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Slim Thug 12-21-03 08:02 PM

Yungheadwrecka vs .::Narcotics::.
 
Rules:
No feeding
No freeposting
10-12 lines
If you cant poll dont vote period...
1/2 hr to spit or disqualifed
good luck drop ne time within tha 30

.::Narcotics::. 12-21-03 08:18 PM

checkin
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Slim Thug 12-21-03 08:20 PM

checked in ill be droppin in 10 .

Slim Thug 12-21-03 08:39 PM

Credit leaking, flipping coins be the only time ya chance of getting a-head is even
Ill stick a fucking ton in ya lungs so when ya spit all I'm hearing is heavy breathing
Already leaving? bitch you opposing a vet, Ill break your neck and stick ya nose in ya chest
Cause if you modelled for gun companies you still wouldn't be posing a threat
Closing ya text...and you aint equipped to cope, get kicked n chocked
This bitch gets toked when I swing to knock his head clean off like I got fists of soap
Stripped n poked...ya wind pipe n vocal chords my choice of token
So when I rip em out at least you can say that your voice has broken
Nineteen and Four one less win then me but I wasn’t merked by hardcor3
X Black tie but token got tired of him ripped his tie off and made his kneck sore
Cut n rushed, stick ya dick in ya ball sack n I'll believe you when ya say ya fuckin nuts
You didn't extend the red carpet...I was forced to make one from ya blood n guts.....

Axiom 12-22-03 03:32 PM

All Votes Deleted As Narcotics Didn't Drop His Verse And You Did It For Him... If He Doesn't Drop In 30 Minutes... He Is DQ'ed Though.
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.::Narcotics::. 12-22-03 03:33 PM

thank u...29 minutes left.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...
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.::Narcotics::. 12-22-03 03:56 PM

Slim thug,dont ring a bell. u aint no established mc tryna spit..
shit kid u dug ya self a hole,tryna potray the gangsta in ya sig..
its ridiculis, cuz u can type flows but noone will ever hear u speak..
cuz our skill level has a bigger gap then lettermans teeth..
my punches are knockin u in that platinum grill of yours
listen fag. your pretty wak, try an use a punch i havent said before..
ya verse is full of played metaphors thats gunna cost u loss numebr 6..
because the difference between your spit an mine is that u lack an original Diss..
it seems your in ya prime after only of month of battlyn fakes..
After 26 battles wudnt u think this kid wud elevate...
dont celebrate just yet. wut u think u facin.dont ever try to compaire ill..
cuz ill leave ya in a head ache state of mind after fallin out ya dads computer chair..
YUng? u took a whole day to drop, stop the votes this is proposturis..
no time to stop this, even if it takes all day i got more patience then doctors..

.::Narcotics::. 12-22-03 04:02 PM

not really..your pretty gay an id fuk u up in a audio or text battle

u nigger lover..thats wut u really are...

fukin red neck muthafukin fagat..dont freepost in here or get banned

uppin 1 for Honest votes...

SLim if i see any of the smae cats that voted for u earlier..then i no wuts crackin ..
pc

Given Light. 12-22-03 04:15 PM

Alright nice battle both of you. Respectful and it was great to read. I really enjoyed it. I found this to be a really close battle and I found it hard to vote. This is definetly an evenly matched battle no merking herre.
My Laydown:
Opening:Narcotics
Punches:Tied
Personals:Narcotics
Metaphors:Slim Thug
Multis:Slim Thug
Enjoyability:Tied
Flow:Slim Thug
Structure:Slim Thug
Closing:Tied farely good endings

Vote:Slim Thug

I would really appreciate it if you guys voted on my battle. Thanx. And remember no one got merked it was hard for me this was a great battle.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100289

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100301

Slim Thug 12-22-03 04:24 PM

Damnit kid...Dont forget to poll this shit- I hate it when people do that............................................

Slim Thug 12-22-03 04:44 PM

Uppin # 1 .

Slim Thug 12-22-03 04:49 PM

Uppin # 2 .

menolin 12-22-03 04:52 PM

opener: slim
closer: tie
punches: slim
structure: tie
vocab: tie
wordplay: tie
multies: slim
metas: slim
vocab: tie
overall: slim thug

nice battle peeps props to both!!!

Justin Vented 12-22-03 04:54 PM

punches slim
personals slim
metas slim
wordplay both
flow both
overall slim

vote on mine honestly

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98792

Slim Thug 12-22-03 05:09 PM

Thanx thas 2-0...3-0 non poller...Uppin~~ .

Dropz 12-22-03 05:10 PM

this was close but ma man slim thug took this shit
he had tha flow, vocab and punches........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..

TRUE*D 12-22-03 05:13 PM

Opening:Narcotics
Punches:Slim Thug
Personals:Narcotics
Metaphors:Slim Thug
Multis:Slim Thug
Enjoyability:Slim Thug
Flow:Slim Thug
Structure:Slim Thug
Closing:Slim Thug

please vote on my battles:

TRUE*D VS SKITTEN
TRUE*D VS XL4REAL
TRUE*D VS JAKRIPHERB

THANKS

Dropz 12-22-03 05:17 PM

yo slim check ya pm's i sent somthin bout a battle............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....

The Jett 12-22-03 05:20 PM

punches-slim
meti'4s- tie
flo- tie
structure- tie
wordplay- tie
multi's- slim

overall slim- nice n close battle.....

no poll....me an slim same crew....
but im returning the honest vote to narcotic-thanks for hittin my battle up.
pc*1*

Quelude 12-22-03 05:24 PM

Alright..... Slim Thug, hot shit boi.
You ripped old boys ass to pieces.
No hate though, Narcotics came dope as fuck too, but slim was way cleaner and on point.
Punches-slim
meta's-slim
personals-narc
structure-slim
muti's-tie

overall slim

Narcotics. There are black people on this site, so try and stray away from the N bomb if you are being derogatory. It makes you look ignorant and racist. Neither of which are defining qualities.

Quelude 12-22-03 05:25 PM

vote

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Slim Thug 12-22-03 05:38 PM

3-0...Comeon lets get this over with .

Slim Thug 12-22-03 06:04 PM

Uppin #3 .

Slim Thug 12-22-03 06:30 PM

Uppin 4 /

dough hostile 12-22-03 07:00 PM

Credit leaking, flipping coins be the only time ya chance of getting a-head is even
[Nice opener]
Ill stick a fucking ton in ya lungs so when ya spit all I'm hearing is heavy breathing
[Decent]
Already leaving? bitch you opposing a vet, Ill break your neck and stick ya nose in ya chest
[Ouch...hate to hear that happen ;) but filler nonetheless[/b]
Cause if you modelled for gun companies you still wouldn't be posing a threat
[Nice.]
Closing ya text...and you aint equipped to cope, get kicked n chocked
[Choked! silly not chocked. ;)]
This bitch gets toked when I swing to knock his head clean off like I got fists of soap
[Nice Wordplay haha]
Stripped n poked...ya wind pipe n vocal chords my choice of token
So when I rip em out at least you can say that your voice has broken
[Ouch]
Nineteen and Four one less win then me but I wasn’t merked by hardcor3
[LMAO..ive seen that guy battle...not too great.]
X Black tie but token got tired of him ripped his tie off and made his kneck sore
[Nice]
Cut n rushed, stick ya dick in ya ball sack n I'll believe you when ya say ya fuckin nuts
[LoL]
You didn't extend the red carpet...I was forced to make one from ya blood n guts.....
[Decent Closer]

8.5




Slim thug,dont ring a bell. u aint no established mc tryna spit..
shit kid u dug ya self a hole,tryna potray the gangsta in ya sig..
[Decent Opener]
its ridiculis, cuz u can type flows but noone will ever hear u speak..
cuz our skill level has a bigger gap then lettermans teeth..
[David Lettermans gap aint too big..this line was bad though]

my punches are knockin u in that platinum grill of yours
listen fag. your pretty wak, try an use a punch i havent said before..
[Ouch]

ya verse is full of played metaphors thats gunna cost u loss numebr 6..
because the difference between your spit an mine is that u lack an original Diss..
[Said that in the punch above this one.]

it seems your in ya prime after only of month of battlyn fakes..
After 26 battles wudnt u think this kid wud elevate...
[Ouch]

dont celebrate just yet. wut u think u facin.dont ever try to compaire ill..
cuz ill leave ya in a head ache state of mind after fallin out ya dads computer chair..
[LMFAO.]

YUng? u took a whole day to drop, stop the votes this is proposturis..
no time to stop this, even if it takes all day i got more patience then doctors..[Bah]

8.4

YoungHead took this...BARELY. I think his personals played a huge part in this battle...nice punches too. Narcotics had that fucnny ass fucking chair line. I was like woah. But ir eally didnt see any personals in his verse. But, thats what i was looking for, and Youngheadwrecka took this. I was goignt ovote on this vesterday but i forgot. :( good battle both of you.

SmokaJoka. 12-22-03 07:17 PM

u both had kinda played wordplay.....Yung needs to shorten his barz a bit....but he had the punches and vocabulary in this.....Narcotics had a better structure and flow....no need for a breakdown though...Yung got this in my opinion with just having better punches and harder punches.....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote...

peace


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