%GoOfY% vs dw
 

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|..You Mock!..You're Verse at Least Decent?..Defeat comes as a Hence!..You Sick and Breathing?..No Your Sort of Any Talent Remains in Suspense, I'm 'Blowin' Away Victory' Like Each Bar Like GoOfY was a Vent, DW Never Be Like Me, cuz He'll Have No Names Under 'Victorious Against'..|..Fuckin Jock
|..GoOfY Hurtin' This Man, Like Clumsy Kids Through Sidewalks, I'm Stompin' His Hand, Nice?..No, This Kid Wouldn't Understand,
I'm Makin' This Bitch Holdin' His Chest, Like I Was Causing Harm To His Ovalry Glands, It's Already Over, Damn, cuz I'm Just Slackin' on Words, Like Fuckin' Dyslexic Kids Usin DW as a Slang for Than..|(damn).
|..You're Worst Than Sars!..cuz I'm Breezin Through Diseases, You Couldnt Compete, Don't Talk Your Way Outta This cuz GoOfY Exceling Ranks Past DW Like Fuckin' Cars, I'm Beatin You Hard!..cuz I Might Be Like Kindergarteners cuz My Head Always Extends Above You, Like DW was a Fuckin' Monkey Bar!..|
|..Takin' Your Career Far?..You Must Be Dreaming!..cuz My Punches 'Killin This Kid's Spirit' Like a Father's Death of Brett Farve, I'm Like Your Fuckin' Foster Parent, I'm Never Leavin' This Child in Charge, cuz GoOfY is Finally Gonna Bring Some 'Presence'(Presents) to Your Christmas, Like a Fuckin' Fake Santa Claus..|
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Thought You Were Gonna Take This?..Keep on Dreaming!
|..I'm Carrying This Baby on My Back, Like Fuckin' Carraiges, Stretch for One More Son?..I Know Where Your Next Spare Is, cuz I'm Exposin' a Herb, Like The U.S. Army Did, You Won-in-Which, I Dominate This Bitch, cuz GoOfY is Like 'Hoes Lookin' For Marriage', I'm Talkin Simple Steps and Walkin' Through Your Heritage..|

reppin a name from disney...make believe n still can't diss me...
punch n miss me...wen i asked 4 this battle u shud av been busy...
remove ya lung from ya chest...hand it to ya hold ya breath...
an inhaler at its best cudnt delay you bein put to rest...
why do you even try to beat a guy who'll take pleasure in watchin u die...
floored n i watch u lie...peal onions dry just to watch u cry...
my Pupils Dilated…from the shock of how wak this faG is...
his punches hit the floor flat like a can without the fizz...
u jus fuckin wiv hoes...workin the streets recievin no cash...
next time say pass...man u ain't gangsta....u jus a pain in the ass...


uppin this!

clean battle

but i thoguht DW took it wit better punches an metas.

he also is jsut plain out better

goofy yastyle is like brooklyns an i aint feelin it
not bad good shit
clsoe battle but


Vote- dw


SInce i dont got a battle hit up my PArtnas HEs Dope THe jacka.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101636

PC

nice battle.

dw has a more original style like myslef.rhyming metas wit a constent flow.......

goofy... has that style that only the person that writes understands the flow....

punches-dw..they were light but had a good flow
flow-dw
ohhh- no one
metas-dw

vote dw.......

when i get 100 posts i will poll

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yo i votes on ur guys battle.................

peep mine against double o seven...........

my vote stays --DW

aight sum nice wordplay goin on there...............punches an strcuture gotta go to dw, jus had a better idea going reading his, an fo the flow, hard to decide,the structure of goofy were kinda hard to keep up with........punches i also gotta go wit dw, so almost all points go to dw......

return the favour.....
vote honestly.
underated , got the betetr of the other guy, basically it was jus the level of punches an to a point fa'low, that got him my vote....

ayo return the favour.......
vote honestly...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102154

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Setup=Dw
Structure=Dw

Punches=Dw
Flow=Dw
Creativirt=Goof
Metas=Good
Overall Vote=Dw He Took This Goofy's Verse Was Harder To REad And Shit I Didn't Like It Cause It Wasn't Organized Dw Took This 1 No Doubt Hollaz

I'm a give this to DW...

Along with some advice.

Always keep your format like this, it works.

I've seen you come stretched as hell before, this is better.

Goofy went on a stretched line marathon.

I should smack you for making me read so much!

What ya threw wasn't bad, some of the wordplay was actually pretty inventive...

But a good deal of it was played and contained so, so, so much filler...

It was hard to seperate the good shit from the whack shit.

Better up your format...
Your flow will improve greatly.

Over all, DW wins with the better format, naturally...
He didn't use alot of wordplay, just added it nicely here and there.

Very even, well balanced verse.
Topped off with some nice, not great, but real effective punches.

DW

Goofy had a real Abstract flow... I mean it's all good to have that kinda flow... but it hurts you when you're abstract and lacking format... We're voting on this best rhyme and I have a hard time hearing you get that out at a live or Audio battle...

DW gets the vote: would poll it if I could... maybe one day I will

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DW takes this with a better verse...
Nice structure.
Better punches with some sittier flips....

Over DW takes this with a much better battle

Peep me vs. Eki....

Needs 1 vote I think

And I did... For reasons that I already stated above....

Honest Votes on my battle with Mc_Profit please

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Ok. I think Dw got this.
Firstly Goofys verse was badly structured which makes it hard to get into. He didnt punch as hard as dw , but he was more creative. Dws Flow was better.

Vote - Dw

oh yeh canboth of you honestly return the fevour

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101794

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Dw take my vote for a better overall verse
he has better flow better punches and better personals
Goofy you did do too bad but. i think you should elevate a lote more before battling more skilled MC's no hate just a vote

Overall: DW

Peace

Can Both of you Please Return the Favor and vote honestly on my battle.. i took the time you should too..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102839

Thank You. Much Appriciated
Peace