ur entire structure, Freeman!!! stop seperating bars lmao!!!
Punches-meh...they were alrite if I had 2 judge, I would choose freeman just because of his closer, that was the illest punch spit in dis battle. Wasn't feelin the Christmas one because u should of ripped him on that one, u came too weak on it.

Vote- Freeman


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Freeman 12-21-03 07:22 PM

aight, thanks for the votes y'all.....

uppin this #2

gona get slept on but no mata....

keep em comin in......

thanks....

HotRod 12-21-03 08:09 PM

i think it went down like this

opener:aines
wordplay:aines
punches:tie
flow:tie
closer:freeman

overall:aines

i will appreciate it if you all will vote on

HotRod vs McNookie
HotRod vs Matt Dillon

mc aines 12-21-03 09:25 PM

thnx 4 da votes so far but uppin this shit #1 time

uppin 4 votes............................................. .......................

lyrical_killer 12-21-03 09:29 PM

Ok ....................................
\opener:aines
wordplay:aines
punches:tie
flow:tie
closer:freeman



Well I think that from mine and aines battle he has improved alot so Imma go wit dis shit>...............................................



tight flow+my vote=aines

T REX 12-21-03 11:08 PM

open: mcaines
structure: mcaines, both were about same, but he had more lines
flow: both about same
punches: freeman
personals: mcaines
close: freeman

overall: mcaines

Freeman 12-22-03 06:00 AM

ok, fair is fair.....

how can he bite my opener, and then take the opener category?

woteva tho.....

keep em comin in......

uppin #3

.:K:. 12-22-03 07:59 AM

OPENER=TIE
CLOSER=FREE
STRUCTURE=FREE
PUNCHES=FREE(MC TO SHORT AND SIMPLE)
PERSONALS=TIE
ENJOYENT=FREE

CLOSE SHIT BUT THIS GOES TO FREE..............................PZ

Dev 12-22-03 08:26 AM

thought this was a pretty close battle..i like to see two english heads up against it...here's Dev's breakdown...

punches=free
flow=tie
structure=tie
vocab=tie
opener=free[the other was feeding]
closer=free[close but the other was strtched so...]
creativity=mc
enjoyment=mc
vote=free
liked the england reference....both need to come harder with the punches...but not bad////pZ

Token 12-22-03 08:39 AM

Punches- Tie
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Aines
Opener- Tie
Closer- Freeman
Enjoyment- Aines
Overall- Aines just barely edged it out.

No hate.. Honest vote..


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100270

Token 12-22-03 09:37 AM

back to poll... sorry I forgot to.

Mc aines.. you forgot to poll on mine as well..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100270

Sorry to freepost.......
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rule 12-22-03 10:34 AM

this was a pretty weak battle

Flow FM
Structure FM
Punches FM
Creativity FM
And MCyour strter line you took and flipped from FM
But you had a good verse just not good enough

peace

The Jett 12-22-03 10:36 AM

Before anything.......Mc Aines Fed off Freeman
punches- tie
flo- Free
meti4's- Free
multi's- none
wordplay- none
personals- tie
overall- Free
even with Mc Aines feeding like a bitch freeman takes this


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