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dw VS rule
10-16 lines if thats okie with you say whether or not in check in..if not i'll just go ten
No hate/dr/unexplained/crew votes blind spit---20 minutes after check in Regualr rules Good luck man. peace |
lets jus do ten...people can't be arsed readin any more....check in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!im ere.........1
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lol iight man im checkin in good luck
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in a soft focus you still look the fool...obeyin nothin from this rule...
a new dual on the horizen...my heat leaves u runnin to the freezer to get cool... im breakin numerous bones wiv these sticks 'n' these stones... u breakin nothin but a sweat...n losin weight in stones... i magnify ur lyrics but still recieve no big hit....spit so quik... that its me that has to identify that you've jus been hit... split ya verse so its double the agony that follows in the sequel... rule?...theres nothin ere thats suggests us two people are equal... front page crew its almost laughable that you believe ur not new... ur jus 1 fragment of a 12 piece puzzle theres nothin complexed about you....1 *soft focus = 12 members/front page |
This kids inarticulate the way he throws punches is expandable
Dick Where? DWs faverite sayen thats why I nickname ya canabel Your verses disipated all used up like Micheal Jordans Career Recycled and re-used your past ya climax you should just disaper Damn, those jeezus scriptures for verses they're always recarnated Playboy called me out then vanished cause he shook possibly hesitated This kids a vet. a soldja? he has 45 wins but his loss count is distinction I'm gunna study the DW man an claim how he casually faced exstinction He called out rule for a battle with a win ego an realized dreams are fiction DW on my resume ya assigned if I win will this be an acceptable aplication? If You Don't Undersand something Just Ask. Uppe for your verse |
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alrite uppin this....gud battle man!.............................................. ......................................1
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This kids inarticulate the way he throws punches is expandable
Dick Where? DWs faverite sayen thats why I nickname ya canabel I vote dw cuz he had better wordplay, his verse was stronger by a bit and his hits were hard.....the line ive outlined is wack as fuck from rule.... DW GOT IT! |
thanx 1-0.....uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!
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hmmm some one over did the vocab.....
punches- Dw flo- Dw structure- Rule meti4- Dw Multi- Dw Overall- Dw......but a decent battle....i can put my dictinary away now... |
yo carson thanx but can ya poll that plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............................ .........................................1
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uppin this y'all............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....!
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dw was a little better. good battle though. im voting for dw.-------------------------------------------------------------------
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Aight boiz that was a good battle but DW came out on top wit better word play flow, creativity, but rule u did good in vocab and nothin else compared too DW
vote DW hit this battle up wit an honets vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100172 |
alrite thanx....
4-0 txt 3-0 poll can ya plz remember to poll.............................................. ...............pz |
uppin this don't sleep y'all............................................. .................................................. ...........................1
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good battle dw----uppen this-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Dw came harder no played punches like the other cat.
structure-tie punches-dw meta's- tie wordplay-rule sustain-dw multi's-tie overall-dw |
i need both of you to vote on this if you could be so kind.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100579 |
you murdered me lol.....good battle man..... uppen for one more vote
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CAN SOME OF YA'LL VOTE ON MY BATTLES AND OTHA PEOPLE'S TOO, WELP THANX DON'T SLEEP ON IT, Se7eN*******
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^^^yeah but next time stay out of a thread unless you can vote. You can get banned for doing that i think it said in the rule thing.
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uppin this....1 vote needed............................................ .................................................. ....................................1
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uppin this.............................................. .....don't sleep y'all.........................1 vote needed.............................!
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come on y'all don't sleep..................uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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yo dw i no you won so if this gets slept on another day i'll just pm a mod to close this and give you the win and me a loss
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alrite thanx dawg.............................................. ............but 1 more uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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come on y'all 1vote needed.........................................bei n slept on ere can someone jus giv the last vote to finish this!
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check it i won't sleep...
nice drop by DW....rule man i seen you come way harder than that but i recently lost to a lil bitch so i understand when your just not feelin it...anyway....DW punched ya out and used alot and alot of vocab....so i would give him creativity along with and his opener although sad...was better than yours.....my vote.....DW....centrals on the peace out and goodl luck to you both |
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