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Tactical v. Da Jewish One
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You drop first No hate/crew/DR/feeding/unexplained etc votes Drop asap G'luck |
Sorry it just a quick keystyle i got to go to work tommorow
G'luck dune you call this a challenge, when did retards start rappin kinda like audiovox, developing a alarm clock You came weak like a second-hand name This is no child?s game, like buying kiddy porn Your left with a unstoppable sense of shame Steady proclaiming you run the inner city crap game But like a digestive track on exlax you can?t hold shit Your like a dyke that isn?t ready to commit You got a dick in your ass and a toung on your clit It?s gotta be hard to rhyme while chewin on a dick I'm not amused with your with your weak flow It kinda like tryin to piss and haven no control might as well sever your finger tips, and come to grips you just brought a plastic knife to a sword fight |
Yo this dudes bout ta get burned like it's World War 2
You'l be incarcerated, incinerated when I gas you dude Dun think I'm a Nazi, cause I aint even white bitch Hearin you rap makes me wish Hitler just finished it I'll murder ya rhymes like you in front of a firing squad Bring back memories? Thats why ya grandparents are wit God I'm just like a K-Mart employee cause I "spit on Target" bitch 'Cause your punches have mo misses than a lesbian flick You turn ya back on me yo cause you can't front wit me foo Like Clint Eastwood Do you feel lucky punk? Well jew you? no hate, jus a battle, lets see some votes |
vote-tactical.. jewish you had a decent flow, but sometimes u would go off on some totally different tip, like the first 2 bars.. didnt even rhyme.. then u rhymed the next 3 unevenly.. and your finisher didnt rhyme either, half the verse was about dicks n clits.. u need to think more about lyrical punches aim'd at your opponent.. some personals too.. try complexing your scheme a little bit.. tactical didnt come great either but he had a better foundation.. his shit rhymed evenly and had some personals seasoned with the occasional punch, closer made me laugh, so stick with it but tac got this.. vote on my shit when theunderated posts
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This was a good battle but
I think both of ya'll was a bunch of shit, Nobody should have won this battle because ya'll was on that bull shit. I think that Center sight was a Dick riding vote. Because they both was garbage >>>>> |
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uppin the ;last time, dun let this sleep! .................................................. ...............
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both verses coulda been betta, but tactical came harda than djo did...good try though...u need to work on ur rhymes djo..
vote-tactical |
this battle was weak, but tactical took it, jew your structure was cool but you barely rhymed anything good with any hard punches. disses were off...tactical didn't come much better, but he had better disses....vote=tactical
peep my battle with meters and return and honest vote. peace |
_ÑÒÀßÙSÈ_ this crazy fool is always saying elevate
but his record is 3-12 FUCKING FUNNY WHAT A TOOL |
honestly this battle wasn't that great but.... i think tactical took a shit on da jewish one, dog you suck dick, i mean real fat balls, i coudln't even tell if you was fucken rhyming, no but in aint even trying to hate on you dog just get better. yeah my record suck but i'm underated, so bitch if you mad and you want to battle me set it up, you suck dog
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how would you feel if your name was blackman and i called you nigger??? |
Yea i think tactical took this one....he just had more personals and the wordplay and abstract concepts he was able to come up with while fuckin with it ....led to some good punches....and some weak ones...but enough for a win....no hate my vote goes to Tactical.....hit up my battles if you know how to vote .....peace....
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Tactical takes it with better structure and harder punches. Also, DaJewishOne completely fell off somewhere during his verse. Tactical showed some skill here with a more complex verse and better structure so the win's his.
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Go to IR dawg, it's not letting me poll.
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