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Slim Thug 12-21-03 04:25 PM

Yungheadwrecka vs Cannabarz
 
Rules:
10-12 Lines
No Feeding
No Freeposting
Lyrical Soldiers can vote (Honestly since its your tryout)
We Drop At The Same Time...
If you win your in if not your out...
No Prewriting shit

Good luck~

Slim Thug 12-21-03 05:14 PM

Pound this bitch and leave him surrounded by dust clouds and bricks
Only dude I know who clears his throat by taking out the dicks
None of us are feeling you, like girls that got no fuckin frame
How you expect to toss me around in this match when you can’t pull your own weight
Watchout Dont get to close our youll be possesed by CB's spirit
the one where every verse you post is consisted of bitten lyrics
Someone Help Cannabarz tha guy he bites was shot and killed over a purse
Without him his lines will be so wack even Ethiopians wouldnt feed from his verse
Look It dont take a genius to know in this battle can will fall
Either Cans skills are 'Top Secret' or they don't exist at all
Ya styles too plane so the twin towers is all you could drop on me
Its over I own this pussy like I was playin vaginal monopoly

No feeding...Drop ya shit boy no takin prewrite time....

Slim Thug 12-21-03 08:34 PM

Drop ya verse kid.... .

Slim Thug 12-21-03 08:36 PM

U got like 30 Minutes no prewritten shit.............................................. ..... .

Slim Thug 12-21-03 08:54 PM

This has been Changed to No Crew Votes now spit NIGGA no prewritin bitch .

Slim Thug 12-21-03 09:33 PM

U got 27 minutes..... . .

D.Zaster 12-21-03 09:51 PM

punches home ya brain, and RENT ya thoughts, so son, im mad insane with words!
I'll fukkin drain ya herd, fill head with leads' peep how i put brains to words!..
your fames absurd! when Tonya raised u HERB! from the basket 2 free you come!
we see your dumb! unzip my pants' fuk his merk list..an straight: P on Young..
Comprehend to rink ya thoughts an sink ya drops with this pen-through!..
Only reason I took out the rule, was so your crew wouldn't vote against you!..
Identify ya Gender, with a crew of PRIVATES? lol..just press reply and center!..
Ill Knive contenders, open his guts intell his bloodline says: I SURRENDER!..
Yunghead your dumb threads I'll massacure, Think You'll survive my blows?!..
Arrive at shows with massive dicks, to take out his crew full of PRIVATE hoes!..
Glue ya EYES JUST CLOSED, so u can adjust to ya new enviroment!..
because i'll drop this kid easily' like ray charles do retirement!..

blah..no punches..I just stuck to personals and such..hope you this verse without my usuall punchlines..

D.Zaster 12-21-03 09:54 PM

is that u in ya pic? straiiit pic son.

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Slim Thug 12-21-03 09:55 PM

Yuh thas me hahah...That u on da leftr? .

D.Zaster 12-21-03 09:57 PM

lol ^ ok, nuff freepostin ...lets get some muthafuckin votes!...

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TheUnderRated 12-21-03 10:01 PM

votin for it then....nice drop you both got skillz...da breakdown..
Punches...seeing as how cannabarz admitted to not having any...Headwrecka...
personals....you had quite a bit o Personals...but this one really stood out to me..Watchout Dont get to close our youll be possesed by CB's spirit
the one where every verse you post is consisted of bitten lyrics
hehe ILL...going head on this one too my bad if you don't agree..
flow.. i give flow to Cannabarz...it was on...very nice..
wordplay...this goes to cannabarz also...so i guess it really just depends on the opener and closers....
opener..meh it was sexual which i usually don't go for ...so sorry dog i give opener to cannaabarz...
closer...again sexual but i actually kinda like this one..so HEadwrecka gets it..
so thats a tie...but i think punches and personals..win battles so no hate i'm a give this one to headwrecka...if i fucked up voting you should win anyway...one.

self 12-21-03 10:11 PM

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Don't mind me

*whistles innocently*

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Slim Thug 12-21-03 10:25 PM

1-0 Uppin #1 .

Given Light. 12-21-03 10:33 PM

Am I allowed to vote? Or no since I'm not joining or anything related to your crew? Just wondering cuz if I can I will.

Slim Thug 12-21-03 10:35 PM

Ya you can dawg .

Given Light. 12-21-03 10:49 PM

Aight good This was a respectful battle by both of you. If sexuality was in there I don't give a fuck. I read each of yours over at least 3 times so I could analyse this situation.

Opening:Slim thug or Yhw
Punches:Slim thug or Yhw
Personals:Cannabarz
Metaphors:Slim thug took it but both of you didn't have many
Multis: Cannabarz definetly had more multis which I think was only 1 or 2.
Structure: Slim thug or yhw
Flow:Slim thug or Yhw which one are you?
Vocabulary: Cannabarz
Closing: Tie but I liked them both nonetheless.
Overall:Slim thug nice job this was a respectful and nicely done by both of you. Cannabarz you did a great job I remember when I battled you and got merked. Take this as constructive critism aight? Peace!

Vote:Slim thug or Yhw

If you guys could look into these battles and hook them up wit a vote I'd appreciate it. Thanx.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100301

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100289

Slim Thug 12-21-03 11:08 PM

Uppin # 2.... .

Given Light. 12-21-03 11:11 PM

Not meaning to freepost or anything but what is your emcee name? Youngheadwrecka or Slim thug aight just wondering plz holla back. Aight Peace!

Slim Thug 12-21-03 11:13 PM

Slim Thug .

Tha Duce 12-21-03 11:26 PM

aight close battle Young keeps getting better I notice and that is a good thing to see people get better fo sure. He took this one wit slightly better word play and punchs were damn close but I think his were just a touch better. damn its hard to pic wit this one. but I think Young got it by a lil.

Vote Young..

Slim Thug 12-22-03 12:09 AM

Thats 3-0 thanx for da votes but lets keep em rollin in...No sleepin on this ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Menik 12-22-03 12:39 AM

This was a alright battle..
Punches: Yung
Structure: Tie
Flow: Canna
Opener: Canna
Closer: Yung
Vocab: Tie
Metas: Yung
Overall this was a good battle but i think Yung took this one..props to both though...vote goes to yung

Slim Thug 12-22-03 01:13 AM

Thanx....1 more vote on this fucking battle lol .

Jo-we 12-22-03 01:20 AM

This wuz a hot battle...I can't poll vote..but i'll just give feedback...Both of yall could merk me...But still..:P...I thought Yungheadwrecka took this..I just thought he had some tuff personals....Cannabarz dropped sum nice shyt...But Young, I think, Gotcha wit sum strong personals....But if yall could hit this battle up..it'd be greatly appreciated...


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100423

D.Zaster 12-22-03 01:35 AM

Uppin good battle young...uppin for the win.

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Slim Thug 12-22-03 01:37 AM

Sorry 2 toss you ya firs loss kid but keep up ya level and youl'' be fine .

MethodZ 12-22-03 02:03 AM

^LOL

this was a good battle both of u had the same structre but i felt slim had better punches and more creativity..
and thats what gets the votes so mine goes to

vote- Slim Thug


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