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SplitSouL vs. DarkForce
15-20 lines
due 12/25/03 no hate DR crew or any of that shit votes |
my mission is to leave this cat missin
trophy prize to a fishin competition my rhymes to great for him, he cant comprehend his battle weak, like iraqi capitol defence his rhymes condensed have about the mass as one of my bars he might open a can, but ive been openin jars(think whoopass) im like the stars, he like mars, i outshine this bitch and i could predict his rhymes better then a dummys ventriloquist im sick of this i gotta lotta shit to complain about id rather forfiet this battle then hear what comes out his mouth nah id rather see him pout so ill see it through to the end but this guy needs help "anyone got a helping hand they can lend"? i said only 20 lines, so i guess it has to finish but one question, what line did i win this? i should have said 20 bars, but oh well |
damn been a while since i battled........................................... ..............................................
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you gonna hit this up???????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ????
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sorry dude...got caught up in X-mas shit...I'll post in a few.........
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this kats rhymes are old and played just like an antique/
you tha center of attention when packed by a mans meat/lyrically these disses are recieved lethal, ur preceived feeble/ you couldn't pen sick lyrics written wit a diseased needle/ your soul is split? guess your not a religious professional/ but why does this boy still take condoms to his confessional?/ I hurt these bi/gays in drive bys while I squirt heat sideways/ Cuz I'm the road to success, Ur boyfriend's cruisin Ur hershey highway/ I leave kats who oppose me on stuck, like Colin Farrell in Phone Booth/ Gotta girl? well I'm tha sniper, shootin my ammo at her tooth/ |
be honest........4-1 i expected better....14-5 i expected better
ne ways.... punches- force flo- split structure- force multi's- force meti4's- force overall force.......split...witta style like that...u wont handle people who have skills..... dark...u've had alotta time off...still rusty.... both hit dis witta honest vote...thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101438 |
Honest Vote: Darkforce
Split - Get Focused Man, You can do way better Force - Tight Flow and the Metaphors were sick (like a poisioned needle) :-) Please return the favor you guys and give an honest vote on my battles... I'd appreciate it.... I'm trying to get them closed out. |
uppin fo votes....I will return tha favor...just drop a link................
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My bad forgot the links....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101439 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101456 Let me know Honestly what y'all think... |
Complexity:...
Creativity: Dark Force Punches: Dark Force Personals:... Delivery: Dark.. Had some multis i.e perceived-feeble/ diseased-feeble Vote: Dark Force Rationale: Neither verse was good but Dark was better in the categories listed above.. |
Complexity:...
Creativity: Dark Force Punches: Dark Force Personals:... Delivery: Dark.. Had some multis i.e perceived-feeble/ diseased-needle Vote: Dark Force Rationale: Neither verse was good but Dark was better in the categories listed above.. |
come on peeps...don't sleep on this shit...I will return the favor if ya drop a link.............................................. ..............
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this was a clean battle but Dark took this killed the kid
damn vote- dark better flows an punches plus i wasa feelin his structure... ill poll it when i can ill be back to tho http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101625 ^6 just VET battle gettin slepted on..2 |
uppin this shit...thats why RB is not an elite battle site...people sleep on shit too much....drop a link and I"ll return the favor!
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wtf is up with you people...just drop a fuckin vote and a link...
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Spitsoul - I wasnt really feeling the verse. The punches wernt bringing full effect. You had nice structure, and an alright flow. The verse just didnt appeal to me. It was straight, but could have been put in better words. Ya know, hommie...
DarkForce - You had this battle one all around. Your punches hit harder and had more effect. I liked the structure, just like spitsoul. Saw some alright word-play in there. Over all, you won this battle... Vote - DarkForce |
Ohh, and be sure to return the favor by making an honest vote on the battle in my sig hommie. It would be much appriciated...
^ UPPIN ^ |
split had some decent rhymes, pretty good flow, shit actually rhymed unlike a lot of stuff im seein on dis site.
but darks punches were overall better, like the religious professional line, overall more clever. vote: darkforce |
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uppin fo votes....drop a link and I'll return the favor(100+ posts only)............................................. ...................................
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all I want is some fuckin votes...is that too much to ask from a website who has 30,000+ members for fucks sake?
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word but breakdown structure- df flow- df punches- df wordplay- df enjoyment- df creativity- df complexity- df effor- tie humor- none overall- df SPLIT VERSE: yo, even ya bars out, get betta structure, PUNCHES PUNCHES PUNCHES!! use wordplay and get betta flow Dark Verse: u had ok structure, ok punches, and aight flow. you did enuff to do the job. work on your wordplay.. everyone hit this up please honest votes only http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99268 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101995 |
finish this off for me...just need a couple more votes...I will return the favor............................................. ...............
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finish this off for me...just need a couple more votes...I will return the favor............................................. ...............
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Dark Force fucked this up...
Better everything, really... Structure, better. Punches, alot better Wordplay, again, better Flow, better Closer, eh...but still managed to be better. Best line also...that "condom/confessional" line made me laugh. Tight verse, man. Split, add more to ya shit... No one likes stretched lines... But, come on. Make em at least have substance. Peace Holla back on this... Need your vote! |
need one vote to KO this herb...drop a link and I'll return the favor............................................. ........................................
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damn, darkforce got it...flow, vocba, hits, etc.
splitsoul-need to work on flow a little more vote=DF |
dark force got this
His verse was better, but both of you need to cut the line lenght some... Split, your punches were kinda weak and you should try to make lines about the same lenght vote dark |
Dark Force DQed for uppin more than 5 times.
Read rules.. any posts after both verses are dropped will be considered an up. |
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