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PennyWise Vs Alias
i set up
you spit first 10 lines usual rules no d/r etc etc |
Due In An Hour
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i didnt say a time limit but i will drop as soon as i can............................................... ...........................................
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style outdated, cant grasp moderness, like peeps wearin sandals,
get a 'grip', you couldnt 'hold' me back if i was born with 'handles', im aint a 'psychic', but theres no need to foretell your 'wackness', yous never gonna get the fire, cos u've jus started losin 'matches', hate to deal with loose change, but 'penny's aint 'wise' battlin me, why do herbs find my range, an step forwards for thier first defeat you must not be in your proper mind by tryin to drop a ill rhyme, becoz the hot lines in ya verses equal the same as a dollar sign's, stand down, you couldnt elevate, if u was jury, risin in court rooms well, i never expected, to type so quick, an merk pennywise so soon, |
Denying-Ya-Fame, I'm Rhymin'-Wit-Lames, Ya Skill Equalz 0 Like Capitalizes-In-Ya-Name
Ya Behind-In-Da-Game, Blinded-By-Pain, Ya Like Pics Of Gay Sex, U Like Gayz-In-Ya-Frame My Fists Fold-In-Ya-Cheek, Like Photo's Of Anerexics Alias Just Showin-He's-Weak Ya Flows-Ain't-Unique, I'll B Wise N Show U Ya Biggest Mistake By Exposing-This-Link Spit Heat-Verbs, Along Wit Deep-Wordz.. But Like Atanta Teams Alias Is A Weak-Bird Don't Seek-Wordz, I'll Defeat-Nerdz, Ur A Herb!! Like Faults In Tennis You'll Get Served Wise Known To Jack-Dudes, This Battles Far From Opinions Cuz Its A Fact-You'll-Lose Snap Ya Back-In-Two Cuz Alias Is Prone To Suck More Then Daily Used Vacuum-Tubes Smash Faggots-Wit-Ease, My Punches Will Scar Ya Mind Wit A Traumatic-Disease Once The Matic-Is-Squeezed, I'll Have Ya Thinkin U Out Of Breath Like Asthmatic-Beliefs |
Uppin For Votes.. Nice Verse Alias
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aiight that link you has provided,
is 1- spamming 2- biting .................................................. ....... so maybe you will be banned???? |
Opener: Alias
Structure: Alias Punches: Alias Personals: Penny Flow: Close but Alias Closer: Penny (Alias overplayed mixed closer) Overall: Close battle but Alias takes this with what I think better punches... |
aiight well...........................uppin.............. ...drop a fair vote.........an a link.........................
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ok i dont have 100 posts but i gotta say vote:alias
better flow better puches jus all round better I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll yet, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -Cprogress |
ok look here's the deal......
you don't bold your whole battle or any of it for that matter...it get's really stupid and makes people not even want to read it- wit that said...... penny wise u tore the multi's up....but thats it...other wise ur verse lacked punches flo-meti's and structure for that matter....the style is wak...kill-the-dashes-all-over-the-place... overall....alias came in witta better battle verse along with alot funnier an wittier wordplay and stronger vocab...his structure was much better and flo on key.....overall he murked this kid- my vote- alias......penny learn and elevate....view other battles |
[quote]Opener: Alias
Structure: Alias Punches: Alias Personals: Penny Flow: Close but Alias Closer: Penny (Alias overplayed mixed closer) Overall: Close battle but Alias takes this with what I think better punches...[quote] sonned.... teh closer was a lil played an alaias came harder |
battle was aightish
alias..who are you?? jus wonderin penny had right idea but dint deliver BREAKDOWN punches-a flow-a Structure-a enjoyment-both multis-Penny sustainment-A complexity-p wordplay-a overall-Alias MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ...BEING SLEPT ON PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1 |
YEP PEEP THE LINK PLZ ONE OF YA'LL..........................
NEED THIS TO BE LOOKED AT http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1 |
aiight will do soon...........................3rd tim uppin............................................. .......................
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yo this was a real hot and real close battle....both of you guys came real nice...
Alias You had some sick punches fam....especially the fire and matches line lol I was mos def feelin that...The flow was hot....Maybe a lil more multis would of been nice to help your flow out nah mean? Strucuture was straight...overall you had a nie battle verse wit some nice punches...and nice personals Penny Wise Dang you had some sick multis up in this verse and through out the whole verse...that's what I liked you didn't jus stop wit em....and on top of the multis you had some nice punches....Dang I was really feelin the flow also due to the multis you had in there.... Final Vote-Alias...this was a real hard battel for me to vote on took me some time and re-reading each verse....but I went wit punches, which is what a battle is about |
Can y'all do the same and drop a vote for me thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102993 |
Breakdown:
Punches: Alias Flow: Alias Creativty: Alias Vocab: Alias Multis: Penny Opener: Alias Closer: Alias Overall: Alias Nice battle...props ta both, penny ya jus need ta elevate... |
Aight here ya go.......
Opener: Alias Structure: Alias Punches: Alias Personals: Penny Flow: tie Closer: Penny Overall: Alias ( punches win battles) POLL VOTE ON THIS PLZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101455 |
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