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YoungAllstar 12-22-03 05:20 PM

YoungAllstar -VS- .:FreemaN:.
 
  • 5-10 Barz
  • No Hata/DickRydin Votes
  • Due Within An Hour Of Ur Check In

This My Check In

Freeman 12-22-03 05:38 PM

aight, only jus seen this........only jus got ur PM.....

sorry

ima key my verse up now.....

good luck.....

laterz

Freeman 12-22-03 05:39 PM

checkin in................................................ ....
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Freeman 12-22-03 05:55 PM

u best spit.........................

im gona spit now................

ur comin up to ur 1 hour limit that you set..... whereas ive been busy.....
and still keyed mine up in bout 15-20 mins...........whilst doin other things!!

spit asap man....

good luck.........

Freeman 12-22-03 05:56 PM

aight, im doin 10 lines, so u can drop 10 aswell.........................

more than that and people get bored......

here it comes................................

Freeman 12-22-03 05:57 PM

now you've got to be just plain stupid, cuz u accepted --
ur verse will be so wack, the mods will have you rejected --
you want an hour so you can think of summin worthwile to write --
there aint no point in tryin dawg, my verse is gona be tight --
and how the hell are you gona come up with 5, let alone 10 bars --
ur punches will have me laughin, where as mine'll have u seein stars --
in a way im glad we are battlin, because my wins can then go up to number six --
then u can take this merking and show ur friends while comparin the size of ur dicks --
but really what can you expect from sum1 hu goes by the name of 'YoungAllStar' --
the only way u make a 'sik' sound is if u hurlin on the backseat of a car --

Freeman 12-22-03 06:34 PM

where the fuk r u man!?!?!?!?

fukin make me drop then u run off........

pussy............................................. ........

PiMpiNTaY080 12-22-03 06:35 PM

yo can some1 plz help me how do i pm a mod!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?! i need help cuz the dude i was supposed to battle did drop his flow in time and idk what to do?!

YoungAllstar 12-22-03 08:04 PM

Elevate Pleaze.. Ur Not Worthy Competition... Let Me Sho U Something... LMAO

Like [i]*Midgets At A Bar B Que,*
The Steaks-R-To-High, Like I Wuz *Destoryin Books* I'm *Breakin-Ya-Spine*... Put An Ache-In-Ya-Mind, Like I Wuz *Chokin Mother Goose,* I'm Shakin-Ya-Rhymez
You Being Undefeated Is Just-A-Jinx, Take A *Gat To A Puzzle* But Still Couldn't *Bust-A-Piece*... Get *Swept Off The Floor* Like I Dust-Ya-Feet, Lyrical *Saddam* To Take Over *Nations* And Now You Can't Trust-Ya-Peeps
I'm A *Criminal* U Can Say I'm *Ruthless-Wit-Gore*, Freeman, U Ain't Get *Money For Ya Thoughtz* Ur *Useless-N-Poor*... After Dis Battle U Should Visit A *Dentist* Cuz You'll B *Toothless-N-Sore* And Da Way My Text Smackz U Wit *Tiles* U Can Say I'm *Abusive-To-Floors*
Young'll Park-"Thugz" And I Also Part-Slutz, Cuz Freeman's *Gateway Used* Not Dope He's Just A *Start Drug*... I'll Have ya Harmed-Cuzz, Doing Damage To My Name Is Like *Scratchi Diamonds Wit Fist,* Its Hard To *Mark Us*
Silence Freeman, I'm To Hot-Ta-Listen, Like *Fruity Weed From Bad Soil,* I'll Leave Free To *Rot-In-High-Positions*... I Got-Ya-Eye-Missin, X'd Ya Middle Cuz 1Like *Multiplication Problemz* Freemans Not-In-My-Division

Jshook 12-22-03 08:09 PM

yougn allstar murdered him with that wordplay........... thats tight...... 4 real......


punches bettter...
not on flow but... everythihng else was better....

youngallstar-vote

menolin 12-22-03 08:21 PM

opener: young
closer: tie
punches: young
strucutre: freeman
vocab: tie
wordplay: young
overall: young

young fix ya structure, an freeman jus step up ya game.

no hate



PLZ DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS, AS I HAVE TAKEN THE TIME TO VOTE ON THIS BATTLES
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...135#post1009135

YoungAllstar 12-22-03 09:54 PM

LMAO.. Uppin

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Maelstrom 12-22-03 10:04 PM

no offence young, but your rhymes have the structure of my obese aunty :p and what's with all the text decorations? :\

YoungAllstar 12-22-03 10:18 PM

They're Not Decorations.. They Make Certain Points Stand Out... So Fuk U And Ur Aunt.. Vote Or Bounce

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Freeman 12-23-03 06:06 AM

Re: YoungAllstar -VS- .:FreemaN:.
 
Quote:
Originally posted by YoungAllstar
  • 5-10 Barz
  • No Hata/DickRydin Votes
  • Due Within An Hour Of Ur Check In

This My Check In



then you drop 3 hours later........

took me 20 minutes to key mine whilst doin other things....

u take 3 hours!

where u bit that shit from man?

uppin #1

Freeman 12-23-03 06:07 AM

u break ur own rules..........
and you've gota av bitten that from sum where cuz that aint ur stuff.....

duno wot to do bout it.........
if id dropped 3 hours afta my checkin u wud of moaned rite!!!???!!

The-Marvel-Arm 12-23-03 06:11 AM

Like [i]*Midgets At A Bar B Que,* The Steaks-R-To-High, Like I Wuz *Destoryin Books* I'm *Breakin-Ya-Spine*... Put An Ache-In-Ya-Mind, Like I Wuz *Chokin Mother Goose,* I'm Shakin-Ya-Rhymez

Its all over with this starter, the midget line is one of the best ive heard for real.....

TRUE*D 12-23-03 06:22 AM

freeman look up bitch slapped i got a challenge 4ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! make sure u read the rulez and know what time its at!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YoungAllstar 12-23-03 10:07 AM

Its Funny How Pussies Like U Freeman Assume How Ppl Bite Just Cuz They Got More Skill Then U... N It Didn't Take Me 3 Hourz

Whenever U Want.. Just Let Me Kno.. We Can Set Up A Battle Do In 30 Or 40 Minutes (However Long) N I'll Show U A Thing Or Two About Keystyling

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TRUE*D 12-23-03 10:13 AM

youngallstar u got my respect!! i think freemans just a lil english wannabe rapper!! hes a bitch and cant take losing!! listen u done me proud by beating this lil bitch!! u got my vote!!

punches-young
structure-young
flow-young
opener-young
closer-young
overall-young

unlucky freewoman but ur a lil wannabe BITCH!!

p.s. this aint no hate vote

TRUE*D 12-23-03 10:16 AM

hey yongallstar!! could u vote on these battles:

TRUE*D VS xl4real
TRUE*D VS skitten
TRUE*D VS jaktheripherbs

THANKS!!

YoungAllstar 12-23-03 10:16 AM

I Respect U For Respecting Me D

Count: 3-1 Me

Uppin

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YoungAllstar 12-23-03 10:18 AM

Yea I Gotcha D

And My Bad About The Count Its 3-0

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TRUE*D 12-23-03 10:18 AM

READ THE TEXT ABOVE PLEASE VOTE HONESTLY ON THESE BATTLES!!!!!!!!!!! AND READ THE POLL IN BITCH SLAPPED!!!!! LOL ITS WELL FUNNY!!!!!!

RIPallthat 12-23-03 10:25 AM

Wordplay - Young
Multies - Young
Personals - Freeman
Punches - Freeman
Structure - Young
Creativity - Young
Flow - Tie

Vote - YoungAllStar

TRUE*D 12-23-03 10:27 AM

4-0 GOING 4 A KNOCKOUT LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FREEMAN U LIL BITCH K.O.

TheUnderRated 12-23-03 10:30 AM

yea i'll give to youngallstar but you really gotta learn to work on your structure and shit...you got wordplay and multis but real vets look at punches ...which you go not got...and personals....which you do not got....i wasn't feeling freeman on this one thought i seen his drop way better...freeman peep this up for me daeg tahnx...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100678

YoungAllstar 12-23-03 10:30 AM

So 5-0 Is A KO? So Wut Is A Technical Win?

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