I_Can't-Lose vs Technician
 

lets go

you spit first

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After this shit ya gonna call me Rb's Santa Clause
I Rap this battle like a gift and simply hand you loss
Your skill is shown clearly when i fraction tha cost
Less than nothin, like ur punches, actions so soft
Sayin you can't lose?, from inside'a my mouth?
Give you this verball abuse, and spit the trash out
You might as well fall off, truthfully i'll sever you dawg
you wouldn't notice the difference, you were never on
2 an 0 and you think you the best, i put a chink in ya chest
The W relinquished by tech, get outta Rb, you simply a pest

I'll Use Your Flaws as Fun-Facts, Then Start Attractin' The Votes/
Pimp-Slap U As I Tell your Immigrant Family to Get Back in the Boat/

Why You Tryin' To Start Shit.. When You Know It's Hard to Offend-Me Right /
I Would Choke You But U Still Got GodFather's Dick in your Wind-
Pipe/

Thinkin' that You Sick.. Bitch, You're Just a Lame-Infection/
& If the Wacks Start A Movement, U Better Walk the Same Direction/

You Idiot, You Faggot.. Take a Swing and Try To Slug-My Cite/
My Punches Feel Like Cannons, Your Punches Feel Like Bug-Bites/

FUckin' DUmmy.. I Don't Got Time To Spit.. I'll Just Change Clips, Fag!/
You've NEver Rode On SHiT, Shorty!.. Like Midgets At Six-Flags!/

now let the votes begin
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vote down

opener T
flow T
personals T
injoyment/creativity tie
closer T

yo I cant lose try not use fag alote man it was too much

overall vote TEC

return the favoure

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100636

peace

will do in a minute tribal...............uppn this.............................................. ......

props ta both on this but a lil 1 sided
opener-tech
closer-tech
flow-tech
structure-tech
multis-lose
punches-tech

vote-tech
repay tha vote yall aight
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100239

OPener: Tech
Closer: Tech
Personals: Tech had better
Punches: Tech
Flow: tie
Win: Tech
I_can't fix ya structure man. Honest voyes here please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100988

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opener-tech
flow-tech
punches-tech
structure-tech
multis-lose
closer-tech
overall - tech



Lose change up ya struct

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blah blah blah...that enough now

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i agree



opener-tech
flow-tech
punches-tech
structure-tech
multis-lose
closer-tech
overall - tech

but i can't poll

no abuse..........that was the most herbish vote you coulda ever made..........i'm gettin it removed...........upppn..........
merry christmas...................................

this battle was tight as hell but icantlose took this one with better multis and better punches

even though tech came hard i feel dat icantlose was a little bit better

vote: icu

your a herb, stop getting cheap votes and get some honest ones for a change. My vote was honest your punches were weak dude, i'm sorry.

uppin
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yea ook^......you'd never beat me.......so i'd stop talkin........and look at the HERBS who vote for other dood.....all my votes are honest.......and from ppl who know what they're talkin about.....
peace

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Im Sorry but i can poll yet.. but if i were able to, here is the breakdown:

opener-tech
flow-tech
punches-tech
structure-tech
multis-ICL
Finisher-tech
overall - tech

Tech had a good verse.. ICL was ok but not good enough to beat tech..props to both.

Peace

flow-T
punches-T
personals-T
style-T
structure- T

that about does it for me. I was suprised by the other kid, he came pretty well. Tech wins this one though.

Read both of these verses and drop an honest vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101199

Oh. sorry, can both of you can please vote honestly on my battle.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100779

It would be much appriciated..Thank You

Peace

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tech took this, a little bit more creativity, little bit smoother of a flow.. was close.. cant lose had some kool lines hes a decent emcee, but i think tech just overpowered u in this bout bro.. vote-tech

Overall Technician took this with better flow, vocab and harder punches.. Both you need to work on wordlay though.
ICL.. Don't use quotations or // or split up each bar like that. It's herbish/ n00bish and messes up your flow.