Not Like This...
 

this is my first one ive actually tried to do

www.soundclick.com/bands/killamethodz

give feedback...dont be too harsh :(

Pz

FUCK DONT SLEEP

Pz....uppin :)

not bad flow...delivery is nice...beat is sweet and mellow...hook coulda used more word...concept good...lyrics are aight...

keep it up...you might be something ok when your voice deepens

nice track....

thanks for the big feedbacks lol


UPPIN

listeninin as i type


1st verse ya flow is off but u got potential

ya shit fell of at parts

theres not much i can say

just keep elevatin and keep droppin

aight


pz

fuck people dont reply very good lol

keep them going

UPPIN

aiight... didnt feel it.... flow was off... beat is old but still good...

k up up and away...

my flow wasnt off...in the 1st verse only

I liked it ...He was on the flow and I think if u keep pushin ull get betta ;) start battlin tho BOY

battlin in audio?

UPPPPPPPP

nice flow.. you should try and battle audio sometimes.. you might get good results

when i get my mic to work properly maybe me and you go do and audio battle hit me back and let me know.. i will let u know when my mic is fixed

Peace :)

i dont really do audio battles...i just make tracks

This wasn't half bad. Your voice sounds high pitched, it was actually on beat. But I could see how one could think otherwise.

Subject matter seems a bit personal, but it's all good. Could use some mastering and stuff, 'cause the instrumentals are way in the background and your voice is in the foreground. I know how that goes.

~Shalom~

agreed wit most of what ^^^ said. people always think ur off beat when ya string lines out across bars. n ya, u should raise the vocal level just a bit. but u got a smooth flow.

would like to see u come a bit harder wit the lyrics on a non-personal/emotional track. good shit though.

stay up........

yeah my next one with swoop were doing for knockoutz its gon be called Right Here its gonna be hot...im gonna switch styles into a more gangsta/ish lyrics...so its gon be interesting


stay up thanks guys....up for more