Ape .vs. L.A.STR~E~TZ
 

10 lines
3-0 KO
4-1 TKO
5 wins
No hate, crew or dr votes
No feeding
No recycling
Due by Friday

nigga how u gonna come to battle ME at rb,
everyone on this site knows u just a fake mc//-1

jerkin off dudes is the only way ull start a beat,
u know that saying "u are watchu eat"? if thats tru then u must always be munchin at KFC//-2

ya name is ape then makin ya extinct must be a crime
my skills are like adidas-to beat ya i only need "3 lines"//-3

Bitch I ~Pop Clipz in Niggas~ , *See* things my way or im'a leave ya ~Optics Configured~ , Blast ya Eyez Outcha Skull...
Midget, U never hit the *Height wid ya Flow, Actually, why am i talkin bout winning? This Guy Wouldnt Know...//-4

this 'cats gettin ate up' like my text a herd-of-chows,
he couldnt 'bring beef' giving-birth-to-cows//-5

man, hows anyones gona take ya serious when ya sig says u swing from dudes "limbs"?
truth is ya rhymes are more used than construction workers old tims//-6

lyrically increase~ya~pain with lines so sick ill disease~ya~brain,
when i said i wanted sumone that would bring hard shit to the battle i didnt mean ya boxer's stain/-7

this nigga must have spent alot of "elementary~time", couse da truth is he aint brining nuthin but third grade lines//-8

i be a hard nigga like dem "penatentery~kind", couse i spit with deadly presicion like i had "cemetery~rhymes"//-9

i aint no kkk but still leavin many niggas "critically inclined "
stolen, prewritten, shit" is how ure flows are "lyrically~defined", ill rip outcha spine then blow ya mind and have ure "IQ seriously~declined"//-10

im hopin ure flow is ready soon. i kinda rushed this one to meet the deadline couse i forgot bout this battle. sorry for inconvinience

aight, u got till the end of the night to reply back or else its a dq, or does that rule not apply to u ape? just wonderin....

I'll drop when I get home.

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Ape stands up and grabs the mic from LA with a smirk on his face. Strolls up to the stage, waits for the beat...then completely rips this nigga wide open!!!


I'll RIP you so bad, people be thinkin' I spit out a Detroit Cemetary
Punches leave ya pupals glassy, fill ya eyes up with ya hits, cherry
The only time this nigga ever drop fire is when jugglin' with coctail
Gay porn and the internet gots this guy excited...checkin' his male
Punches have ya face black, blue, green and red like Jacksons kids
And better believe me, you is the worst part of LA, like Compton is
You droped 20 lines kid, HA, I'll still give ya your 1st L like ya name
And I still couldnt recieve ya punches, even if they was all on AIM
I got the brain that you give, my approch to LA is always cerebral
And ya verse looks like it dont know Structure, like all black people

Last line= Structure is a store where they sell all proper clothes, and from where I'm at, black people dont wear that, so dont take it racial...just a line. Ahha.

Aight, Uppin' for votes.

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The only time this nigga ever drop fire is when jugglin' with coctail
Gay porn and the internet gots this guy excited...checkin' his male

Okay Ape, the last part of that bar was soo played......ne ways
Structure-Ape (very tight)
Punches-Ape
Wordplay-Ape( though LA did have some)
Metaphors-Um, LA Streets
Multies-neither
Flow-Close, but Ape
Vocab-neither
Personals-LA Streets (just cause Ape didnt have any)
Enjoyment-Ape ( Streets was too dull)

Winner-Ape

Good battle...Ape took it easy....but then again Ape could be classified as elevated but hes facing kids with no records.

o shit, ya meant 10 LINES? damn, my bad...fuck fuck fuck...damn, i should really stop smoking the green...naw

ape got this cause o dude went way over tha limit plus switchin up his structure like he bit or sumthin either way u lost cause ape spit had better punches and flow which are the main catorgories in flowin.

Vote:ape


plz drop an honest vote on the battle in my sig

please, only vote if u have a hundred posts. no newbie votes. thanks for effort but only over a 100, thanx pinacle for the vote. keep votin. btw i always change styles in eveyone of my battles, even when i battled mc pinacle right there.

yo, ape ya can dq me if ya want couse i went over the limit. goddamn i hate this "100 characters" rule , gotta keep typing till i get there and now...

Naaaah LA, we straight...lets get the votin' underway!!!

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Both ur guys stuff was good but alot of it is filler, I just prefer straight up bad ass punches, fuck all that other shit "OH NO! He needs STRUCTURE and MULTIES!" Fuck that shit nigga u gonna say that shit to a nigga in da hood after a street battle mutha fucka? YEAHHHHH RIGHT NIGGA, internet lets all yall niggaz act different ---------------------------

good battle, good battle. L, you brought it strong dog, but Ape has better punches. If i could vote, it would be to ape, but it wouldnt be by very much

100 posts to vote...lets go people!!!

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Damn yo...Uppin' this!!!

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Still Uppin...

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UPPIN'!!!

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<center>BREAKDOWN</center>
<center>punches- ape
flow- ape
structure- ape
vocab- ape
complexitiy- ape
creativity- ape
wordplay- ape

Ape Verse- it was nice and short. full of punches and it had very nice flow. nice structure, with some wordplay. I suggest that you keep you verse short and sweet.

LA Verse- It was bad and long. It had weak punches with horrible flow to go along with it. U need structure, all lines should be the same length, not STRECTHED. You had ok wordplay. I suggest that you change ur style up a little bit. Make it shorter, put some punches, and fix your structure

APE IS MY FINAL VOTE

EVERYONE HIT THESE UP WITH AN HONEST VOTE PLEASE!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=killer

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=rock1n</center>

this battle was worthless...ape had better punches though they were played
his structure was much better also and his personals hit hard
he was just better in just about everything no question

vote ape

honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101811

nice battle here...but Ape gets it not only b/c LA went over the limit, but his structure and flow ran together like fluid...good shit both of you tho....plz hit up my battle vs. SoulSplit.....thnx 1

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Ape took this...His punches hit harder his flow was nice structure wasnt bad...LA elevate son u needa work on da newbs till ya get better...Ape Battle my nigga C.Quip he needs some1 good - My vote = Ape