Influence: featuring Whitelighting & Speek.E.Z.
 

I always come in here and give feedback even if i dont drop anything but since i follow rules here are three i just did:
Realist and Ghod: Potential Eyes
Auspicicous: Something Merry
Aragorn: forgot the title

This is my first collab...here it gooooooooooooooes:)

Whitelightning:
Throughtout The Many Stages Of Life Growin Up
Many Sources Diversift Simplicity, Makin Life Tough
Verbal Statements Pulling Brain Thoughts In Multiple Directions
Actions Create Friendly Factions, Reactin Parental Sanctions
Free Range Or Put Under Civil House Arrest Is Under Extreme Protest
They Think What's Best, But It Add's Weight To Your Chest
Slip On Headphones, Your Now Delivered A Different Message
Livin On Edge, Disrespectin Proper Morals, Destroyin Ledges
Canyons Full Of Dismal Dismay, No Clear Way To Turn
Supposed To Learn In Life, Endless Strife, Cause For Constant Concern
Independance Is Only Positive Until You Striding Astray
Everyday Parents Worry, Don't Know What To Say, Keepin Em at Bay
This Trust Must Be Built On A Permanent Foundation
Create Examples For Next Generations, Show What They Will Be Facin
You Can't Rewind Pittiful Actions Or Freeze Real Time
In Your Mind, The Answers You Will Find, Many Different Kinds
Biases Playing Major Role Of Personal Endeavours, Continued Suspense
Which Source Will Be Your Prominent Influence...

Speek.E.Z.:
Do My Words Reach Millions? Do They Actually Listen..
Do They Start Hating If I Drop The Name High Class For Dissing?..
Do They Understand My Mission Or Are They Caught In The Hype..
Do They Wear What I Wear Just Because Of What I Write..
If I Say I Pack Heat.. Do They Go Out And By A Heater..
If I Call A Girl A Bitch, Is That The Way They Start 2 Treat Her..
Are My Lyrics More Then Words? Are They A Way Of Life?..
Don’t Compare Your Life, With The Way I Deal With My Strife..
We Will Probably Never Meet, But Do You Consider Me A Friend?..
My Lyrics Aren’t Specified They Are Just A Piece Of Mind I Lend..
And In The End We Need To Realize How Much Power We Hold..
Highlight The Meanings In Bold, Then We Make Riches In Gold..
A Pen And Paper And A Way Of Life For Anyone That Reads This..
For Us To Fix The Game, We Need To Realize That Influence Exists..

Emerge:
Many circumstances invest one of which is a pounding chest
Yet I infest with my Jedi ingress…admiring only the best
I only assimilate those traits for those fighting inevitable losses
None of them considered prophets nor assembled on crosses
Fighting by their own beliefs a gene damn worthy of bequeath
Love, faith, religion, & moral discipline none ever placed beneath
Under vain pleasures…or instant gratification…of their own
Eternal flames light enlightening even without a sun still shone
Never will they dare accept theories imposed…a mortal sin
Calm in presentation even in defeat not to mention…a win
Everyone I ever looked up to for bravery not necessarily morals
Orals dictated eloquently such manner cutting enemies like chorals
Values so important…enough to disregard the loves of his life
Even willing to rest unpeacefully knowing he widowed a wife
Ready yet shooken steadily looking…into a one inch tunnel
Yes…he is prepared to drop his life into the forgotten funnel
Only thing worth living for got you determined with imprudence
Under no circumstance should you compromise love for influence

this was dope.. didn't know wl was in on it.. but it was a good surprise we all came dope :)

this was good i liked everything

i already say speeks verse like 3 days ago lol


keep droppin Pz

Nice job. I liked this collab, many times the different styles of writters cause the collab to seem a bit messy, all over the place. Not in this case each one of you complamented eachothers verse quit well. Complexity was there as well as flow, I liked the imagery as well as the long lines. I think longer lines help story type drops gain momentum in a hurry. Just my opinion but yeah great collab. All three of you did a great job on this! I bet the audio would be nice, any plans on an audio version? Keep doing good things for the site...

~Bounce~

/\ thanks a lot man i appreciate it

oh shit i just barely noticed something about my verse i had not seen...

Look at the first letters of each line on my verse;)

white...thought the vocab was good...helped with the flow of it...well worked sylables...but thought it was a bit jumpy..with the way ya sentences were structured.....other than that nice verse..liked the scheme..
speek...liked the perspective you came from...maybe the vocab could have been expanded on..thought the second half was better...the first seemed to be a bit of a filler.... but the style went well with the others...good contrast....good verse
emerge...another different style to the others...had a good flow going, except it fell in the middle...ya vocab was ok...some lines seemed to lack...but again i liked the scheme... so yeah not a bad verse...
overall i thought the three styles went well together....nice collab overall...all could use work in little ways..but whos doesnt?.....pZ

eehhh, fucking hell i jus noticed... got some mad shit going on there.... very creative...MYINFLUENCEOVERYOU.....Tight!!!!!!

uppin this

upppppppppp

Yeah this was a real good collab here.....enjoyed the read from all 3 people....structure from all 3 was real good......flow in all 3 verses seemed to be good, it stayed on through out the whole piece, didnt really get off at all in this...liked the vocab from all 3 of you....had some good multies in there...overall this was a good collab....made a good read....and keep at it.

Emerge ... you murdered it dunny ... fa sho...

speek... this is the first drop i've seen from you... nastier then a sucked dick!...

White ... u talk to much ish... saying i'm garbage... son.. u are... but on this peice.... but you was coo ... no hate... i never hate... i came with yo A game for ya team... good...

Good Collab... keep doin it...

Caesar-On3

Great collaboration! The theme remained constant throughout and I could hear the three different verses flowing seemlessly on a beat, even though the flows were all quite different.

The vocab was lacking in only a couple of places, but not enough to hurt the overall piece. I think you three should collaborate more often.

Hit me up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100974

Tight Collab...Emerge Ripped This Shit.....................WhiteLightening Damn Kid Chill..lol.....Some Fake Peeps Ice on Hurr gon' Melt Kid...Speek E.Z. You Pretty Nice Kid....Keep At it....You'll Elevate to a Great Mc Sooner Or Later

thanks

lmao at kid saying vocab lacked...moron

upppppppppppppppppppp

Emerge..dope piece you got going on.
What one lacked, the other made up for.
All 3 styles complemented each other very nicely.
Speek and White, ya both did very well. Good going.

damn , nice spit playas, this a a very good collab, ima qoute the whole thing cuz it was all tite, the flow was nice, the creativity was nice,m good vocab, everythin was good, keep it up

as it's already been said, the 3 different styles together is what really made this piece stand out, each verse complimented the other extremely well...emerge i liked your rhyme scheme as well with the "my influence over you" that was creative...overall this is one of the better open mics i have read in a while, on this site or any...

Agreed this was dope.. i liked every aspect.. nice peice yo.. keep up the good work and dont give up

Peace :)

ahhh i always forget to post a rating

well here it is: 8.5 out of 10

Good Luck!! :)

thanks homo

First off: September 4 1985 vs. February 6 1978. Kid?

Second off: Yeah, you're probably right. There's no possibility that anything in your verse could be lacking. That's why you are relegated to posting your shit on a message board instead of getting played on MTV and selling millions. Because you are perfect. Were you born a pompous ass or is that a trait you've aquired being king of A FUCKING MESSAGE BOARD?

you are talking shit you are 23 on a message board and no i didnt say my drop didnt lack anything but vocab was certainly not it...go away thank you:)

lol, everything has already been said =) I always luv dese kinda of pieces lol. What I didnt hear others compliment on is that you all stayed on topic =) that is always a good thing to see in this type of track. I kno many people who will be talking about lifes struggle and the next...they're talkin bout get laid in the corner bathroom of the McDonalds in the mall and...God, even im going off topic now =). Anyways...good drop by all three of 3, good to come to this site and see der are sum ill heads here instead of thoe dick riding faggots in Front Lines. Emerge my man...lol, dat shit was beyond ill, The first letter of every line lol...Your a Genius Man.

If you guys wouldn't mind...coudl u plz drop a vote on the battles in my sig plz...The dickriding force of the FrontLines army has decided to attack me. =)

Very good piece...now get workin on the dam audio. Lates.

23. Your math is a little off there buddy. Go check those dates again. And just because I mentioned vocab doesn't mean it was directed squarely at you. Two other heads spit on that composition. Get over yourself.

"Nice job. I liked this collab, many times the different styles of writters cause the collab to seem a bit messy, all over the place. Not in this case each one of you complamented eachothers verse"

bouncedoggydog...


I agree with him...Overall was very different from most collabs...
Good vocab well used for what you three were trying to script upon...

Emerge good job first time seeing you drop...

Whitelightning...Nice style..good opener and finisher..

Speek EZ...Unique opener...

as for complexity..just add a little bit more of a twist...

Over all was a very good collab...


Laters...

whoa This Collab was hot ya all had It..ya Flow was Nice by All and whitelightning sarted it off Nicely then Speek.E.Z. did well For his Verse that was Good Flow and Structure so I think you 2 did well.......but........EMERGE your verse was shit Joken man Ya Verse was Good to Ya Had FLow and ya Structure and ya had that thing:

Many circumstances invest one of which is a pounding chest
Yet I infest with my Jedi ingress…admiring only the best

I only assimilate those traits for those fighting inevitable losses
None of them considered prophets nor assembled on crosses
Fighting by their own beliefs a gene damn worthy of bequeath
Love, faith, religion, & moral discipline none ever placed beneath
Under vain pleasures…or instant gratification…of their own
Eternal flames light enlightening even without a sun still shone
Never will they dare accept theories imposed…a mortal sin
Calm in presentation even in defeat not to mention…a win
Everyone I ever looked up to for bravery not necessarily morals

Orals dictated eloquently such manner cutting enemies like chorals
Values so important…enough to disregard the loves of his life
Even willing to rest unpeacefully knowing he widowed a wife
Ready yet shooken steadily looking…into a one inch tunnel

Yes…he is prepared to drop his life into the forgotten funnel
Only thing worth living for got you determined with imprudence
Under no circumstance should you compromise love for influence
^^that was Nice work...
SO this was Nice by you all....so this was Nice and I would give ya 10/10 But Im Not Gonna :p........PeacE............

Yes, was really good. I liked the way everything was blended together nicely. All the verses were in collab with one another. Keep up. Peace.

Good drop, and I saw my name in there, LOL...
Nice vocab from all, nice word-play, nice topic...
It was well rounded, the structure was okay...
3 diffrent styles in one collaberation can only bring good...
Nice drop from all... Rate - 8 / 10

upp diddy upp upp..

Good Job Speek..had no idea you were in lol..Emerge you covert nigga..lol...

uppin again....

That was tight, that can probably influence younger kids to rap about things they sjould rap about that age.

wow...this is old...
dont up old threads

your just mad cuz its doper then u =\