JustinKredible33 \/ deser eagle
 

10 lines
no h/c/dr/bs vote
no recyclin, prewritin
i'ma drop first
you have 5 min...after check in...just to ensure that you don't prewrite.

failure to comply w/ these rules results in automatic...DQ

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5 mins daug???? u gotta be kidding yo
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when i "rip cats" i leave their bodies "spread out" like "beaten pussies"
soon as i acceted ya battle i knew yo dick would get more "rides" than "six flags"
nigga, goin against me you will get "killed" in the crossfire like "violent klan attacks"
"tryin too hard" like "fat chix that force little shoes on"
its "just-incredible" how this nigga thinks he can beat me.
"cut my feet off" and he still couldn't "de-feet me"
your lines "pack little punch" like "midgets workin for kool-aid"

its only 7 but fuck it................................................ .................................................. ........................................

you have till 6:55 central time....thats five more min...its already been almost twenty............................................ ...............

yo check this boi, that "de-feeted" line, its played emcees cant stand it//
my battle stylez similar to your sex life daug; single handed//
so think "twice" like i split ur head in "two chunks"//
id rather ride at six flags, than end up ridin in a trunk//(feel me)
ur punches werent even attempted like demented retards wit no arms//
its like this nigguh put on "soc-em-bop-its" his punches caused no harm//
u and losing is just a match made in heaven//
thats why imma give u this upside down seven//(7)=(L)

if u dont get punches dont vote

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^recycled

lol? what are u talkin about G?? ur fuckin gay homey
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how is that recycled? u said it to me and i said it back u fuckin mark ass bitch

thats called recyclin......fagbag.............................. .................................................. ........................ur REUSIN tha line.....

yo Justin took this shit, punches were better, flow was better, yo desert I seen ya rhyme pattern in the beginning - it's tight, but most cats won't be able to follow it without a better structure

anyway - justin got this

pz....

This was a good battle. I think you guys were to tight for time and you didn't have enough time to think properly cuz this wasn't blind spit. But you guys did alright. I didn't quite catch your flow deser or your structure and I just felt on this battle that Justin took it. Not easily though you did not get merked. Good battle.

I would appreciate it since I voted on your battle if you would vote on mine. Thanx.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100301

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100289

Both yalls structure and flow were off. Deser, your shit hardly rhymed. Deser had one personal but it was mad played.

Justin, you fed off his verse which is no good. But you hasd better punches and metas. and a lil better flow.

I give the win to Justin for a lil better verse. no hate jus a vote. Please drop an honest opinion here. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100235

JUSTIN got this all the way, with his first two lines really. deser i felt the punches, but dawg ya gotta flow more, rhyme ya lines use more multi's. vote=justin

oh and btw no more battles are less then ten lines this could get closed.

justin peep my battle with j-yo and vote, thanks.

thanks for the votes yo
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uppin this yo
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i think justin took this one......'

just better punches and shit.......


vote on mine.................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100633
peace

yo, deser took this.

his opener was dope as fuck...had some good punches and multis, etc...granted his structure was a little fucked up but he can fix that.

justin, you came aight, some of those lines looked very similar to the ones in deser's verse...hmm? but you had some okay punches,multis, etc...you coulda come much harder. so with that being said, my vote goes to deser eage

Justin... all tha way. Tactical was right about how both of your strutures were off...Deser shit was weak.....

yo my man justin was hot on this one ........................he has it all the way.............................

yo check this boi, that "de-feeted" line, its played emcees cant stand it//
my battle stylez similar to your sex life daug; single handed//
7.0
so think "twice" like i split ur head in "two chunks"//
id rather ride at six flags, than end up ridin in a trunk//(feel me)
6.0
ur punches werent even attempted like demented retards wit no arms//
its like this nigguh put on "soc-em-bop-its" his punches caused no harm
6.0
u and losing is just a match made in heaven//
thats why imma give u this upside down seven//(7)=(
8.0
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when i "rip cats" i leave their bodies "spread out" like "beaten pussies"
soon as i acceted ya battle i knew yo dick would get more "rides" than "six flags"
8.0
nigga, goin against me you will get "killed" in the crossfire like "violent klan attacks"
"tryin too hard" like "fat chix that force little shoes on"
7.0
its "just-incredible" how this nigga thinks he can beat me.
"cut my feet off" and he still couldn't "de-feet me"
your lines "pack little punch" like "midgets workin for kool-aid"
9.0

24.0=deser...
27.0=justin
vote justin for giving more effort...

aiight justin kredible took this one he had stronger punches, an the other cat seemed come pretty weak. but punches win battle, nic3 battl3 peeps!!!


plz drop an honest vote on this real quick
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104005

This was a real close battle, I was feelin' it. Although the structures were kinda fuq'ed up, but still good. Overall I think JK had a better flow, it sounded a little better, and because he hit Deser with stronger punches, that's where my vote is going.
Vote-JustinKredible

Return Da fava
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104078