---((_ÑÒÀßÙSÈ_ VS. meters))---
 

12-14 line max
no crew, hate or dr
no unexplained votes
due in an hour after we both
check in dunny.

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Slay and filet this gay, like a fierce god i'm makin' ya PREY,
Bullet SPRAY assaults ya WASHED up rhymes until they fade away,
Like birds of prey i angrily rise to descend on ya record-wise,
3-12? I'm like a stake 'cause i'm actin' as a dead man's demise,
Flip ya record, you'd be me!, shatter my mirror image lyrically,
7 years of bad luck is worth it for fucking killing a wack emcee,
No Abuse rhymes obtuse and with the anger of Mother Goose,
Enough screws loose to try to swim through my digestive juice,
^^like Elian through the ocean, battle's too easy, i'm coastin'!,
Sigs a true pic of the mod response the day ya started postin',
Rippin' ya spine through ya neck, so cyber MC stands E-Wrecked,
A crime that's perfect!, why suspect me?, i'm 1 of 13 suspects!


DON'T VOTE IF YOU DON'T GET THE WORDPLAY.
AHH...ATLEAST IF YOU DON'T GET ALL OF IT.

YOOOOO MY SHIT FUCKING FROZE i had my verse all done and it froze and i'm pisssedddddddd cuz it was hot. i gotta do it again i don't remember much really.

Sorry if that happened man. But post soon, will you? The element of blind spit is completely gone.............................................. ....
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ime to spit.......

fuck what you represent, your best is spent but the stench still hasn't went
meters beleive this- you being hard i aint "buying" it-that's why i let you pay "rent"
i could take a chainsaw to your brain and still not scrape off any sense...
break off what's next, face off i let out shots that are str8 raw
stop trying to copy my manhood, but i guess that's what meters are for
i think i got a fever, cuz son i'm a drop you while hot
plus "pussy" you only on point when stabbing a "twat"
keep bagging the "rocks", maybe some day you'll be "dope"
but as of right now, try to get up to a hundred cheap votes
i could of fed off your verse, but i aint down with that
CuLd Of BeAt yOu LiKe ThIs If I WaS pouNdIn CApS
astounding daps, No abuse i bring the abuse to no limit
like killing master p the faster i pee on M's head like a midget
fight and get with it, the prize M's afraid of
couldn't catch up to my style, if he went back to when dolly parton was an A cup...


aight yo...good luck
see how it goes
peace

i posted as quick as possible...................sorry bout the blind spit ordeal..but i didn't feed........

ok no abuse got this one but it was close, personally I think he's a bit of a big head, ive read other shit when he's voted he thinks he's the don but he aint theres loads better on here he will get murked eventually but he gets my vote on this one....b4 you say anything I aint saying im better cuz I aint but you should think like more adult b4 you post bitch.....................


vote doesnt count. -feeble -

Good battle. Noabuse suprised me.
Anyway L's breakdown....

punches - meters
personals - meters
flow - meters (noabuse started well)
creativity - tie
opener - meters
closer - meters
structure - meters

OVERALL - meters


Oh and noabuse.....you forgot to poll on my battle.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101036

I just wanted to let ya'll know i did that shit in like 10 minutes, my other verse was better but it got erased. I also don't think i'm a don? i don't think i'm anything really i know people can beat me in a battle, that's ok. But i also know that i can beat them back. Also, i can spot flaws easily in posts and i know what wins battles. So think what you think i'm not a big head whats' with this big head shit anyway that other dude just called me a big head? that's like a fucking compliment..LOL anyways just wanted to point that and say the other.

must be the way you come across seeing as I dont actually know you? anyways just for a laugh to you wanna team up with someone and battle me and LM? just for fun no beef iight?

YO i thought you wanted to battle me one on two, i'll get somebody and battle you if you wanna do it like that. aight

Up up and away! Vote if you understand the wordplay. <<<(was not supposed to rhyme.)..................................
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Third upping. Don't sleep on this battle........................
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ite,

flow-meters
opener-tie
closer-meters
structure-meters
personal-no
punches-meters
enjoyment-no

overall- meters nice drops,


make sure you hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101055 ........................thx.............pz

uppin' this one for votes...........
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punches-meters
personals-meters
flow-no abuse
creativity-no abuse
opener-meters
closer-meters
structure-meters
vote-meters
~peace~
lalalalalalalalalalalalalalala!

Last upping. UP UP UP UP!.............
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punches - meters close but hit harder
personals - meters
flow - meters
creativity - tie pretty much even
opener - meters more to the point
closer - meters
structure - meters short and to the point

heres the breakdown................
Complex=meters
flow=both
structuer=both
personals=meters
punches=meters
overall meters


yeah theres the end of my breakdown