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Crooked-Comical Vrs Eki
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10 Minutes From YOUR Check In Im Checking In Right Now Peace |
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come on Eki son i know u can do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I got ur back but il comment honestly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Hey [Crooked] Comical, You need to check your [Optical],
Because you should have seen that your about to get [Cooked ]Comical I checked out your other battle with that cat [Jay.Q] You got confidence now, just because dick riders [Vote-4-u] Now I will expose my [Battle – tactic], your obsessed with [10-lines] [Pathetic], Time to wake you up , give you a [Shake] Like popcorn before a video , [Unpack and Bake] In this battle you’re the [Side factor] Like Ja Rule next to Steven Segal [supporting Actor] Relax am in the movie [Section] too, Compare me to [Evolution] I [Elevate] with every line, just wait for the [Conclusion] [Implement] a thing about [Lord of the Rings] in to this [verse], [Supplement] this cat, with a [wack-mc –curse] You can see iv had the [Holywood] flow through out this [Out burst] you got murdered [And I spat first], we’ll name this movie [Skill-Not equal], relax , the victim always get a second chance in the [Sequal] |
I Dont Have A Time Limit now ... Your Pre Written Before Check in.. You Should Be DQued .. But I Just dont Have Time Limit Now
AINT NO WAY U TYPED ALL THAT IN 3 MINUTES NICE TRY THOUGH |
i started typing after i did my first fuckn post when it fucked up ......... which owuld have been my first fucken check in................................................ .................................................. ..........dont have a time limit.. am still confident
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Im CROOKED-Comical You Bitch,when You Diss Me I Just Smile /
Your Structure Is CROOKED , Just Like Your Ma'Fuckin Lifestyle/* Belive Its True , Your Through ,Your Poo ,Im Rubber Your Glue/ You Turnin RED Emberassed , Gettin Beatin BLACK And BLUE / Im Beatin Your Ass,Cause You Falsely Thought You Were Sick/ But You Dont Need Me On Your ASS,You Got Reighn On Ya Dick/** Beatin Ya , Defeatin Ya , Im So MuthaFuckin Hot Im Heating Ya/ Wanna Do This Again,Tell Me When And Where I'm Meeting Ya/ Beatin Ya So Quick You Will Have A Very Unusual Crazy Spasm/ Your Such A Fuckin PUSSY,If I Licked U You'd Have An Orgasm/ * His Structure Is Like This xxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx ** ^^ Look Up at what Reighn Posted Before Battle PEACE |
fuck u crooked comical it just got personal now bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
p.s. u cant fucking rap a christmas pressie bitch!!!!!!!! FUCK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Re: Crooked-Comical Vrs Eki
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Hmmmmmm Can You Read Or Are You half Retarded ? You Did 16 Lines Oh Well VOTE YALL |
Aight Lookk
Structure-Crooked Flow-Crooked Horribility-Eki Vocab-Neither Punches-Crooked Multies-Neither Overall vote-Crooked-Comical |
ill take that.........................................thank s for the vote.............................................. .................................................. ..............................1-0 to u
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vote-crooked comical
eki u need to lose the brackets.. u were kool until you came to the line where you rhyme "line" then u went to shake and it killed your flow, crooked came hot n personal with the first 4 bars which laced the win to me.. he was more clever and kept a fluent flow, hit a little harder return the favor vote on this please, no one votes anymore they sleepin http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100990 |
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if i culd vote it'd b on cc....hiz shyt really hit me.....madd good shyt u got goin 4 u man........***************************
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check it .....heres the breakdown...
personals...Crooked that shit about reigh on your dick liked it... punches...yea crooked had some ok shit too simplistic though dog up that shit... flow....definatly crooked i couldn't barely read with all those bracts and dashes and shit.....fix that... opener...really wasn't feelin that first line by eki no hate just thought it was a forced personal... closer...hehe i did like Eki's closer though that was some good shit...you both got skill try get more creative ...one |
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hmm.....ugly battle........but good for the beef sake........
struct - cc punches - cc flow - cc herbish - eki vocab complex - eki opener - tie closer - cc overall - cc...........better all around............both elevate...... gj. |
one more vote people... i got killed .. congracts cc......................................lets close this shit!............................................. .................................................. .....................
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AMEN!!!
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vote : crooked-comical.......good shyt yo**************
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Try this action again! .......... dat wa it sayin......i cant vote |
ALRIGHT MODS PLEASE CLOSE THIS AND GIVE ME MY WIN THATS 5- 0 THANX
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mah votez on cc.....u got dis unda ur foot.....it waz a good battle but crooked-comical hit dis harder..........good lookz 2 both....
yo wen i vote.....it sayz" session invalid or sumshyt".* ************************************ ************************************ ************************************ ************************************ |
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structure- crook( srry eki but u had no structure)
punches - crook flow - crook opener - same closer - crook vote: crooked comical ********************** ********************* |
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what doesnt kill ya makes you stronger.... thanks for the vote.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......
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nice props ta both
opener-crook closer-crook punches-crook flow-crook structure-eki vote-crooked |
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