habius vs Aragorn
 

12 lines
30 min
you first
no b/s
check in
this is my check in

ok this is my check in...g'luck. (--)..::::..(--). and don't get it wrong like the other person i faced, i'm a damned girl!! :)

I know, I seen the sexy pics, you lil vixen you.
Good Luck.





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This sites for 'rising emcees', but your 'always falling' and its known cuz my guns comprising's~empty// I'm surprising~simply, but i'm like 'sickle cell', i'll crip'ple 'bloods' and now your guy is dripping// Kill you and leave votes 'short' like Martin Lawerence, i'm chased by National~Security// My punches left your face an irrational~obscurity for trying to fight [Hab] with rational~maturity// Your face is dripping blood, now whos necro when i put your slit throat in a neck~hold// Iniquitous threshold, pump your veins full of [caps] and make your flesh [Bold]//

I thought you said you was tight ma?

I usually don't hit chicks, without a spliff and a fifth.
But I took a look at your pics... guess i could bless you with dick.
Your pretty, smart, and intelligent..... weak with the rapping
And you should be better at spelling... wanna make that journalist shit happen...
Cause looks don't get you off the hook, fucking with crooks...
Exchange a verse with a Ghost writer, Like kings enchanging a rook.
It might protect you... Hide amongst your pawns i'll neglect you..
Sickness is contagious I hope that I can infect you....
This is just a lesson, come to me child and I'll teach you....
I promised to be gentle... I'll make it pleasurable when I eat you..
If you can't beat em... Join 'em.. Offer head after i defeat you...
A deadly sixty nine... intwining our rhymes.. been nice to meet you.

ARAGON gets my vote

Longer rap
better structure and punches
better open and closer
better flow

sorry i cant vote on this 1

but please vote on my battle(s)

TRUE*D VS SKITTEN
TRUE*D VS XL4REAL
TRUE*D VS JAKRIPHERBS

THANKS

yes, even i mess up at spelling some time. doesn't matter, it's "rap" most "rappers" don't even know how to say "I GOT BEAT BY A CHICK" :D

ite gd shit,

opener-a(loved that)
closer-tie
structure-a
punches-a
wordplay-h
enjoyment=-

overall- aragon(nice spit),habius(not bad work on sructure and punches)............

plz plz hit this with an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100161

.thx..............pz

i need to do longer writes..i hate this 10 and 12 liner things. not cool. i'll give this one to you aragon< thats what it was in the movie not aragorn..but you knew that :D

^habius it wasnt bad just lay it out better like aragons verse.and hit harder with punches.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100161


plz hit that^...............pz

Not as smart as you think huh? It is Aragorn with an "R"





.....................................But you knew that too Right?.....................
......................................I'm 22 find someone else to school............
...................................No hate, just setting you straight.................

wtf^.lol yo aragorn plz hit this with an honest vote as i took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100161 ........thx.......................pz

lol ...BREAKDOWN---->
punches-A
Flow-A
structure-a
enjoyment-.....
metas-a
Overall-A

he took this w/ punches N flow
the merking was Obvious........
but lol at the Aragon comment pz

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100546

Opener: A
Punches: A
Personals: A
Flow: A
Strucure: A
Closer: A

Yo A took this in every caterogry..Ripped tha id...Hab elevate mand and ull do fine - 1

up up and away!!!1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Up Up And Away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!Up Up And Away

Stop saying that, it's annoying..you sound like a geeky ass little girl. What's that guy's name who shoots the arrows? my nose looks exactly like his :( i have myself an elf nose.

^^^^Quit hatin broad!

Up Up and Away with the victory!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Up Up and Away with the victory

Cut it out. whipe whipe my ass w/ your victory. and i'm not "hating", i said you won. does it have to be over tonight. if not, quit upping!!

opener:a
closer:a
punches:a
vocab:h
structure:a
personals:a

aragorn took this one but habius you have good wordplay i'm just not feelin your structure or overall flow of the verse....both verses were good though no doubt......props to both