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blak woods 12-23-03 05:25 PM

GaZeeBo Vs. blak woods (aktive)
 
10-15 lines...
no hate votes...
no D/R votes...
no krew votes...
no feedin...


drops due 20 min after check in.









check in playa...

GaZeeBo 12-23-03 05:52 PM

aight aight aight checkin in good luck^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

blak woods 12-23-03 05:57 PM

it's been 20 min you gone spit right now or in anotha 20 min?
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GaZeeBo 12-23-03 06:18 PM

i don’t wanna be hearin wack rhymes, but battlin u im bound to hear those/
call me a mathematician, the way I subtract your lyrical skills down to Zero/
you dont maintain sick scripts.. yet to me hes gonna drop wack spits/
15 lines is how long all ya talkings gonna last, before getting locked in caskets/
you stuff and churn out mass produced shit like lego brick molds/
your lackin courage heart and brains... ya need to follow the yellow brick road/
first shot KO like im comin with the one hitter quitter/
kid your rhymes wouldnt shine even if they were covered with glitter/
i bring dreams of dread as your dealing with street... stay discreet/
multiple personalities compete like School Of Hard Knocks worn by geeks/
no need to fake it your flavor cant be tasted/
a penny for your thoughts is too much for the words you wasted/
this jack is no ripper so wat if something bit?/
your like candy bars in a pool you really aint shit/


not my best work
kinda blocked right now

blak woods 12-23-03 06:20 PM

ayo...


this ma fuckaz rhyme style is wack and fictitious//
doesen't know real rap should come off tightly and be victious//
seriously, dis kat got 5 losses bout to be 6//
ain't none ya friends gone' vote, they stoped ridin dickx//
yo shit is sick, who evea told ya lame as that ya rhyme is crazy yo//
you should change ya name to "A GAY-Z-HO"//
and maybe yo, you'ed get some respect from ya peers//
i seen ya rhyme style, you must have been gay fa years//
but on the otha hand, you might get one or two votes from ya niggaz man//
half the ma fuckaz on this web site wanna be stan//
you proly one of the fake mutha fuckaz too//
go ahead, wright down ya fake lyrics and run um' through//
the only reason you wanted to battle me cause of ma name//
blak wood running all in ya ass is ya favorite game//
so fuck you nigga, and all these eminem wanna be's//
show me ya best, i'll show you a nigga that be sonnin these//


get down or lay down....

blak woods 12-23-03 06:22 PM

get aktive and vote ma fuckaz......
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GaZeeBo 12-23-03 07:44 PM

uppin 1 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Meters 12-23-03 07:50 PM

Gazeebo takes this because Blak Woods shit was all played. Blak Woods rhymes looked like the standard battle template, Gazeebo had some creativity in there. Also better punching.
So win goes to Gazeebo.

Drop a vote if you have the time, either of you
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100683

GaZeeBo 12-23-03 08:55 PM

uppin 2 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

GaZeeBo 12-23-03 09:38 PM

uppin 3 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

_ÑÒÀßÙSÈ_ 12-23-03 10:12 PM

ok battle both had ok flows, not bad punches. I think gazeebo shit was more contextual and a little more witty punches. blak came out firing but didn't spit anything too good. vote=gaz

peep my battle with j-yo and voteee thanks.

t-west 12-23-03 10:14 PM

blak woods shit might have been played but he hit way harder with his punches than Gazeebo. blak woods verse also flowed better, Gazeebo, sum of ur lines dont really flow rite, like one will b 5 words and the next 15, it affects ur structure and messes up ur punchlines effectiveness. Vocabulary, blak woods takes it too, more complex words. Personals i give 2 nobody, u 2 need 2 add those into a battle, personals r effecttive in battles.

Vote- blak woods

Return the favour by dropping honest votes on the battles in my sig plz. thx.

blak woods 12-24-03 01:20 AM

ayo uppin

check me out in audio too ma niggaz....
or whateva.....

big battle blak woods vs It

uppin anyway.....

It 12-24-03 04:03 AM

vote/woodz
better structure...
nice flow...
good wordplay...
other catz structure was off...
had a decent flow...
punch/woodz
open/woodz
close/woodz

blak woods 12-24-03 12:25 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppppppin ha ha.........

.:K:. 12-24-03 12:45 PM

ite ,

flow-g
opener-g
closer-tie
enjoyment-blak
personals-tie
punches-blak

overall- not a bad battle but blak just gets my vote,

make sure you hit this up man http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101055 .............................thx.............pz

blak woods 12-24-03 02:50 PM

keep votin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

blak woods 12-25-03 05:28 AM

uppin 4 votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........................

blak woods 12-27-03 10:59 PM

lets close this out nigga............................................. .................................................. .........................

blak woods 12-29-03 11:31 AM

uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. .................................

blak woods 12-29-03 04:18 PM

KAN WE GET SOME MORE VOTES TO CLOSE............................................. .................................................. .............................................

blak woods 12-29-03 07:42 PM

yo lets vote

and peep out my new audio battle nigaz

get active............
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TOX-SIC

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/blakwoodsmusic.htm

Quelude 12-29-03 07:48 PM

gazeebo took this with his creativity and consistent strength in his punches...
Blak woods had a decent drop but there were no outstanding lines... very weak in the originality dept.. I also didn't really see no personals. maybe about his record.

Gazeebo had his flow put together nicely and it hit hard with every line. Gotta give my vote to him...
Drop a vote. Both of you... Please? No, for real... vote though.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101920

168 12-29-03 08:05 PM

wat up

overall before i drop a vote this was a tight battle

better structure woods had better structre which allowed him to have a better flow, also he had better wordplay...also i give the pounches and personals to woods

vote for the battles in my sig i took the time repay it

overall vote woodz

Eki 12-29-03 08:13 PM

I reckon Wood had the better flow which made it getting into his verse a lot easier. So i felt it more. Some shit was played. But i still reckon he takes this one. No hate

please return the fevour with http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101620 ahonest vote

~LyRiCaL-JeZuS~ 12-29-03 08:13 PM

I agree some of that shit was played but still his punches hit harder and it flowed pretty good
opener and closer also goes to woodz
VOTE : WOODZ - flowed good,punches good, opener and closer also his.

return the favour we need jus a bit more votes on these battles so they close
LyRiCaL-JeZuS vs. Ill-Fresh
LyRiCaL-JeZuS vs. Paddyman
Lyrical-JeZuS vs, -Jacka-

Token 12-31-03 12:07 PM

blak woods DQd for uppin more than 5 times..
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