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Phenomenom VS LM (DA PHENOMENOM IS HERE)
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10-15 lines No hater votes u spit in 15mins |
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Peace!!! |
ITS HERE YO
I'm the phenomenom/ battle me and get your trauma on/ cat want to fight like he's hard on the mic/ this is jus text and he can't get it right/ steppin to me like it was somethin to see/ yo wana be me but you can never be/ don't wanna do this but you leave me no choice/ strangle your rhymes till i can't hear your voice/ your neck falls prey to my tight raps/ can't handle the lyrics so your ass taps/ gotta flip this shit to get to the point/ "who want it" you do, i own this joint/ the fact that i own it kills my opponent/ take a picture and remember this moment |
hurry up n spit homes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...................
gud luck dawg ya need it!!!!!!!!!!!!........................ |
I'm just gonna drop a verse, keystyled.
How can you be hate voted against, nobody knows you... (rules) Your fuckin whack,you'd get merked by my baby nephew... You sent out an open callout so I answered you, just for fun... You cant murder nobody in a verse, bitch bring a fuckin gun... Call me every name under the sun, just to say you can punch... But your not creative when it comes to the fuckin crunch... I eat people like you for lunch, expossin the skills you lack... That'll be everythin in your head coz you cant even rap... You whack, fuck a full verse, just have a fuckin portion... Your a disgrace, your mom shoulda had a fuckin abortion... You do audio and the mic has a distortion, so you move to text... You dont make an impact in this either, whackness is your hex... I've already beat you, who's next, your no dope rap don... I just disarmed you like a mutherfuckin whack ass bomb... So I guess that makes me *da phenominom*.... |
well LM wins by a landslide.
It is evident that Da Phenom is still developing and needs to work on originality, and wordplay. LM Nice drop as usual. Seemed to be holding back a lil but it still came out nice in the end. I give my vote to LM http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99542 Give this battle an honest vote. |
get me votes 4dis shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Vote-LM
obvious reasons took it Punches-LM..he actually threw one Flow-Lm Metas-LM Sustainment-LM oVerall-LM MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ..PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100491 |
VOTE - PHENEMONEN
STRUCTURE - PHENEMONEN (KEPT SAME THROUGHOUT) PUNCHES-TIE FLOW-TIE OPENER-PHENEMONEN CLOSER-LM |
^^^Yeah OK whatever, learn how to fuckin vote...........................
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u cant win a battle if u dont throw a punch at ur opponent......
Phenom - u didnt throw shit man...... LM takes every category........ {TRUE*D, if ur gona dick ryde sum1....at least make it sum1 good idiot} vote - LM |
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^^^Stop freepostin dickhead.......................................... ................
If you really must freepost, do it on a different site Peace!!! |
LISTEN FREEMAN BITCH!!! IF U GUNA GLOAT BOUT HOW U BEAT ME!! TELL IT RIGHT CAUSE IT WASNT NO 5-0 BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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LM, sorry to freepost man, but this bitch needs telling......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...468#post1000468 follow that link True u fukin idiot....read it along the top..... 5 - 0 now fuk off, vote properly, stop bitchin and freepostin or im gona get you banned... END OF sorry again LM man...... |
If you two are gonna argue, do it somewhere else and True*d........d/r me again and I'll merk your ass so bad you leave the site in shame. You've successfully stopped me KO'in *da phenominom*....well done
Peace!!! |
yo can some1 plz help me how do i pm a mod!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?! i need help cuz the dude i was supposed to battle did drop his flow in time and idk what to do?!
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FUCK U PIMP U FREEPOSTING ALL OVER MY PAGE NOW U ACT HELP FROM US?????????????????????? U GOT SOME NERVE
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Go to the front page and look which names are in bold (their mods). Click on the names then click send .........a private messege.
^^^Thats how you do it. Now stop freepostin |
oh u 2lil white boy faggots fuck up yea dats da pink belt woman "FREEWOMAN" and LM!!! u 2lil fags think u gud, u 2 aint shit u mind me of n*sync!!u 2shud go on a pop forum or sumfing or go on jerry springer2sort out which 1 of u bumchums wears da trousers!!FREEMAN u got sumfing 2say bout me den say it 2my face u lil chicken shit!!!!
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yea freeman n 4my rap style im a freestyle rapper not sum lil eminem wannabe tryin2make it big on a website forum!!!lol
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I dont know how the other guy got a vote. This was all one sided, not saying it is the greatest verse. But he had better punches, Structure, Consistany of Flow, and wordplay than the other guy. LM should get this easy, I think this would be a good battle for the other guy to elevate on. But LM, work on the effect of your punches hommie. That will help out with stronger apponents... Aight.
Vote - LM |
who da fuck u callin "da otha guy"!................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........................................
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Shut the fuck up. And how can you say "say it to my face"....we're on the internet dumbass. I suppose you'll put a diss piece in open mic bout us now wont ya coz you cant do it in frontlines. Shut up and take the loss |
OMG, dont even try that shit with me. I was calling you " the other guy " why dont you tell me what your ganna do about it. If you wanna do somthing, lets not free-post and just call me out in bitch slapped. Cause there your ganna get slapped... LOL
Little Bitch |
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Peace!!! |
LM took this in every aspect I thought he had a better and more complx and creative verse. His punches hit a lot harder and seemed to not want to keep writting they actually seemed finished two word lines don't make a battle verse sound to good and it makes it hard to follow or create any strong punches. Da.. needs to elavate but from hat i see he has some talent if he learns how to set a good structure and readable flow.
Vote LM |
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