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Walter Wall vs. Slim Thug
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you spit first Ill spit ASAP after no feeding or biting no bullshit and stop pmming me, lmao |
10-15 Lines cuz Ima try to wrack up alot of punchlines in this and shit and thats what I asked for originally..Gl Droppin soon~
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You post the alphabet in capitals, claimin you bust a cap in my A-Z
Remember Warlords neither do we...cuz they was manless like alcatraz The only way you'd be an assassin is if u let donkeys mount you Ya styles like the negative number scale, bitch nothings what you amount to Deploying blows to expose this pussy like female nudists bustin cartwheels Straight stabbing Walls eyes with the Mona Lisa so he can see how real art feels Pana , Taktik , Twizzle, hottie or com ill take ne member of wits end Isn't it pathetic kid, that now you're records 9-3 just from checking in 13th ripped you Flawlessly your first battle..But thats all in the past Saw Walter rehearsin in a mirror & his reflection started to laugh Jus cause ya monitors rectangle don't mean ya rhymes are in shape You can't see me, see through paper's the only way my lines can be traced Time lapsed...U cant be hot, bitch how come you froze this bid? Expose this kid, open his flow and walk through it like Moses did Explanations: 1. Line 9 13th = his first battle that got votes (Audio) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90431 |
When u gonna drop~ 1 .
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Nice drop kid. Real nice. I got a laugh outta a few of those lines. Ima be peepin dis when Walter drops. Nice verse tho.
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I should of made this battle for slips, u'd finally see pink
This fag's writing a career for himself........in invisible ink Sending me 6 PM's to battle, uh don't you got a life kid? Guess not, he even got his Rb name tattooed on him!!! Not laughin wit you...when Im done ull need protection So confused! Slim Thug? you make oprah look anarexic! I rhyme better than you fool any title you stole Ill take it Its factual fattass only flows natural when type'n naked! But no one wants that, change ure name back...coward Im be'n 2 hard, Slim thug drops hot bars...in the shower! Didn't make the elite list and no crew will accept you son Cuz youve got more fruit in you..........than a fig newton! Ure Structure sucks and the Gap between us is extreme Ya BossHogg OutlawZ cuz when u post readers catch z's! |
Nice verse walter...GL uppin for votes .
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haha...We agreed on 1 hr time limit and u took a day..oh well nice drop accept for im not fat but ya ~
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SLIM THUG
You post the alphabet in capitals, claimin you bust a cap in my A-Z Remember Warlords neither do we...cuz they was manless like alcatraz ^an aiight opener, 7/10^ The only way you'd be an assassin is if u let donkeys mount you Ya styles like the negative number scale, bitch nothings what you amount to ^first line aiight, second ROFL 7/10^ Deploying blows to expose this pussy like female nudists bustin cartwheels Straight stabbing Walls eyes with the Mona Lisa so he can see how real art feels ^ROFL, nice punch, 8/10^ Pana , Taktik , Twizzle, hottie or com ill take ne member of wits end Isn't it pathetic kid, that now you're records 9-3 just from checking in ^lol, 7/10^ 13th ripped you Flawlessly your first battle..But thats all in the past Saw Walter rehearsin in a mirror & his reflection started to laugh ^aiight, 6/10^ Jus cause ya monitors rectangle don't mean ya rhymes are in shape You can't see me, see through paper's the only way my lines can be traced ^ohhhh, 7/10^ Time lapsed...U cant be hot, bitch how come you froze this bid? Expose this kid, open his flow and walk through it like Moses did lol, 7/10 overall: 49/70 WALTER WALL I should of made this battle for slips, u'd finally see pink This fag's writing a career for himself........in invisible ink ^nice 810^ Sending me 6 PM's to battle, uh don't you got a life kid? Guess not, he even got his Rb name tattooed on him!!! ^lol, 8/10^ Not laughin wit you...when Im done ull need protection So confused! Slim Thug? you make oprah look anarexic! ^lol, 7/10 I rhyme better than you fool any title you stole Ill take it Its factual fattass only flows natural when type'n naked! ^aiight, 7/10 But no one wants that, change ure name back...coward Im be'n 2 hard, Slim thug drops hot bars...in the shower! played, 710 Didn't make the elite list and no crew will accept you son Cuz youve got more fruit in you..........than a fig newton! creative, 7/10 Ure Structure sucks and the Gap between us is extreme Ya BossHogg OutlawZ cuz when u post readers catch z's! not so good finisher, 6/10 overall: 50/70 probs the closest battle i ever sen on RB, an both y'all came hard. keep it up peeps, i wanna see round 2. plz drop honest votes on these 007 VS rythmic hints http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99197 and 007 VS Jes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100952 |
1-0 uppin ~ .
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I went out bro, I dropped right when I came home
nice verse, but since I made punches about the pic in ure sig I'd appreciate that you put that pic back, cuz its cheating otherwise and I want this battle to be voted on fairly thanks, dawg upp'n for votes |
Can we get some votes perhaps? - uppin x 2 .
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punches-walter
personals-walter struc-walter meta's-tie multies-hmm... tie wordplay-walter overall-walter Slim didnt come as hard as i though he would come but.. walter takes this battle in a overall better verse and harder landing punches which i felt more that slim's.No Hate, just a vote PZ |
I had a pic of a Tatoo on my arm saying Slim Thug...Keep that in mind peeps...I dont wana put it back but ull take this neway WW
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Ok, here's tha breakdown:
Opener: Walter Punches: tie Personals: Slim Multis: Slim Structure: Walter Closer: Slim Vote = Slim... but this one was close. No beef, both did well good battle pz......... drop an honest vote in the link in my sig |
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ok honest vote here guys
i read both verses twice and i thought it was close at first but after reading them a second time...walt gets my vote slim your opener was played .. i felt that alot of your punches were not worded that well..therefore they really didnt hit that hard... walt came decent... had some nice punches..very creative and some nice personals..just an overall better verse from walt... overall decent battle... but my vote goes to walter wall.. need a mod to poll my vote |
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u gotta be registered and he doesnt have 300 + posts so it cant be polled nt tho .
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yes it can he is me... and he is I...lol didnt realize i posted that vote under that name but dont worry slim... i am Mr W.rite check the sig dude... still need a mod to poll i still cant poll under this name either... |
my 2 cents
flow-Slim personals-Slim punches-tie laughs-Slim creativity-Tie structure-Walter overall i beleive Slim won this nicely but a good battle by both much luv and both yall stay up................................. |
Myvote goes to Slim Thug.
I Liked both of the drops. Definitely. Walter Wall had good punches (as did Slim) but they were not as original. Both of you had good structure so i give a tie in that dept. Walter's looked better (less filler) but they both flowed. The both of you came out hard and kept swinging til the end so in the sustainment dept. I also give a tie. The meta's were there on both parts but as I said I feel that Slim was a lil more off the beaten path. So I give this category to him for his originality. All in all the battle was close. But I feel that Slim was more creative with his drop and therefore I give the battle to him. Peace. Need a mod to poll this. |
Punches: Slim (More consistent)
Metas: Tie Multis: Who cares? Neither/ Tie Wordplay: Walter Wall Flow: Walter Wall Structure: Walter Wall Enjoyment: Walter Wall Vocab/Complexity: Walter Wall Overall Vote: Walter Wall Nice verse Slim.. It was closer than the breakdown showed. Almost had it. Very close.. Good battle. |
Any member of executive cannot vote..Please remove that mod (That is concidered a hate vote) .
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lmao, you cant say they cant vote after they vote for me
you have to announce who cant vote b4 the battle and I would of said Aragorn and 1liner cant vote cuz they vote for you in all your battles.....d/r much? |
Sigh...Figures...Whatever let the fuck head vote... .
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punches- slim
structure- wall wordplay- wall flo- wall meti4- wall multi- slim overall- wall......sorry slim.....shorten ya lines up buddy *1* |
punches-slim
personals-slim (walter's was kinda dumb if u think about it) struc-walter meta's-tie multies-tie wordplay-walter overall-slim Now to show u why I thought Slim got this - his punches hit harder - his words RHYMED... on sum occasions... cept I never knew shape can rhyme wit traced... try shaped for a better result.. no hate... Now to show u why I though Walter didnt get this - his punches were hard hittin but fell off at times - Never knew extreme could rhyme wit Z's, protection wit anorexic, and kid wit him... But that RB line was funny though... no offense Slim... Sorry but that shit just made tha verse kinda weak. VOTE - Slim Thug |
wow...very nice match up hear...
structure/both...well walters slight better... flow/both style/slim thug wordplay/both punches/both person/both vocab/slim thug metaphor/both equal... multi/both... opener/both closer/slim thug... vote/slim thug... vry close battle...I felt that slim thug had that little more of an Edge... |
Damn...I barely won this...Good battle walter...Once the mods poll the unregistered its 5-4 (Good battle walter we will need a sequel in a few months) - 1 ( 5 - 4 ) Win
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Ehh...
My Vote= Walter Wall He Had Better Puns A More Creative Verse. Slim Coulda Had Better Wording Which Woulda Made His Puns Hit Harder... Vote= WW |
It's already over~! .
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DezsNewAim: LMAO @ Slim Thugs avatar
The KoNcEpT: ahaha. I Laugh Ever Time I Hear His Name. DezsNewAim: omg DezsNewAim: Walter had hella played lines. DezsNewAim: but at least they didnt make me want to kill myself. The KoNcEpT: But Do You Think SLim Thug Won?! DezsNewAim: fuck no. |
Punches: Slim just by 1 or 2
Metas: Walter Multis: Walter Wordplay: Walter Flow: Walter Structure: Walter Liked More: Walter Overall: Walter this was okay but slim thug your punches were pretty good but your verse was all just useless punches that didnt even flow well.. but the all around better verse was spit by walter |
walter won this first. . he got to 5 votes first, i just counted them. maybe one was an executive vote??? well, you were reported for excessive uppin also. sorry thug. rules apply to everyone. hate to give you a loss since we're cool n all.
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