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Dominator -vs- Alpha
10 Lines MAX
20 Min From Checkin |
checkin in you spit 1st
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check.... no... we spit at same time..... both due by 1:45 PM EST....
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Alpha.... ima BEaTyA, cuz you cant compete with me
Im'a knock ya down to 0-3, then drop ya name in my marquee Your lyrics are behind in times, like the shit put in an attic And that prolly explains, why your still reppin Stillmatic (his avvy pic) Even when you shit a hundred posts, ya still be 'New To RB' Your too elementary, Your game just cant stand with me Your rhymes just dont stick... like watered down glue... That explains why theres only one other cat in your crew Yah your reppin Final Flows.... that shit is very true Cuz this is the last verse.... thatll eva come outta you |
what the hell..... damn no show..... well he checked in so I should still get a win....
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yo im here my bad
check im that type of nigga you talk shit to i blow you up like a beeper// you damn right STILLMATIC cuz i got heaters to burn you like ether//(nas) you right its only one nigga i role wit but bitches role through the place//(house) you keep pics of bitches asses cuz hoes sit on ya face// you rappin that sweet shit im rappin gangsta and violent// you cant beet me you keep loosin like you played for the lions// you aint no dominater nobody neva gon fear ya// the only thang you dominated in flowin is ya self in the mirror// youz a fagget yo punch line tickle what the fuck are you gay// i rip ya eyes out stuff em in yo mouth so you can watch what you say// niggaz think you whack bitch they wanna hear my flo// lyrical soldier? nigga you aint no fuckin G.I. Joe |
Good Battle... I Enjoyed It
My Vote Goes To: Dominator It was close though... Alpha: You lost points with me because you referenced something in his flow.... in the beginning of your flow... which violated the rules of your battle.... Y'all were supposed to spit at the same time. All the same you r shit was good... keep it poppin. Domainator: Not a domination in my book... but a win nonetheless. Please return the favor you guys and give an honest vote on my battles... I'd appreciate it.... I'm trying to get them closed out. |
breakdown...
ok dominator go this..and heres why he had better punches..flow was about even and creativity was about even... even though dom didnt come hard to me..he still came better than alpha.... both need to work on wordplay and harder punchlines.. structure goes to dominator as well alpha the strecthed lines gotta go... anywayz... poll vote=dominator |
My bad forgot the links....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101439 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101456 Let me know Honestly what y'all think... It don't matter if you got a 100votes.... you can Text vote... Just keep it Honest! |
Ya this was close but I think Alpha by a bit
casue his punches were jus wittier and funnier to me Dominator did take the personals but i also liked alphas flow better vote: Alpha (barely) (no hatin) vote on this .......http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101455 |
why do it seem like if you aint a new bee then you are a DICK RIDER
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Stop bitchin man.... you spit wayyyyy late you should just be DQed.... plus you dickryded.... w/e...
Drop some vote and leave your link people... ill hit it up 1 |
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tight verse vote down opener D personals D pounches D closer D overall vote DOMINATER vote for the following battles in my sig peace |
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............ You Have Two Ways Of Voting ......................... For Now Use Them................. & Because Im Nice... Il Demo It For You Kids Alpha.... ima BEaTyA, cuz you cant compete with me Im'a knock ya down to 0-3, then drop ya name in my marquee 7/10 nice puunch though marquee was a half rhyme Your lyrics are behind in times, like the shit put in an attic And that prolly explains, why your still reppin Stillmatic (his avvy pic) 2/10 .. wtf happened there? Even when you shit a hundred posts, ya still be 'New To RB' Your too elementary, Your game just cant stand with me 4/10 ... Falls Asslep* Your rhymes just dont stick... like watered down glue... That explains why theres only one other cat in your crew 3/10 PLAYED TO THE FULLEST>>>>>>>>>>!!!!!!! Yah your reppin Final Flows.... that shit is very true Cuz this is the last verse.... thatll eva come outta you 4/10 eh could have been better 20/50 = Below Average.. im that type of nigga you talk shit to i blow you up like a beeper// you damn right STILLMATIC cuz i got heaters to burn you like ether//(nas) you right its only one nigga i role wit but bitches role through the place//(house) you keep pics of bitches asses cuz hoes sit on ya face// you rappin that sweet shit im rappin gangsta and violent// you cant beet me you keep loosin like you played for the lions// you aint no dominater nobody neva gon fear ya// the only thang you dominated in flowin is ya self in the mirror// youz a fagget yo punch line tickle what the fuck are you gay// i rip ya eyes out stuff em in yo mouth so you can watch what you say// niggaz think you whack bitch they wanna hear my flo// lyrical soldier? nigga you aint no fuckin G.I. Joe 0/50 = Noob Vote = Dominator Conclusion: Alpha Did Not Follow The Rules 10lines Max... |
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Dominator.... Alpha.... ima BEaTyA, cuz you cant compete with me Im'a knock ya down to 0-3, then drop ya name in my marquee ^good wordplay /personal 8/10 Your lyrics are behind in times, like the shit put in an attic And that prolly explains, why your still reppin Stillmatic (his avvy pic) ^ pickin on his avy ok...nb personal there... 6/10 Even when you shit a hundred posts, ya still be 'New To RB' Your too elementary, Your game just cant stand with me ^this was prolly your weakest line......5/10 Your rhymes just dont stick... like watered down glue... That explains why theres only one other cat in your crew ^good punch/personal....7/10 Yah your reppin Final Flows.... that shit is very true Cuz this is the last verse.... thatll eva come outta you ^ good play on words felt it.........8/10 overall........34/50..not your best..... THE ALPHA.... im that type of nigga you talk shit to i blow you up like a beeper// you damn right STILLMATIC cuz i got heaters to burn you like ether//(nas) ^hehe no no no no no no fed....bite....whatever 3/10 you right its only one nigga i role wit but bitches role through the place//(house) you keep pics of bitches asses cuz hoes sit on ya face// ^is that a bad thing i see no diss........2/10...fed again... you rappin that sweet shit im rappin gangsta and violent// you cant beet me you keep loosin like you played for the lions// ^prolly your best line the top was a simplistc setup but .......7/10 you aint no dominater nobody neva gon fear ya// the only thang you dominated in flowin is ya self in the mirror// ^ thats called a missed punch.......3/10 youz a fagget yo punch line tickle what the fuck are you gay// i rip ya eyes out stuff em in yo mouth so you can watch what you say// ^played i'll give you 5 for that shit...5/10 niggaz think you whack bitch they wanna hear my flo// lyrical soldier? nigga you aint no fuckin G.I. Joe ^k you played off his crew thats kool 6/10 overall...26/50... |
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Alpha.... ima BEaTyA, cuz you cant compete with me Im'a knock ya down to 0-3, then drop ya name in my marquee Nice multi's and Overall good opener 8/10 <-Best line Your lyrics are behind in times, like the shit put in an attic And that prolly explains, why your still reppin Stillmatic (his avvy pic) LoL Nice good punch 8/10 Even when you shit a hundred posts, ya still be 'New To RB' Your too elementary, Your game just cant stand with me Decent 5/10 Your rhymes just dont stick... like watered down glue... That explains why theres only one other cat in your crew Funny and decent personal 6/10 Yah your reppin Final Flows.... that shit is very true Cuz this is the last verse.... thatll eva come outta you Ehh... a so-so closer 4/10 Overall: 31/50 im that type of nigga you talk shit to i blow you up like a beeper// you damn right STILLMATIC cuz i got heaters to burn you like ether//(nas) Would have been good, except its feeding 0/10 you right its only one nigga i role wit but bitches role through the place//(house) you keep pics of bitches asses cuz hoes sit on ya face// Again feeding 0/10 you rappin that sweet shit im rappin gangsta and violent// you cant beet me you keep loosin like you played for the lions// Just like newer members sports meta's, its so-so 4/10 you aint no dominater nobody neva gon fear ya// the only thang you dominated in flowin is ya self in the mirror// lol its aight... not great and not good, but enough 4/10 youz a fagget yo punch line tickle what the fuck are you gay// i rip ya eyes out stuff em in yo mouth so you can watch what you say// Same basic idea from Eminem's "Who Knew"..."Oh - you want me to watch my mouth, how? Take my fuckin eyeballs out, and turn em around?" 3/10 niggaz think you whack bitch they wanna hear my flo// lyrical soldier? nigga you aint no fuckin G.I. Joe Terrible Closer...played. 2/10 Overall: 13/50 Dominator With The Merk |
SOrry but i can't edit...could you all hit up my link in my sig and poll or vote.......
Thankz...... |
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opener D personals D pounches D closer D overall vote DOMINATER ain't got no links cuz the one battle i have up..dude ain't spit yet.... |
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