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Se7eN v.s Poison-Pen
iight 10 bar battle
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Aight I guess im first on this shit
Mics get rocked casue rhymes I drop hot/ I leave you despised by hip-hop like the guys who shot Pac/ Dont ever hold the mic if you cant flow right/ Ima lyrical giant surrounded by this dwarf like Snow-White/ I design divine rhymes wit surgical precision/ You aint Tom Cruze so toppin me is an impossible mission/ The dissin Im spittin destroyes yo spirit/ I jus hope every song you make stays on paper so I never have to hear-it/ By the time any MC can see me,my children's children gonna be old men/ Se7eN couldnt write Poison like this if he used my own Pen/ Waitin for Se7ens reply.......... |
ayo,
Dawg, that wasn't a spit, I'm moving in for the kill You ain't real, you faker than Lincoln on a 3 dollar bill So grab that shitty ass game, and take it somewhere else Cause when I spit I make hell, you should juss quit or kill urself I racked a win here, ain't no poison on your damn pen You dating a guy again, so where the fuck has your man been My shit will make it off paper, yours will stay in your mind You taking dicks from behind, and losing battles, like a crime So dawg, one thing 2 say, I hate your style cause it sucks I'm up, and when you go 2 have sex it's a pussy-2-pussy fuck ..........Voting x1 |
VOTE PEOPLE, READ AND VOTE FOR THE BEST ONE, WELL PZ OUT, SE7EN********************************************* ************************************************** ************************************************** ******
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UMMMMM.... UPPIN' FOR VOTES PEOPLE, VOTE Se7eN********************************************* ************************************************** ************************************************** ******
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come on people vote********************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** *******Se7eN
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uppin' 4 votes, come on don't sleep on it ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ******
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uppin' vote people come on now, vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote
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PEOPLE VOTE PLZ............................................... .................................................. ..VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE
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Mics get rocked casue rhymes I drop hot/
I leave you despised by hip-hop like the guys who shot Pac/ Dont ever hold the mic if you cant flow right/ Ima lyrical giant surrounded by this dwarf like Snow-White/ I design divine rhymes wit surgical precision You aint Tom Cruze so toppin me is an impossible mission/ The dissin Im spittin destroyes yo spirit/ I jus hope every song you make stays on paper so I never have to hear-it/ By the time any MC can see me,my children's children gonna be old men/ Se7eN couldnt write Poison like this if he used my own Pen/ I think Poision got this battle barely. Seven dawg u had some nice shit, but nothing really caught my eye like the bold lines Poison has. Sorry bro it was a nice drop though. BTW VOTE IN MY BATTLE VERSUS CARSONJETX2 OR ILL NEVER FUCKING VOTE IN UR BATTLES AGAIN. |
this is how it went
opener:7 flow:poison punches:7 wordplay:tie closer:7 vote:7 now that is how it is |
Yeah, i think Seven just edged this one out, it was a nice battle but he had more harder punches i felt .. i liked the Lincoln line and his finisher .. it was a decent battle but he edged it out this time
Vote on this when you get time: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100090 |
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Opener: 7
Flow: Tie Punches: 7 Wordplay: 7 Closer: 7 In my opinion, 7 merked that kid. I can't vote yet but I just wanna tell ya who I thought one. |
that shit is ridicilous i was more lyrical and frankly my punches were smarter but whatever i can see yo record 1-5 lol
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I'm gonna have to say seven for this battle. NO MERKING herre. It was a descent battle and Poison did take it in a couple catagories but not enough. Good battle bois.
Vote:Seven |
yeah no merkin Poison took a couple of the categories but not quite enough, but it was a good battle.
Vote:7 Bottom Line:Good battle both |
AIGHT AIGHT FAIR FAIR .................................................. ...............................pEACE
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hmm close battle, both were pretty weak verses, but even on punches, and personals. I think i felt poison's flow more though, so that's how i'm judging this. vote=poison.
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yo this was pretty wack, but i think poison takes it.
structure - poison opener - poison flow - poison enjoyment - poison closer - poison, fo sho overall vote: poison |
Welp we need people 2 vote but hell does n e one want 2, if u do view thsi pleaze vote********************************************** ************************************
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yo se7en you can only have 2 active battles at any one time so be carefull in the future cuz your battles will be cancelled by a mod if your not.
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poison did take this weak battle, he had punches and a bit of wordplay, his flow was a bit off though but he gets my vote.
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iight poison pen u can have this one iight peace out, ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ***
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aight its all fair mayn.............................................. ............................pce
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Poison Pen Wins********************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** *********
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