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YoungAllstar -VS- .:FreemaN:.
This My Check In |
aight, only jus seen this........only jus got ur PM.....
sorry ima key my verse up now..... good luck..... laterz |
checkin in................................................ ....
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u best spit.........................
im gona spit now................ ur comin up to ur 1 hour limit that you set..... whereas ive been busy..... and still keyed mine up in bout 15-20 mins...........whilst doin other things!! spit asap man.... good luck......... |
aight, im doin 10 lines, so u can drop 10 aswell.........................
more than that and people get bored...... here it comes................................ |
now you've got to be just plain stupid, cuz u accepted --
ur verse will be so wack, the mods will have you rejected -- you want an hour so you can think of summin worthwile to write -- there aint no point in tryin dawg, my verse is gona be tight -- and how the hell are you gona come up with 5, let alone 10 bars -- ur punches will have me laughin, where as mine'll have u seein stars -- in a way im glad we are battlin, because my wins can then go up to number six -- then u can take this merking and show ur friends while comparin the size of ur dicks -- but really what can you expect from sum1 hu goes by the name of 'YoungAllStar' -- the only way u make a 'sik' sound is if u hurlin on the backseat of a car -- |
where the fuk r u man!?!?!?!?
fukin make me drop then u run off........ pussy............................................. ........ |
yo can some1 plz help me how do i pm a mod!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?! i need help cuz the dude i was supposed to battle did drop his flow in time and idk what to do?!
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Elevate Pleaze.. Ur Not Worthy Competition... Let Me Sho U Something... LMAO
Like [i]*Midgets At A Bar B Que,* The Steaks-R-To-High, Like I Wuz *Destoryin Books* I'm *Breakin-Ya-Spine*... Put An Ache-In-Ya-Mind, Like I Wuz *Chokin Mother Goose,* I'm Shakin-Ya-Rhymez You Being Undefeated Is Just-A-Jinx, Take A *Gat To A Puzzle* But Still Couldn't *Bust-A-Piece*... Get *Swept Off The Floor* Like I Dust-Ya-Feet, Lyrical *Saddam* To Take Over *Nations* And Now You Can't Trust-Ya-Peeps I'm A *Criminal* U Can Say I'm *Ruthless-Wit-Gore*, Freeman, U Ain't Get *Money For Ya Thoughtz* Ur *Useless-N-Poor*... After Dis Battle U Should Visit A *Dentist* Cuz You'll B *Toothless-N-Sore* And Da Way My Text Smackz U Wit *Tiles* U Can Say I'm *Abusive-To-Floors* Young'll Park-"Thugz" And I Also Part-Slutz, Cuz Freeman's *Gateway Used* Not Dope He's Just A *Start Drug*... I'll Have ya Harmed-Cuzz, Doing Damage To My Name Is Like *Scratchi Diamonds Wit Fist,* Its Hard To *Mark Us* Silence Freeman, I'm To Hot-Ta-Listen, Like *Fruity Weed From Bad Soil,* I'll Leave Free To *Rot-In-High-Positions*... I Got-Ya-Eye-Missin, X'd Ya Middle Cuz 1Like *Multiplication Problemz* Freemans Not-In-My-Division |
yougn allstar murdered him with that wordplay........... thats tight...... 4 real......
punches bettter... not on flow but... everythihng else was better.... youngallstar-vote |
opener: young
closer: tie punches: young strucutre: freeman vocab: tie wordplay: young overall: young young fix ya structure, an freeman jus step up ya game. no hate PLZ DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS, AS I HAVE TAKEN THE TIME TO VOTE ON THIS BATTLES http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...135#post1009135 |
LMAO.. Uppin
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no offence young, but your rhymes have the structure of my obese aunty :p and what's with all the text decorations? :\
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They're Not Decorations.. They Make Certain Points Stand Out... So Fuk U And Ur Aunt.. Vote Or Bounce
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Re: YoungAllstar -VS- .:FreemaN:.
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then you drop 3 hours later........ took me 20 minutes to key mine whilst doin other things.... u take 3 hours! where u bit that shit from man? uppin #1 |
u break ur own rules..........
and you've gota av bitten that from sum where cuz that aint ur stuff..... duno wot to do bout it......... if id dropped 3 hours afta my checkin u wud of moaned rite!!!???!! |
Like [i]*Midgets At A Bar B Que,* The Steaks-R-To-High, Like I Wuz *Destoryin Books* I'm *Breakin-Ya-Spine*... Put An Ache-In-Ya-Mind, Like I Wuz *Chokin Mother Goose,* I'm Shakin-Ya-Rhymez
Its all over with this starter, the midget line is one of the best ive heard for real..... |
freeman look up bitch slapped i got a challenge 4ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! make sure u read the rulez and know what time its at!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Its Funny How Pussies Like U Freeman Assume How Ppl Bite Just Cuz They Got More Skill Then U... N It Didn't Take Me 3 Hourz
Whenever U Want.. Just Let Me Kno.. We Can Set Up A Battle Do In 30 Or 40 Minutes (However Long) N I'll Show U A Thing Or Two About Keystyling .................................................. ................................ |
youngallstar u got my respect!! i think freemans just a lil english wannabe rapper!! hes a bitch and cant take losing!! listen u done me proud by beating this lil bitch!! u got my vote!!
punches-young structure-young flow-young opener-young closer-young overall-young unlucky freewoman but ur a lil wannabe BITCH!! p.s. this aint no hate vote |
hey yongallstar!! could u vote on these battles:
TRUE*D VS xl4real TRUE*D VS skitten TRUE*D VS jaktheripherbs THANKS!! |
I Respect U For Respecting Me D
Count: 3-1 Me Uppin .................................................. ................................ |
Yea I Gotcha D
And My Bad About The Count Its 3-0 .................................................. ................................ |
READ THE TEXT ABOVE PLEASE VOTE HONESTLY ON THESE BATTLES!!!!!!!!!!! AND READ THE POLL IN BITCH SLAPPED!!!!! LOL ITS WELL FUNNY!!!!!!
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Wordplay - Young
Multies - Young Personals - Freeman Punches - Freeman Structure - Young Creativity - Young Flow - Tie Vote - YoungAllStar |
4-0 GOING 4 A KNOCKOUT LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FREEMAN U LIL BITCH K.O.
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yea i'll give to youngallstar but you really gotta learn to work on your structure and shit...you got wordplay and multis but real vets look at punches ...which you go not got...and personals....which you do not got....i wasn't feeling freeman on this one thought i seen his drop way better...freeman peep this up for me daeg tahnx...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100678 |
So 5-0 Is A KO? So Wut Is A Technical Win?
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